Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro

Growing up in Ryu, center of dragon country, at a Ishiguro settlement. He was brought to mainland around the age of 7

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Mon Oct 30, 2023 11:21 pm

Ishiguro, Hayai Ishinokyōso
Hayai of Lightning. Ha

["Noise is a distraction, and the food of the ears; just like objects to the eye's, and flavor to the tongue; choose what distracts you, and how these distraction's could affect the environment, and never give up!"]

General Information Age: 8
Gender: Male
Height: 5'3
Weight: 70 lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Silver eyes, silver hair. Has a baby face, and has horizontal oval like eyes. His head is rather round, and his nose is rather pointy going outwards.
  • Body: Skinny and slim, however has a good muscle for his clan and looks bulkier than most. Not much body fat.
  • Notable Features: His hair color and eyes. ----
Clothing/Accessories: The boy is usually adorning a gi outfit to help preserve during cold nights. The gi jacket has pockets on each side towards the bottom left and right corners. The pants as well, and his undershirt is also silver.
Picture:

Personality: Rather open and communicative as well as evolving. He is rather prone to embark in adventures, whether in his head or out. The young beau is a amphivert, and really becomes one with the environment he is in. Over the last four years he has become more civilized, but still craves freedom in a sense as he grew up in the wild, for a lack of a better term. Extremely curious and asks questions a lot. He is a bit of a sponge, and takes pleasure in hunting for food by himself instead of buying from a market. As time progressed, the fact he had an absent father in his life really continues to plague him till this day. Accustomed to being the centre of attraction, he often becomes the forefront of events as he attempts to become the attraction. He is extremely loyal and is a practioner of the Thunder Dragon's core beliefs.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams: To unite dragon country with lightning country.
  • Fears: Not ever returning back to Dragon Country.
  • Combat Mentality: More of a close quarters type of guy and Tactician. He would rather catch someone off guard through stealth means to put an end to the problem, however also enjoys the adventure of a battle and depending on the situations at hand will act differently.
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Battle Information Village: Kumogakure no Sato.
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 7
  • Endurance: 7
  • Control: 10
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 10
  • Willpower: 7
  • Power Rank: D
Equipment: 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 5 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang.
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization: CQC
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities



Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[
Ishiguro:
Denjiton
Born to the Ishiguro clan, this user is able to utilize Disruption Release, a fusion composed of Raiton and Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Denjiton. Denjiton has a cancelling effect.
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Denjiton is used to cancel the effects of chakra, namely jutsu. Denjiton functions by creating areas where chakra is weakened and at higher levels outright canceled. When attempting to Cancel an opponents jutsu, the Strength of the Denjiton jutsu and the Control of the opponents jutsu are taken into account. If the Strength of the Denjiton jutsu is greater than the Control of the opponents jutsu, the jutsu will Cancel. The Control of the opponents jutsu is assumed to be equal to the jutsus rank unless there is a prerequisite on the jutsu for another Control amount which is then used, or if the jutsu is continuously channeled the Control used is the users actual Control. Jutsu and people who are Canceled dissipate into energy or become inert in the case of jutsu while people affected are unable to use chakra but are otherwise unharmed. Denjiton is incredibly difficult to master, takes large amount of control normally and for continuous jutsu larger amounts of chakra than usual per jutsu rank, but has proven itself to be an extremely dangerous element that an completely alter the flow of battle.
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Taijutsu[
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

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Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
*Denjiton • Booby Trap
D-rank Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, focusing chakra on a 2mx2m area within 5m of their body. Anyone who steps on that area will have a surge of Denjiton move through them, causing them to lose [3 control] to the strength of their jutsu if they have [control] stat below the user and making jutsu harder to control. This lasts for the next 3 posts.

*Denjiton • Weaken
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, then thrust their hands forward, creating a screen of chakra 3m x 3m in size anywhere within 5m in front of them. Any sources of chakra that pass through the screen will lose 3 strength.

*Denjiton • Denjiton Gauntlets
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, creating gauntlets of denjiton chakra around their hands and forearms. The user can use their arms as shields, reducing the effect of jutsu they come in contact with (through the gauntlets) by [control/5]. This allows them to lessen the burns from katon jutsu, or easier to break out of suiton jutsu that capture them.


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[Thunder Dragon's Dance• ]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
A stance designed to keep the user on there toes but also doing series of dance like moves to hit the enemy. The evading and dodging go hand in hand and a prerequisite is perception and cqc. The user has both feet on the floor while the front foot faces the enemy, and the back foot faces east. The hands go up and like palms seek to stop or parry punches. The stance is also designed to immediately take a step back when a motion or movement happens; or side step. The user utilizes a similar stance except they incorporate more spins, and acrobatics. Feints, and the like as well. The user is required to have acrobatics.

[Thunder Dragon's Dance• Thrusting Elbow ]
D-Ranked Taijutsu.
The user performs a series of dances, and uses his palms, forearms, shins, knees and elbows in a series of attacks. The first is a palm strike that is used with the lead hand, and then followed by a spinning elbow.




GenjutsuShow
Place Genjutsu in here

History
Historical AccountsShow

The young male grew up in Ryu, Dragon Country, the center spot for all the locals greater gatherings. At the age of 2 he began walking, and was surrounded by his parents who were here doing business and sending income back to Lightning Empire. The young lad began working at the lumber mill by the age of 4 and was helping with the business.

