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Kitsui Mod 1.2

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Application: Inuzuka, Kitsui
Change: Ranking up to Chuunin, gaining 40 ryo due to exam, adding accountant scale, using those 40 ryos + 4 of his own to buy 11 (+2 Chakra, +5 endurance, +2 speed + 2 will) stats and 10 extra meters wire and adding 3 stat trainings and multiple jutsu trainings and 1 ability.

Snake Eater - After spending years training in the harsh wilderness of Fire Country and dealing with various venomous animals and plants, the Inuzuka has developed a special ability that allows Kitsui's body to fight off poisons remarkably better than most, it takes an additional post for the poison to begin taking effect and once his body has dealt with the poison/venom he becomes immune to the said poison.

Rabid Dog - Due to harsh training in Fire Country and the assistance of ROOT/Anbu, Kitsui has developed an ability that allows his saliva glands and nails to produce Rabies, a poison that drives the affected mad, the poison follows the Kitsui's Strength vs Enemies Endurance. Each time the targets get infected by Rabid Dog they become more and more unhinged, the debuff stacks as per Debuff rules while the duration doesn't change.
StatsDurationEffects
1-5 2 posts. The target loses 1 Will, and 1 Speed for the duration of Rabies.
6-10 3 posts. The target loses 2 Will, and 2 Speed for the duration, they also start to become delirious.
11-15 4 posts. The target loses 3 Will, and 3 Speed for the duration, their brains swell up and they become delirious and extremely aggressive.
16-20 5 posts. The target loses 5 Will, 5 Speed for the duration, delirium, and hyper aggression that causes them to burn through their endurance.
21+ 6 posts. The target loses 6 Will, and 6 Speed, the mind is blank as no thought process can be formed, and extreme aggression eats their endurance until they finally die on the final post.

Trained

*[Corroding Hearts]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the ninja covers a small projectile in Sankaton chakra. Whenever the projectile hits a target, the sankaton will strike first at [Control] Strength, eroding the material it strikes.

*[Annihilation: Introduction]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a .5x.5x.5m diameter film of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The film can then be moved around and controlled within a 10m area of the user, weakening the strength of anything that passes through it by [Control] strength, and causing anything smaller than the film to completely disappear.

The Sleuth II
B-Rank NinTaijutsu
Kitsui has upgraded his technique with taijutsu training to accompany the tech, he will begin by perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra to their nose, enhancing their sense of smell. This nintai is very effective at picking out certain smells, if the user has been in close contact with someone, or has one of their possessions on hand, they will be able to accurately pinpoint the source of scents that are less than ten posts old as long as the aforementioned source is still within five miles of where the scent was originally picked up. Kitsui can also respond to physical movements that give off scents as long as his speed exceeds by +5.


Payment: Stats 1 Speed/ will
Jutsu Sankaton D
Sankaton D 2
Slouth 2
1 Strength

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[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=1516026/]Kitsui[/url]
[b]Ryo:[/b] 12/113
[b]Perks:[/b] (1/1) Accountant (Scaled)
[b]Stat Training:[/b] (4/75)
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[table][center][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen]I am Kitsui[/color][/u][/color]
[video=200,40]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BlVn3swlSng[/video][/center][c][center][color=steelblue][u][color=Forestgreen]Konoha Residence[/color][/u][/color]
[video=200,40]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dMpm4wngZVk[/video][/center][c][center][color=Forestgreen][u][color=Royalblue]Konoha's Number 1 Tracker[/color][/u][/color]
[video=200,40]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lu_5SSc6IkQ[/video][/center][/table]

[glow=Forestgreen][center][big][big][b][url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=85&t=5960391]Inuzuka[/url], Kitsui[/b][/big][/big][/glow]
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[float=Left][img=400,500]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/ee/db/4c/eedb4c31086123f1e5fc4c9d94e1afda.jpg[/img][/float]

[center][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/color][/u][/color][/center]

