Miyazaki, Jin

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Miyazaki, Jin

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Miyazaki, Jin
"Zaki, The Dragon."


"It is what it is."
General Information
Age:Gender:Height:Weight:Hair:Eyes:
31 Male 6'2" 185 Lbs. Gray-white Brown
DescriptionShow
Jin has short black-brown hair and a tattoo running down his right eye. He is lean and fit, muscular yet lanky at the same time, showing that he lacks true close quarter combat skill.
Clothing/AccessoriesShow
Jin wears black on black, as a ninja should, he wears to pouches on his back and a small sword on his back, this sword is mostly for show though as he barely uses it, he has a black hood and black mask as well to finish his entire ninja ecstatic.
EquipmentShow
• [1] Katana that is 120cm long, where the shaku is 30cm and the blade is 60cm.
• [25] Kunai in his Pouch on his back to the right.
• [15] Shuriken in a shuriken holster located on his left thigh.
• [3] Explosive noted Kunai(s) in his pouch located on his back to the left.
• [3] Smoke bomb in his pouch on his right thigh.
• [3] Explosive notes in his pouch to the left on his back.
PersonalityShow
Jin is a naturally kind man, his biggest flaw is his drive for adventure so when he discovered CC he felt almost at home, he trained his fire style to the point where he became one with it. Destruction isn't what he seeks but it seems to follow him ever since the day he bonded with the flames. Jin is kind hearted to those he considers his ally and evil towards those who try to excinguish his flames, he is fast to anger but equally as fast to calm down, he embodies the flame from top to toe.
HistoryShow
Born in Miracle, Jin wasn't an exceptional child, born the youngest of the three, he had to contend with sharing the spotlight with his siblings. They all seemed to outpace him when it came to picking up arms and would soon become proud soldiers while Jin was still stuck at home trying to figure out why he couldn't physically compete with his siblings.

That was until the day CC rolled in and allowed him to train in the arts of Ninjutsu, that's where he found his niche and soon after he graduated he would rise in the ranks with ease. Jin slowly built up a reputation for himself as a trustworthy man that would protect those he loved when the time was of need. He knew better than to question his leadership, especially after they had made him far stronger than he would ever dream.

With the help of Ichiro he managed to discard his old body and become one with the flames, now that they had been called to war, he knew better than to stay behind, Jin was going to help CC no matter what.
Battle Information
Combat StyleShow
Ninjutsu and elemental body strikes..
Abilities: 1/3Show
Flame Body:
After achieving unparalleled mastery of ninjutsu, Jin is able to become one with katon. After undergoing the grueling process of sealing themselves into an object they were able to gather katon around themselves to recreate their bodies. This object must be inside or at least constantly within physical contact with its artificial body. This means that their bodies take on the properties of katon at almost all times. Any damage sustained by the body is able to be recovered by gathering more of the same element, and is incapable of bleeding. While this gives Jin a form of almost invulnerability, if the object that holds their true self is damaged it spells out almost certain death. The anchor is located where Jin´s heart is. The anchor is in the form of a lantern.

Takes one Ability Slot.
Requires 15 or more Control
ConcentrationsShow
Ninjutsu Concentrations 4/4Show
Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, Katon jutsu have a Burning effect, and burn anyone they come in contact with with [Control] strength.

Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis based on the [Strength] of the technique. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Fuuton:
Fuuton Affinity[/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.

Sensory:
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do not take up a concentration.

Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Taijutsu Concentrations 0/0Show
N/A
Genjutsu Concentrations 0/0Show
N/A
Rank:Village:Primary Chakra Affinity:
Jounin Hitogakure no Sato Katon
Chakra:Endurance:Control:Strength:Speed:Will:
40 20 40 11 30 20
JutsuShow
FuutonShow

D-rank

*Fuuton • Redirection
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user covers a projectile they are holding in fuuton empowered wind. Then, when the weapon has been thrown as normal, the user is able to change it's direction by up to 90 degrees once with no drop in momentum on the projectiles part. This technique only lasts one post.

*Fuuton • Wind Bullet
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user expels a basket ball sized ball of wind from their mouth. This ball of wind travels up to 10m at [Control] speed, and explodes with [Control] Strength on contact with solid matter or at the end of its range.

C-rank

Fuuton • Great Breakthrough
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
By performing the needed hand seals and bringing their hands to their mouth, the user can release a wide blast of air. This wave of air moves outward in a cone shape with a 25m width at the end of the cone and moves with [Control] Speed. Once it makes contact with a substance, the wind both cuts at it and pushes it away with [Control] strength. This blast goes out for a maximum of 25m if it doesn't hit anything, where it will dissipate into the surrounding air.