When he was four years old, he stumbled across the wild and came across what seemed like a dragon within a cave closer towards the coast, west of Ryu. He was on an expedition and his family purchased a small piece of land towards the coast. Unbeknownst to them, a cave was nearby with a dragon there. The dragon was about 30 years old he said, but they used the caves as a home. After some time, the dragon began teaching him lessons in dragon Taijutsu, and taught him a couple dragon dances and poses. He was also taught to having a capability to change and

Over the next few years he mastered the art of the dragon dances he was taught, and while that happened his mother also bestowed upon him Ishiguro clan techniques. At the age of 5 he went in his first hunt when he was hungry, and after that only did so to eat. Whenever he was hungry he would be okay with fruits or vegetables. At 6 he and his mother were sent back to Lightning Empire due to her infidelity.



On the journey back, he was faced with another dragon creature that attempted to attack the boat, but the creature who taught Hayai was swift in movement and aided in the escape. The dragon who taught him was a thunder dragon.

They Arrived before the age of 7. As they headed back to his home of birth, he was a little bit on edge as he didn't think he would fit in too much.

At the age of 8 he began focusing more on ironing out his abilities he currently had, and did not pay heed to other things.


Growing up he was involved in lots of fist fights, rock fights, and what have you because of his mother's infidelity. He also was extremely sensitive to mom jokes or anything involving mother's. However, his mother also taught him to not hit woman.


Growing up with the dragon over the course of the years he was there he intook lots of his teachings and even began to be interested in his appearance and the like, to the point that he began praying when he was 8 to the Thunder dragon, as the dragon was a beast that didn't speak with echo in the voice of one's box, but the voice in one's mind.


Username: Mugen
Organization Equipment: 0/0
Organization Jutsu: 0/0
Ryo: 0/50
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Last edited by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro on Sat Jan 13, 2024 5:31 pm, edited 12 times in total.

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Post by Texas » Tue Nov 07, 2023 10:27 am

Hey Mugen! A few minor things to fix on this app:

Stat trainings would actually still be 0/75.

Your Affinity/Specialization should be a concentration. So for example since you Ryutaijutsu utilizes both CQC and Perception, one of those could be beneficial to you!

I noticed you added 5 more kunai which is an extra Ryo. So at this point, based on stats + Jutsu + eq, you are 3 ryo over the amount given to characters at startup (53/50)

Rank says D and power level is empty. Rank would be Genin and power level would be D.

Combat Mentality and Notable features are empty.. If you don't mind just putting a couple of sentences in there to help describe your char a little more.

Let me know if you have any questions!
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Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Tue Nov 14, 2023 3:57 pm

On it

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Tue Nov 14, 2023 4:12 pm

Done

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Post by Kanade » Tue Nov 14, 2023 8:12 pm

Hey there Mugen! Your Ishiguro clan can just be a concentration and doesn't have to take up an ability slot OR you can do the prodigy ability and get Ishiguro + (x) concentration in that ability slot. If you don't want to use your ability you don't have to.

you can only have one affinity/specialization, so choose lightning, wind OR CQC
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Tue Nov 14, 2023 11:10 pm

Done

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Post by Kanade » Wed Nov 15, 2023 12:34 pm

1/2
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Iwagakure Jounin: Kanade Enkouten
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Post by Valkier » Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:20 am

Hi,
Please can you add a link your character's surname to the Ishiguro clan page
You've slightly overspent your startup ryo here - by purchasing 6 extra stats and spending 28ryo on jutsu, your total spend is 52 ryo. D-rank characters unfortunately only start with 50, so a jutsu or a stat point will need to be dropped.
Please remove the asterisks (*) from your custom taijutsu. The asterisks only mark archived techniques.
[Thrusting Elbow] should be a taijutsu maneouvre - I think you just missed the word in the "D-rank Taijutsu ___" description
[[Lightning Dragon's Dance• II] Please give this technique it's own full description rather than just referencing the previous one (because presumably when you use it in a topic, only the one jutsu will be shown and leave people confused since it doesn't itself have all the needed details)

I have a few minor reservations about an Ishiguro abandoning her village to run off (for six years!), then coming back later with a child Hayai, and neither of them facing any repurcussions. I'd like to see some effect of that included in his history -- was he accepted by the clan? why? what happened to his mother for her actions? Why did she leave in the first place? I think the general gist of the history is okay, it's allowed, but it could benefit from the added detail where possible please.
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Nov 17, 2023 7:00 pm

Is there anything against having a 6 or 7 year old in Kumogakure as a Genin?

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Nov 17, 2023 7:02 pm

And could both descriptions be ok within one D rank maneuver

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Nov 17, 2023 8:34 pm

I mean stance

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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Nov 19, 2023 2:14 pm

I believe the minimum age for a kumo genin is 8

Other changes still pending, suggested change is fine yeah
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Tue Nov 21, 2023 5:45 pm

Thanks

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Post by Kabu » Fri Nov 24, 2023 11:16 pm

Can you go into some detail in his history on what kind of treatment he and his mother received upon returning to Kumo? You're almost there but that extra detail would be helpful to have
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Dec 08, 2023 10:01 am

Where are you at on this?
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Post by Valkier » Mon Jan 01, 2024 9:58 am

No news on this and the poster has been inactive since Nov 27th, so I'll deny it for now. But Mugen if you come back and want to continue this please let a staff member know and it can be moved back for you later.
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Jan 12, 2024 7:59 pm

Can you place Back into the reg please?

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Post by Valkier » Sat Jan 13, 2024 1:15 pm

Moved back to regs
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Sat Jan 13, 2024 5:24 pm

Done. Thank you so much

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Tue Jan 16, 2024 8:30 pm

Edited

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Post by Kabu » Sat Jan 20, 2024 1:57 pm

1/2
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Post by Niro » Sat Jan 20, 2024 2:15 pm

2/2
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