Abari Custom Weapon

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ThatGuy
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Abari Custom Weapon

Post by ThatGuy » Sun Jul 02, 2023 1:54 am

Application: Abari
Change: I don't really have a mind for balance so I'm hoping you guys will be kind to me. I had to guess on what rank the abilities would be so I don't actually know what the proper price would be. But I'd like confirmation on the pricing and then to purchase this weapon for Abari.
Muramasa, the Demon BladeShow
Muramasa is an allegedly cursed sword that hosts a bloodthirsty demon. In reality however, there is nothing supernatural about it. It was forged to be effective while maintaining a particular appearance. Muramasa is a two and a half foot long katana that is partially covered in a flesh-like substance, giving it the appearance of being organic. The sharp end of the blade is exposed, appearing to be made of bone. The handle is the only thing that resembles a typical katana, being bound in red cloth. Finally, the organic portions of the blade are fitted with life-like veins that carry the user's blood.

Strength: 36
Sea of BloodShow
Muramasa is capable of replicating its wielder's blood as it flows from the blade like a waterfall. The blade generates [Control] gallons of the user's blood each post. This ability can be freely activated and deactivated by the wielder.
Demon's BiteShow
Any cut made by this blade while the user's blood is on it enters the opponent's system. This blood is infused with the user's chakra, allowing for follow up Chiton techniques.
3 (Sword)
18 (36 Strength)
16 (Demon's Bite) -I'm comparing this to Venipuncture so 4x4
40 (Sea of Blood) -No idea what rank this would be. I'm guessing B-Rank so 8x5
=77 total Ryo

Oh and also I believe the [Fuuton] and [Mist Style] concentrations were not added to his sheet from the previous mod. I can nocode the app in a spoiler if you guys want.

Payment: 77 Ryo
Last edited by ThatGuy on Thu Jul 06, 2023 11:59 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Itotsuki, Abari Kirigakure Chuunin [color=#80a0ff]
Akio B-rank Other Countries [color=#ee4a2d]
Nara, Daisuke D-Rank Missing nin [color=#E4EC32]
Kisama, Yutaka Heart Empire Akibushi [color=#BF0000]
Akari, Touji Iwagakure Genin [color=#C0C0C0]
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Abari Custom Weapon

Post by Niro » Thu Jul 06, 2023 9:48 pm

You don't need the -3 CP on the first jutsu, it'd just cost chakra like other special weapons. I'd also make the generation toggleable if anything

Otherwise looks fine
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Abari Custom Weapon

Post by ThatGuy » Fri Jul 07, 2023 12:00 am

Alright updated the jutsu to be toggleable and removed the -3. I also felt like the second ability was a little bit vague so I added that follow up techniques can be used (just like in the Venipuncture description) just so there's no confusion about what I was intending.
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Itotsuki, Abari Kirigakure Chuunin [color=#80a0ff]
Akio B-rank Other Countries [color=#ee4a2d]
Nara, Daisuke D-Rank Missing nin [color=#E4EC32]
Kisama, Yutaka Heart Empire Akibushi [color=#BF0000]
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Abari Custom Weapon

Post by Niro » Fri Jul 07, 2023 11:31 am

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Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
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Abari Custom Weapon

Post by Sia » Mon Jul 10, 2023 10:00 pm

accepted
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