*Fuuton • Wind Clone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their fuuton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/4] posts.

*Fuuton • Tornado Trap
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will first perform the required hand seals and then gather wind around an opponent. This will form a tornado around them at [Control] Speed which extends 25m into the air and has a radius of 3m. The tornado will push back anything that touches it with [Control] Strength, while also cutting at whatever tries to push through as well as a kunai would with the same strength. This technique lasts for 4 posts.


B-rank
*Fuuton • Pressure Damage
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After making the required hand seals, the user will focus chakra into their mouth. They will release the wind chakra as a large sphere with a 10m radius at [Control] Speed, which has a maximum range of 40m. Should the target be hit within the first 20m, the attack will inflict the maximum amount of damage, causing a [Control] Strength explosion, spreading cutting winds capable of slicing close to the bone over the same area. Should they be struck in the last 20m, it will only apply [Control/2] Strength.

KatonShow

D-rank

*Katon • Fireball
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at [Control] speed and strength.

*Katon • Flame Jet
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a cone that is up to five meters long and three meters wide at it's base. The cone travels at a speed equal to [Control] and impacts with a strength equal to [Control].

*Katon • Blackline Blaze
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user runs their hands alongside a potential fuel, once they take their fingers off everything the ran their hand over will ignite, the flame burning at [Control] Strength. Potentially useful in avoiding wildfires, having fueles for a fire used against them.

*Katon • Heated Blade
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into a metal weapon or blade, the user will cause it to grow hotter and cover the blade in flames. The imbued weapon will be able to carve through defenses of [Control] or less strength with ease.


C-rank

*Katon • Scattering Flames
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will puff their chest before spitting out a torrent of 15 individual fireballs, each 2 centimeter diameter. The fireballs are shot for up to 10 meters away at a speed and strength equal to [Control].

*Katon • Flame's Shadow
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of katon chakra. The clone has stats equal to the user, and is capable of using Katon Jutsu. The clone will only last for 3 posts.

[Fire Element • Advanced Fire Clone]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user concentrates Katon chakra into the form of a clone. This clone looks identical to the user in every way. The clone can go up to 30 meters away from the user. Once destroyed by an attack, the clone explodes at the force of C-Rank explosion.

[Fire Element • Fire Sword]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
First Jin channels chakra to his blade, and then ignites it at the speed of [Control] making it consumed in flames. The flame burns for 3 posts before fading. The flames can cut through defense of strength [Control]. By just hitting the target, the target only sustains second-degree burns. But should the sword linger onto the skin, the burns would become more severe.

B-rank

[Fire Element • Fire-man Clone]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user concentrates Katon chakra into the form of a clone. This clone looks identical to the user in every way. The clone can go up to a 60 meters away from the user. This clone is capable to cast up to B-rank jutsu and last up to 6 post before disappearing in a smoke cloud.[/list]

[Fire Element • Great ball of fire]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user draws in a deep breath before emitting it in the form of a massive ball of flames. These flames are shot about 90 centimeters from the user before beginning to shape into its spherical shape, and grows to have a diameter of about 3 meters. After blossoming into a fireball, it flies towards the target at the speed of [Control] for a max of 60 meters before exploding in the force of B-Rank explosion total. If the target is hit by the jutsu, the ball of flames causes a second to degree burn to be inflicted.

Katon • Move with Fire
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Due to forbidden arts Jin turned his body into Fire element and can control his body via semi-kinesis, this jutsu allows Jin to move with his fire at the speed of the jutsu up to max [Speed].

A-rank

*Katon • Flame Armor
A-Rank Ninjutsu
After the needed hand seals, the user will release katon outward from their body rapidly as the fire twists around them. This fire forms a 3-inch layer of flames around their body that manifests at [Control] speed, and essentially provide a pseudo-defense against taijutsu for the next five posts. If anyone comes into contact with the armor, they will receive burns and incoming attacks will be repelled with [Control] strength.

Katon • Living Armor
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Due to forbidden arts Jin turned his body into Fire element and can control his body via semi-kinesis, this jutsu allows him to heal wounds at A-Rank rate and also allows Jin to move the fire body at the speed of [Control] to where their stat matches, same with strength.

[Fire Element • Flame Serpent]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
While the ninja completes the needed set of hand seals, he inhales a considerable sum of air and spews out a large serpent made of fire. It speeds toward the opponent at the speed of [Control] at a range max to 50 meters and hit's at [Control]. The serpent explodes at the force of 8 exploding tags.

