Pre-war mod for Saigo

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Pre-war mod for Saigo

Post by Tsedas » Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:53 pm

Application: Takamori Saigo
Change:

Add the following to the Fuuton Spoiler:
FuutonShow
B RankShow
*Fuuton • Vortex Pillar
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user stirs a great amount of wind around their person. A tornado with a 20m radius will form around them at [Control] Speed, extending up to 40m in the air. This wall of wind is perfect for defense or trapping an opponent in an enclosed area. Anything that tries to pass through the winds will be sliced viciously with [Control] Strength blades of wind as sharp as katana blades. This technique lasts for 4 posts, unless released earlier.
A RankShow
*Fuuton • Gentle Caress of Suffocation
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Once the user has performed the required hand seals, it is recommended that they take a deep breath. This is because their fuuton chakra will visibly surge outward to cover an area of 65m in all directions around their person. While this does not create a vacuum or remove all the air, it does push specifically all of the oxygen out of the area and keeps it that way for 4 posts, though the duration can be extended if the final hand seal is held. Note that extending the duration will incur additional chakra costs. This technique causes all who remain within this area to lose 5 Endurance per post that they do not escape it. If they reach 0 Endurance, they will black out. The Endurance regenerates at a rate of 5 per post that they are outside of this technique's effect.

Fuuton • Pulse of Wind
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will release a burst of chakra up to 100 meters out in all directions. This will fill the air within that zone with his chakra and make it visibly glow with a light green as if filled with glitter. This technique is a set up technique. It does nothing but let him create a point of origin for his techniques that would normally emanate from him. This chakra will linger in the air for 10 posts or until a technique with higher control than Saigo's pushes the Fuuton infused air away.
S RankShow
Fuuton • Shinigami's Presence
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *Fuuton • Gentle Caress of Suffocation
A more dangerous form of the technique it is based on, Saigo will initiate this technique with a series of hand seals. After completing the last hand seal, Fuuton chakra will push all the air out of the area up to 160 meters in all directions. This will suck the air out of lungs, causing people to last [Endurance]/10 posts before blacking out from the lack of oxygen.

Fuuton • Uzumaki
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will indicate a point he can see or that contains his chakra within 160 meters. Upon selecting a spot, Fuuton chakra will begin spinning and churning like a whorl of razor blades while expanding with [Control] Speed. As it expands, it will eviscerate anything that comes in contact with it or is caught within it with [Control] Strength. This technique can expand to be up to 100 meters in size. Upon creation and expansion, this technique will create high speed winds that push out from it, effectively creating a spherical tornado of vibrant green chakra for the next 5 posts(Dealing Damage each post something or someone is in contact with it).
Payment:
B - 1 - 8 Ryo
A - 2 - 20 Ryo
S - 2 - 24 Ryo
Total: 52 Ryo
Last edited by Tsedas on Sun Feb 04, 2024 7:00 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Takamori Saigo - Konohagakure Banin - [color=#93DDDB]
Takamori Jubei - Konohagakure Genin - [color=#8B658B]
Enkouten Hisone - Iwagakure Special Jounin - [color=#E87511]
Ryousei Genkaku - Sungakure Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Retired CharactersShow
Akira - Kirigakure - Special Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Ishikawa Hanzo - Sunagakure Genin - Jinch - [color=navajowhite]
Tenjirou Shigekuni - Sunagakure Chuunin - [color=fuchsia]
Itazura Bokun - Sunagakure B-Rank MN - [color=#00C1B5]
Kutsuzawa Retsu - Iwagakure Sp Jounin - [color=#EF6B00]
Shiimu Mirai - Kirigakure Bannin - [color=navajowhite]
Kojima Nao - Kumogakure -Genin - [color=#A0522D]
Matsudaira Tokoha - Sunagakure - Jounin - [color=#ED2939]
Ishiguro Nui - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=brown]
Awai Mariko - Konohagakure Chuunin - [color=#B2397F]
Jinrai Setsuko - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=#D60270]
Toukai Mukade - Kirigakure Chuunin - [color=#8B7765]

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Pre-war mod for Saigo

Post by Tsedas » Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:54 pm

Fuuton nocodeShow
[spoiler=B Rank]
*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Vortex Pillar[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user stirs a great amount of wind around their person. A tornado with a 20m radius will form around them at [Control] Speed, extending up to 40m in the air. This wall of wind is perfect for defense or trapping an opponent in an enclosed area. Anything that tries to pass through the winds will be sliced viciously with [Control] Strength blades of wind as sharp as katana blades. This technique lasts for 4 posts, unless released earlier.
[/spoiler][spoiler=A Rank]
*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Gentle Caress of Suffocation[/b][/color]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Once the user has performed the required hand seals, it is recommended that they take a deep breath. This is because their fuuton chakra will visibly surge outward to cover an area of 65m in all directions around their person. While this does not create a vaccuum or remove all the air, it does push specifically all of the oxygen out of the area and keeps it that way for 4 posts, though the duration can be extended if the final hand seal is held. Note that extending the duration will incur additional chakra costs. This technique causes all who remain within this area to lose 5 Endurance per post that they do not escape it. If they reach 0 Endurance, they will black out. The Endurance regenerates at a rate of 5 per post that they are outside of this technique's effect.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Pulse of Wind[/b][/color]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will release a burst of chakra up to 100 meters out in all directions. This will fill the air within that zone with his chakra and make it visibly glow with a light green as if filled with glitter. This technique is a set up technique. It does nothing but let him create a point of origin for his techniques that would normally emanate from him. This chakra will linger in the air for 10 posts or until a technique with higher control than Saigo's pushes the Fuuton infused air away.
[/spoiler][spoiler=S Rank]
[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Shinigami's Presence[/b][/color]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Gentle Caress of Suffocation[/b][/color]
A more dangerous form of the technique it is based on, Saigo will initiate this technique with a series of hand seals. After completing the last hand seal, Fuuton chakra will push all the air out of the area up to 160 meters in all directions. This will suck the air out of lungs, causing people to last [Endurance]/10 posts before blacking out from the lack of oxygen.

