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AKIMICHI CHOUDAI



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General Information Age: 32
Gender: Male
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 280 Lbs.
Physical Features: Choudai has a loose posture and a persistent cough that seemingly never goes away. Despite his bigger form, he's a decently handsome guy. His thick brows sit atop brown eyes with hints of amber in them. His skin is quite tough and tan and Choudai looks at least a decade older than he actually is. He generally holds a loose posture.
  • Face/head: Due to the stress Choudai's metabolism puts on his body, his hair went snow-white at an early age. He wears a two-block style cut with a long curly top. Additionally, he has dark saggy patches under his eyes. Choudai has a wide-face and large ears. Generally, he wears his beard in a scruffy style, grown slightly past stubble length.
  • Body: ] As an Akimichi, Choudai has a larger-than-life presence clocking in well over the height of most men and having broad, large features. Like most Akimichi he carries extra weight, however due to his unique mutations his body has a lower fat percentage than most Akimichi, Choudai appearing more muscular and bulky.
  • Notable Features: Beyond his cough, Choudai is very clammy and feels cold to the touch, despite often sweating and seeming hot. Surprisingly, his sweat has a sweet, pleasurable odor like cherry blossoms.
Clothing/Accessories: Choudai wears all the typical Konohagakure jounin gear with the addition of a long red coat with a white feathered hood.
Personality:
  • General: Low-self confidence/worth, clumsy, forgetful
  • Hopes/Dreams: ??? Open a Takoyaki stand
  • Fears: Making mistakes, dealing with conflict
  • Combat Mentality: Choudai first and foremost likes to protect others- his patients. He'll always prioritize protecting and supporting his allies above all else.

Battle Information Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Jounin

Stats: (0/50)
  • Chakra Pool: 35
  • Endurance: 30 (35 - 5)
  • Control: 20
  • Strength: 35
  • Speed: 25
  • Willpower: 25
Equipment: 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 6 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang

Companions: (0/1)
Affinity: Doton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Akimichi Bloodline
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Expansion
Akimichi have an innate ability to expand their body at will. This is a clan ability they pass down to generation and generation. They can expand their limbs longer or larger depending on the need. This can be akin to a summons gigantism, however this can be targeted specifically to a limb or gigantism itself at the higher levels. This also effects the weight of their body parts making them heavier the larger they get. The expansion size and levels that can be achieved are based on their Endurance level, however even if a user has Arms & Legs & Torso, it does not mean they can expand their whole body for gigantism. It also takes up an ability slot.
Endurance Table
EnduranceExpansion Size AchievedParts that can be expanded
1-9 EnduranceExpansion up to 3 metersHands & Feet
10-19 EnduranceExpansion up to 10 metersArms & Legs
20-29 EnduranceExpansion up to 20 metersTorso
30-39 EnduranceExpansion up to 30 MetersFull Body Expansion (Gigantism)
Endurance 40-50Expansion up to 40 meters N/A
Super SweatChoudai's body metabolizes chakra at six-times the rate of other Akimichi. As a result, his body is always secreting chakra through his bodily fluids (-5 Endurance) such as his saliva and sweat. These secretions interesting have the effect of inducing regeneration (scaled off of [Endurance] upon contacting organics.
Third AbilityN/A
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Advanced Channeling], [Doton], [Sensor]
Taijutsu[Perception], [Deft Hands], [Close-Quarters Combat], [Rigid Body Structure]
GenjutsuN/A

Jutsu
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Konoha no Senken • Ukemi
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Before practitioners of Konoha no Senken can learn to fight, they must first learn to seamlessly "fall", training their mat work until it is second-nature. This practitioner has successfully completed such training and can perform basic Ukemi: they may move into a roll, forwards, backwards or sideways from any position, allowing them to roll out of harm's way or negate some impact damage when falling or being slammed. Impacts from a distance of ([Enudrance] x 2) meter can be completely negated. Anything more is up to the situation.
Taijutsu: Hirogeru StyleShow
Hirogeru • Calloused Skin
D-Rank Discipline Maneuver
Choudai has trained and conditioned his skin to be calloused and tough- giving it a natural strength equal to his [Strength] stat/2.

Hirogeru • Paa
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Choudai will put his hands together then expand them out suddenly before performing an overhead cleaving, attempting to flatten a person nearby against the ground. The added weight and momentum causes those resisting this to suffer a -1 de-buff against their strength check.

