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Post by Tsedas » Tue Jan 30, 2024 7:14 pm

Application: Takamori Saigo
Change:
Add the Following Concentrations to Saigo's Ninjutsu Concentrations:
[quote=Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling]
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.[/quote]
[quote=Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu][color=#444F51][b]Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.[/quote]
[quote=Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu][color=#444F51][b]Charge& Augment Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Charge & Augment Classification. Charge Fuuinjutsu are used to create jutsu-like effects using seals. Augment Fuuinjutsu are used to enhance or limit the power of whatever they are placed on.[/quote]


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FuutonShow
D RankShow
*Fuuton • Enhanced Launch
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the user gathers wind around their feet. Then, the user will use the wind to blast them from the ground, enabling them to leap into the air an extra 10 meters at [Control] speed. The Fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*Fuuton • Wind Skating
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their ability to translate force (-3 Strength). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*Fuuton • Redirection
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user covers a projectile they are holding in fuuton empowered wind. Then, when the weapon has been thrown as normal, the user is able to change it's direction by up to 90 degrees once with no drop in momentum on the projectiles part. This technique only lasts one post.

Fuuton • Crescent Winds
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will slam his hands together. Sliding them away from one another, he will create a crescent shaped blade of wind that launches outward from his hands growing up to 3 meters wide and travels with [Control] Strength/Speed to a distance of 15 meters.

Fuuton • Bubble Breathing
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will create a bubble of Fuuton around his mouth and nose that generate breathable air in inhospitable environments. This acts as a weak shield against particulates and liquids, allowing him to swim under water or move through gas without having to hold his breath. This technique can be easily broken with 5 Strength but lasts for 10 posts unless fed more chakra.
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*Fuuton • Wind Clone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their fuuton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/4] posts.

*Fuuton • Flying Swallow
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user coats their weapon in a vortex of wind. This extends the weapon's range by 1m while not adding anything to its weight for 5 posts. It also causes the weapon to gain an edge as sharp as your average sword. This also applies the fuuton passive with [Control] Strength on contact with an opponent.

Fuuton • Slipstream
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, Saigo will envelope his fist in Fuuton chakra. From there Saigo will throw a punch in the direction of his choosing. The Fuuton will extend from his fist like a thing stream of chakra and drill through things in it's path with [Control] Strength/Speed up to 30 meters. Upon reaching it's limit, the Jutsu will expand outward at an alarming rapid rate to shred anything around it or that it has pierced through, expanding up to 10 meters around.

Fuuton • Thunderclap
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, Saigo will slap his hands together while gathering Fuuton chakra onto his palms. After slapping his hands together, they will release a burst of Fuuton outward up to 30 meters out with a resounding clap like thunder. This burst impacts and travels with [Control] Strength/Speed and applies the Fuuton passive like shrapnel across any surface it touches. This technique moves out in a semi-circle in front of Saigo.

Fuuton • Secret Art of Air Walking
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, Saigo can utilize this technique by focusing Fuuton chakra on the bottom of his feet. This allows him to press against the air and stand on it, allowing him to move at [Speed]/2 while walking through the air in such a fashion. He can also stand upon the air and hover in place while doing so. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.
Payment:
D - 5 - 20 Ryo
C - 5 - 30 Ryo
Total: 50 Ryo
Last edited by Tsedas on Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:11 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by Tsedas » Tue Jan 30, 2024 7:14 pm

Fuuton NocodeShow
[spoiler=Fuuton][spoiler=D Rank]
*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Enhanced Launch[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the user gathers wind around their feet. Then, the user will use the wind to blast them from the ground, enabling them to leap into the air an extra 10 meters at [Control] speed. The Fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Wind Skating[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their ability to translate force (-3 Strength). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Redirection[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user covers a projectile they are holding in fuuton empowered wind. Then, when the weapon has been thrown as normal, the user is able to change it's direction by up to 90 degrees once with no drop in momentum on the projectiles part. This technique only lasts one post.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Crescent Winds[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will slam his hands together. Sliding them away from one another, he will create a crescent shaped blade of wind that launches outward from his hands growing up to 3 meters wide and travels with [Control] Strength/Speed to a distance of 15 meters.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Bubble Breathing[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will create a bubble of Fuuton around his mouth and nose that generate breathable air in inhospitable environments. This acts as a weak shield against particulates and liquids, allowing him to swim under water or move through gas without having to hold his breath. This technique can be easily broken with 5 Strength but lasts for 10 posts unless fed more chakra.
[/spoiler][spoiler=C Rank]
*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Wind Clone[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their fuuton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/4] posts.

*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Flying Swallow[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user coats their weapon in a vortex of wind. This extends the weapon's range by 1m while not adding anything to its weight for 5 posts. It also causes the weapon to gain an edge as sharp as your average sword. This also applies the fuuton passive with [Control] Strength on contact with an opponent.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Slipstream[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, Saigo will envelope his fist in Fuuton chakra. From there Saigo will throw a punch in the direction of his choosing. The Fuuton will extend from his fist like a thing stream of chakra and drill through things in it's path with [Control] Strength/Speed up to 30 meters. Upon reaching it's limit, the Jutsu will expand outward at an alarming rapid rate to shred anything around it or that it has pierced through, expanding up to 10 meters around.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Thunderclap[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, Saigo will slap his hands together while gathering Fuuton chakra onto his palms. After slapping his hands together, they will release a burst of Fuuton outward up to 30 meters out with a resounding clap like thunder. This burst impacts and travels with [Control] Strength/Speed and applies the Fuuton passive like shrapnel across any surface it touches. This technique moves out in a semi-circle in front of Saigo.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Secret Art of Air Walking[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, Saigo can utilize this technique by focusing Fuuton chakra on the bottom of his feet. This allows him to press against the air and stand on it, allowing him to move at [Speed]/2 while walking through the air in such a fashion. He can also stand upon the air and hover in place while doing so. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.
[/spoiler][/spoiler]
Last edited by Tsedas on Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:11 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Post by Trusted Grader » Tue Jan 30, 2024 7:25 pm

1/2

Edit: I don't know if I'm allowed but it looks solid.
Last edited by Trusted Grader on Tue Jan 30, 2024 7:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Kanade » Thu Feb 01, 2024 7:22 am

Fuuton • Thunderclap《- is this conical or a semicircle?

Fuuton • Secret Art of Air Walking 《- flying is restricted to A rank, this seems like flying adjacent, probably should be B rank.
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Post by Tsedas » Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:12 pm

Edited thunderclap and Air Walking is a hover style technique. This is why Saigo moves at half speed, and hover techs are C rank minimum. If it needs adjusting then I will need to know how it needs adjusting.

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Post by Kanade » Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:17 pm

1/2 then, stop slapping me
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Post by Niro » Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:26 pm

2/2
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