S-rank

[Fire Element • Hells Kitchen]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 40 Control.
After completing the needed hand seals, the Ninja channels his chakra for half a post while keeping his last hand seals steady at chest hight. He breathes in and prepares a fire storm, and when the Ninja shoots out the air, a jetstream of fire forms and starts to take the form of a huge fireball 100 meters in diameter shooting towards the intended target at the speed of [Control] and a range up to 100 meters. When the fireball hits it explodes into an inferno that spreads 32 meters in every direction from the explosion, causing everything inside to become incinerated. Exploding at the force of S-rank explosion
Raiton StyleShow

D-rank
*Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at [Control] Speed and Strength.

Sensory StyleShow

C-rank

- Minds Eye -
*[Sensory Style • Beyond Senses]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: 10 Control
First performing handseals, this sensor jutsu is used by shinobi to feel chakra sources within a radius of 35 meters. While this jutsu is fairly helpful in sensing chakra, it is unable to actually pinpoint specific chakras outside of a 10m radius. This only gives the Shinobi an idea of how many entities with chakra are present in their general area.
Username: Kitsui
Organization Equipment: 0/0
Organization Jutsu: 0/0
Ryo: 0/0
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
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[War] Got permission from my friend

Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Feb 09, 2024 12:31 am

You will need to pay for this character to become an NPC for CC. With 160 stats its an S-rank NPC and will cost 300 ryo.
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[War] Got permission from my friend

Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Feb 09, 2024 12:22 pm

Not a companion, this be a full blown character.
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[War] Got permission from my friend

Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Feb 09, 2024 10:31 pm

The character already exists and is in the archives. You cannot take control of another players character in this way, you would need to buy them as an NPC.
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[War] Got permission from my friend

Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Feb 09, 2024 10:37 pm

The guy will never rp anymore, but if that's the case can I just change his name, and edit a bit of his history? It should be fast.

Edit: I changed his name, changed the country he is from, removed Sankaton as he no longer is from Konoha, and changed his history. (I only kept the 3 jutsu my friend designed)
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[War] Miyazaki, Jin

Post by Izanagi » Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:34 am

Ash is also a Konoha exclusive style and you still have Sankaton listed in concentrations

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Takeda Ichiro - A-Rank Waterfall Country; Black Wake, Chishiki, Setsuzoku
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[War] Miyazaki, Jin

Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:49 am

Fixed.
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The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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[War] Miyazaki, Jin

Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Feb 10, 2024 10:24 am

This character is fundamentally different from the original version of the character posted and was changed after the deadline so is not eligible to be used in the war.
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[War] Miyazaki, Jin

Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 10, 2024 11:11 am

But the rule said I'd have to change what was said, and i did, it couldn't be an npc because the org doesn't have the cash for it so i changed it to a character instead 😭
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Feb 10, 2024 11:38 am

The character you were registering was a character that would need to turn into an NPC. You were told you would need to turn him into an NPC and buy him. You instead elected to turn him into a PC and by your own words "only kept the 3 jutsu my friend designed". It is after the deadline, this character is not eligible.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:04 pm

Fine he can still defend CC.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:23 pm

Quote:
[Fire Element • Hells Kitchen]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
After completing the needed hand seals, the Ninja channels his chakra for half a post while keeping his last hand seals steady at chest hight. He breathes in and prepares a fire storm, and when the Ninja shoots out the air, a jetstream of fire forms and starts to take the form of a huge fireball 100 meters in diameter shooting towards the intended target at the speed of [Control] and a range up to 100 meters. When the fireball hits it explodes into an inferno that spreads 32 meters in every direction from the explosion, causing everything inside to become incinerated. Exploding at the force of S-rank explosion
As it is exploding with the force of an S-rank explosion and explosions do +1 to rank this would need a 40 Control prerequisite just fysa.
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Katon • Living Armor
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Due to forbidden arts Jin turned his body into Fire element and can control his body via semi-kinesis, this jutsu allows him to heal wounds at A-Rank rate, meaning he can heal critical wounds around [Control] level. Jin is able to move the fire body at the speed of [Control] to where their stat matches, same with strength. The body protects the core in the center which is also protected by another layer, a ring of fire.
This is written very confusing and I don't underdtand what its doing.
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Katon • Move with Fire
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Due to forbidden arts Jin turned his body into Fire element and can control his body via semi-kinesis, this jutsu allows Jin to move with his fire at the speed of the jutsu and if it exceeds his speed then he won't be able to change trajectory.
To a max of his speed period.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 10, 2024 1:18 pm

Fixed.
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Post by Kabu » Sat Feb 10, 2024 4:18 pm

I'll 1/2 this but you are aware that 6 strength is very limiting even for an e-body, yes?
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Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 10, 2024 4:20 pm

Changed to 11, dropped speed to 30
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Aisu, Yuri
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:36 pm

2/2
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