~Hirogeru • Mochi Clap
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The Akimichi will expand their hands before clapping in-front of themselves smashing the opponent between the palms of their large hands. This can be useful to trap a target or disorientate them with the powerful strike.

Hirogeru • Muscle Conditioning
C-Rank Discipline Maneuver
Prerequisite: [Perception]
Choudai has trained and conditioned his muscles to tense at the correct moments before being struck. This has become a second nature to him, and effectively allows him to mitigate -3 strength damage from incoming attacks.

~Hirogeru • Go-Go Gadget Jump
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
An Akimichi will use their expansion to expand their legs and feet before immediately returning them to normal size using the extension to jump larger than normal gap due to their expanded legs and feet.

~Hirogeru • Leaf Tornado
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
An Akimichi will expand their arms and hands before windmilling stirring up powerful gusts of wind capable of knocking people over, and if they get caught in the whirlwind of hands and arms its capable of catching them in the torrent getting slapped around.

~Hirogeru • Human Boulder
B-Rank Nin-Taijutsu Stance
The Akimichi will expand their torso turning themselves into the size of a large boulder. After tucking their limbs and head inside of their enlarged torso they then apply chakra rotating themselves extremely fast turning themselves into a rotating sphere of doom that strikes at [Control] Strength, and moves at a speed equal to [Control]
DotonShow
*Doton • Binding Formation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength

*Doton • Dirt Cloud
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter ball of loose dirt in front of them, launching it off up to 10 meters away at [Control] strength and speed. Upon impact the ball of loose dirt breaks apart forming a vision-impairing cloud of dirt with a 5 meter radius.

*Doton • Wall
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a solid stone wall up to 5 meters away from them at [Control] speed. The wall has [Control] strength and is 3x3x1 meters large.

Doton • Grenade
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals Choudai will form a 3x3 meter bundle of rocks. Any time within the next 4 posts if activated via kai, the bundle will explode at [Control] strength/speed spewing rock shrapnel in a 7m radius.

*Doton • Tremors
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals and holding the last one, the user will stomp their foot on the ground, releasing their chakra in it and causing it to tremor violently for one post. The tremors radiate out from the user in a 25 meter radius, knocking down anyone standing on the ground without a stability taijutsu technique of a rank equal to [Control]. Lasts as long as the last seal is held, for up to 3 posts.

*Doton • Landmine
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will tap their foot on the ground charging a 25 meter radius around their foot with explosive chakra. This is armed at [Control] speed. For the next three posts if anyone other than the user steps on the area it will explode with at a [Control] Strength explosion.

Doton • Armadillo
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling into his body Choudai will form a thin layer of segmented stone around either his whole body or a part of it at [Control] strength/speed, up to a limit of 30m expansions. The segments are made such that they can expand and collapse.

Doton • Great Wall of Choudai
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals Choudai will tap his foot on the ground raising an earthen wall up at [Control] strength/speed. The wall is 35x20x3m in size and can be created anywhere within 30m of Choudai.
Doton Empathy SensoryShow
*[Sensory Style • Approaching Tremor]
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and place their hands to the ground. Releasing waves of chakra out of their hands. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 50 meters on the ground. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke an image in the users head of the immediate area around them, anything touching the ground and anything up to 5 meters underground. These are still images, not moving images, but can give the user a good idea of what is happening if they aren’t able to see otherwise.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Akimichi Choudai was born into the esteemed Akimichi clan, known for their mastery of taijutsu and their unique ability to manipulate expand their bodies. He was raised in the village hidden in the leaves, Konohagakure. Choudai's parents, Akimichi Daichi and Akimichi Sumire, were both respected members of the clan, instilling in him a strong sense of duty and pride in his heritage from a young age.

From his earliest years, Choudai demonstrated a natural talent for combat and a deep understanding of the Akimichi clan's techniques. Under the guidance of his parents and other clan elders, he honed his skills in taijutsu and mastered the clan's signature techniques, such as the "Partial Multi-Size Technique" and the "Human Bullet Tank." He however seemed to be a little more frail and less bulky than other Akimichi, causing concern for his parents.


Never the less, at the age of twelve, Choudai was selected to become a genin after passing the Konohagakure academy and was placed on a team under the leadership of a seasoned Sarutobi jonin sensei. Alongside his teammates, a Nara and a Yamanaka, he embarked on various missions to hone his skills and prove his worth as a ninja of the leaf village. During this time, he developed strong bonds with his teammates and earned a reputation for his unwavering determination and loyalty. It was during this time that he also realized his sweat could heal his comrades, and in pre-peration for the Chuunin exams decided to focus on being his teams medic & support shinobi.