[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Uzumaki[/b][/color]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming a series of hand seals, Saigo will indicate a point he can see or that contains his chakra within 160 meters. Upon selecting a spot, Fuuton chakra will begin spinning and churning like a whorl of razor blades while expanding with [Control] Speed. As it expands, it will eviscerate anything that comes in contact with it or is caught within it with [Control] Strength. This technique can expand to be up to 100 meters in size. Upon creation and expansion, this technique will create high speed winds that push out from it, effectively creating a spherical tornado of vibrant green chakra for the next 5 posts(Dealing Damage each post something or someone is in contact with it).
[/spoiler]
Last edited by Tsedas on Sun Feb 04, 2024 7:00 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Takamori Saigo - Konohagakure Banin - [color=#93DDDB]
Takamori Jubei - Konohagakure Genin - [color=#8B658B]
Enkouten Hisone - Iwagakure Special Jounin - [color=#E87511]
Ryousei Genkaku - Sungakure Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Retired CharactersShow
Akira - Kirigakure - Special Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Ishikawa Hanzo - Sunagakure Genin - Jinch - [color=navajowhite]
Tenjirou Shigekuni - Sunagakure Chuunin - [color=fuchsia]
Itazura Bokun - Sunagakure B-Rank MN - [color=#00C1B5]
Kutsuzawa Retsu - Iwagakure Sp Jounin - [color=#EF6B00]
Shiimu Mirai - Kirigakure Bannin - [color=navajowhite]
Kojima Nao - Kumogakure -Genin - [color=#A0522D]
Matsudaira Tokoha - Sunagakure - Jounin - [color=#ED2939]
Ishiguro Nui - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=brown]
Awai Mariko - Konohagakure Chuunin - [color=#B2397F]
Jinrai Setsuko - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=#D60270]
Toukai Mukade - Kirigakure Chuunin - [color=#8B7765]

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Post by Niro » Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:00 pm

Fuuton • Pulse of Wind <-This is basically Aeroinfusion and Aerokinesis
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
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Post by Tsedas » Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:07 pm

To my knowledge anyone can do infusion, also what makes this kinesis?

I see the problem, the wording makes it sound like kinesis. That's not supposed to be the case. But infusion is something anyone can do to my knowledge.
Last edited by Tsedas on Thu Feb 01, 2024 6:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Takamori Jubei - Konohagakure Genin - [color=#8B658B]
Enkouten Hisone - Iwagakure Special Jounin - [color=#E87511]
Ryousei Genkaku - Sungakure Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Retired CharactersShow
Akira - Kirigakure - Special Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Ishikawa Hanzo - Sunagakure Genin - Jinch - [color=navajowhite]
Tenjirou Shigekuni - Sunagakure Chuunin - [color=fuchsia]
Itazura Bokun - Sunagakure B-Rank MN - [color=#00C1B5]
Kutsuzawa Retsu - Iwagakure Sp Jounin - [color=#EF6B00]
Shiimu Mirai - Kirigakure Bannin - [color=navajowhite]
Kojima Nao - Kumogakure -Genin - [color=#A0522D]
Matsudaira Tokoha - Sunagakure - Jounin - [color=#ED2939]
Ishiguro Nui - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=brown]
Awai Mariko - Konohagakure Chuunin - [color=#B2397F]
Jinrai Setsuko - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=#D60270]
Toukai Mukade - Kirigakure Chuunin - [color=#8B7765]

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Post by Niro » Sun Feb 04, 2024 3:16 pm

It still reads like kinesis to me?
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
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Post by Tsedas » Sun Feb 04, 2024 7:01 pm

Fixed the wording!

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Takamori Saigo - Konohagakure Banin - [color=#93DDDB]
Takamori Jubei - Konohagakure Genin - [color=#8B658B]
Enkouten Hisone - Iwagakure Special Jounin - [color=#E87511]
Ryousei Genkaku - Sungakure Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Retired CharactersShow
Akira - Kirigakure - Special Jounin - [color=#BE4F62]
Ishikawa Hanzo - Sunagakure Genin - Jinch - [color=navajowhite]
Tenjirou Shigekuni - Sunagakure Chuunin - [color=fuchsia]
Itazura Bokun - Sunagakure B-Rank MN - [color=#00C1B5]
Kutsuzawa Retsu - Iwagakure Sp Jounin - [color=#EF6B00]
Shiimu Mirai - Kirigakure Bannin - [color=navajowhite]
Kojima Nao - Kumogakure -Genin - [color=#A0522D]
Matsudaira Tokoha - Sunagakure - Jounin - [color=#ED2939]
Ishiguro Nui - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=brown]
Awai Mariko - Konohagakure Chuunin - [color=#B2397F]
Jinrai Setsuko - Kumogakure Chuunin - [color=#D60270]
Toukai Mukade - Kirigakure Chuunin - [color=#8B7765]

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Post by Niro » Sun Feb 04, 2024 8:24 pm

1/2
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
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Post by Kabu » Tue Feb 06, 2024 9:35 pm

Accepted
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Kyomu Nozomi - #5960A8
Ibakuro Rin - #9E4FA5
Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
Fukusha Nezumi - #E00747
Karagata yamada - #CE1126, Makura Ayame - #7251BC
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