After years of rigorous training and countless missions, Choudai's skills caught the attention of the village elders. At the age of sixteen, he successfully passed the Chuunin Exams, showcasing his tactical acumen and combat prowess. His promotion to Chuunin marked a significant milestone in his ninja career, earning him recognition as a capable leader and strategist within the village

As a Chuunin, Choudai continued to distinguish himself through his exemplary performance on missions and his dedication to the village. His leadership abilities and combat skills continued to evolve, earning him the respect of his peers and superiors alike. At the age of twenty-three, he was promoted to the rank of Jounin, a testament to his years of hard work and dedication to the village hidden in the leaves. All in all he had been recorded having saved the lives of over 400 shinobi by the time of his promotion.

In his late twenties and during the Great War Choudai was stationed in Konoha General Hospital, much to his chagrin as he thought himself more of a combat medic. He assisted with surgery and several other medical roles while rotating between wall guard.

On the day when Konohagakure fell to Kirigakure, Choudai fought valiantly and was famed for keeping his entire squad in good health enough to retreat to the mountains above the Hokage monument and wait out enemy forces until the reinforcements from Kumogakure and the Konohagakure main fleet arrived.
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Post by Taiga » Thu Feb 01, 2024 12:54 pm

155 Points
- 60 (15 stats)
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95
Doton D x 4 (16)
Doton C x 3 (18)
Doton B x 1 (8)
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53
Tai D X 3 (12)
Tai C x 3 (18)
Tai B X 1 (8)

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Empathy C x 1 (6)

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9
-4 Ukemi D-Rank Tai
-5 1 exploding tag
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0
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Post by Kanade » Thu Feb 01, 2024 2:54 pm

Konoha no Senken • Ukemi

- hesitant to even 1/2 a stance that negates all damage from being "slammed" up to 100m away. It reads like if you get slammed by a rock from 100m off you take no damage, and seems like if you're in this stance you would take no bludgeoning damage whatsoever from any sort of impact.

Hirogeru • Paa

-this reads like an active debuff, but is a buff instead? If it is a buff it needs to follow the stat buffing rules.

Hirogeru • Muscle Conditioning

- again hesitant to approve anything like this, negation of damage to this degree seems like you would be taking all hits at -50 strength.

Doton • Grenade
- from my understanding explosions are C rank, and the explosion would need a radius.
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Post by Niro » Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:05 pm

What's the rate for rapid regeneration compared to normal regeneration?
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Post by Taiga » Thu Feb 01, 2024 9:02 pm

Niro:
Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:05 pm
What's the rate for rapid regeneration compared to normal regeneration?
Sorry, just a superlative. Removed rapid, also mentioned it's Endurance based.
Kanade:
Thu Feb 01, 2024 2:54 pm
Konoha no Senken • Ukemi

- hesitant to even 1/2 a stance that negates all damage from being "slammed" up to 100m away. It reads like if you get slammed by a rock from 100m off you take no damage, and seems like if you're in this stance you would take no bludgeoning damage whatsoever from any sort of impact.
Yes that's exactly what it does and it's been approved multiple times on multiple characters. It doesn't negate damage from physically being hit, but it does mean he can break his fall such that he wouldn't take a double fall damage.

At damage negation- I don't see the problem with someone with 50 strength, moving their body to negate something at 50 strength.... that's literally just the strength stat and how it already functions.

Kanade:
Thu Feb 01, 2024 2:54 pm
Doton • Grenade
- from my understanding explosions are C rank, and the explosion would need a radius.
There's a million D-Rank explosives in the archives and on characters- this is the first I've ever heard of a C-Rank minimum rule. Added a radius though for sure!


Fixed the rest.
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Post by Niro » Sun Feb 04, 2024 3:00 pm

Ability mentions -CP but you have it actually doing -End on the stats block

Calloused Skin <-Hardening skin to [str] str is an A-rank tai afaik

Muscle Conditioning <-you'd be capped to -3 str following effective debuff rules
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Post by Taiga » Mon Feb 05, 2024 9:31 am

Niro:
Sun Feb 04, 2024 3:00 pm
Ability mentions -CP but you have it actually doing -End on the stats block

Calloused Skin <-Hardening skin to [str] str is an A-rank tai afaik

Muscle Conditioning <-you'd be capped to -3 str following effective debuff rules
> Calloused Skin <-Hardening skin to [str] str is an A-rank tai afaik

I nerfed it to Strength/2 to see


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