[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Age:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 16
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Gender:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Male
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Height:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 5’5
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Weight:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 135 lbs
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Hair:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Short dark brown shaggy hair
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Eyes:[/b][/color][/u][/color] dark narrow, slit-like pupils
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Physical Features:[/b][/color][/u][/color] fit but doesn’t show that many muscles. Kitsui also has sharp and long canine teeth. Red Inuzuka tattoos on his cheeks
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Clothing/Accessories:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Kitsui wears black ¾ shorts, Tight black tank top, and a marine blue hooded shirt over it. Regular black ninja sandals and bandages cover the visible part of his right leg. Kitsui also has a brown wristband. Two pouches wrapped around his left leg and at leisure times he wears a loose light blue sweater.
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Forehead Protector:[/b][/color][/u][/color] wears it like a belt. Black colored
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Personality:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Kitsui is calm and focused. He is more of a strategist type of fighter, who thinks first and strikes later. He fights as a supporter more than the attacker. He is known to mock his enemies to make them make a move for him to calculate the next move. Where his dog acts like his counterpart, Kitsui in private is very talk active and energetic. He can get serious when someone is disrespectful to him or his pet. On his off days Kitsui likes to prank people and generally tries to keep an uplifting persona that makes others enjoy their time, usually clumsy, the late teenager has mostly spent his time slacking and would rather do that than socialize with people if he was truly honest. Yet, he knows that his ninja duties have to come first, or so his mother tells him. 
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b][i][u]Post Chuunin Exam[/u][/i][/b][/color][/u][/color] the kid has grown a bit, and become somewhat mature, not that he doesn't still prank people but he takes his training far more seriously now that he knows that his expertise is useful, he made new friends along the way, and does his best to become a better ninja every day, whether that is training with Shiroyasha, deepening his Black ops work or helping genin become better ninjas. Kitsui has a new goal and that is to become Konoha's number one tracker.

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[center]”[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen]One day at the time.[/color][/u][/color]”[/center]
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[spoiler=Anbu/Root][center][img]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/43/8c/92/438c927ed2b215a2811438ddd47dd30e.jpg[/img][/center][hr] Kitsui wears a large black robe above his Root/Anbu outfit, this outfit leaves almost nothing to the eye as it covers most of his skin save for his toes and the side of his ears as his Monkey mask covers most of his face. The hood also covers most of his head when he slides it up, he wears a large pouch on his back, a shrunken holster on his right leg and black gloves.[hr]
[center][color=Forestgreen][u][color=slateblue]Black Operations[/color][/u][/color]
[video=200,40]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WpsdtJQ_2eU[/video][/center][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Past][center]Genin
[img]https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/460030531552280577/1127237936409227335/1e9d309222f021226f4f83365ee5ea88.jpg?width=443&height=437[/img][/center][/spoiler]


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[center][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/color][/u][/color][/center]
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Rank:[/b][/color][/u][/color] [glow=forestgreen]C[/glow]- Chuunin
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Village:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Konohagakure No Sato
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Affinity/Specialization:[/b][/color][/u][/color] [color=Maroon][Sankaton][/color]

[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Stats[/b][/color][/u][/color]: 68 (D)
[list][*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Chakra:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 9
[*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Endurance:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 15
[*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Control:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 10
[*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Strength:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 11
[*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Speed:[/b][/color][/u][/color] 15
[*][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Will: [/b][/color][/u][/color] 8
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[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Equipment:[/b][/color][/u][/color]
• [25] Kunai(s) in his Pouch
• [15] Shuriken(s) in his shuriken holster.
• [3] Explosive noted Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Note flash Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Smoke bomb Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Explosive notes in his pouch
• [2] Smoke bomb in his pouch
• [28m] Wire in his pouch
• [1] journal in his pouch
• [2] Unread books in his pouch

[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Combat Style:[/b][/color][/u][/color] Focusing on using his bloodline to attack his enemies, while calculating what he should do next.

[i]Although the Inuzuka clan does not have a true bloodline ability, their strong affinity with their animal familiars has bred the blood of the beast into every one of them. From small physical traits—slitted pupils and sharp eye (canine) teeth—to their senses—a heightened sense of smell and hearing—members of the Inuzuka clan are less human than they appear. These innate traits give them an edge that only an animal could have and allow them to work in complete harmony with their animal familiars.[/I] ~ Inuzuka Clan
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[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Companions:[/b][/color][/u][/color] (1/1)
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[center][b][big][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen]Abilities and Concentrations[/color][/u][/color][/big][/b][/center]
[table=2, Abilities][b][color=darkGreen][u][color=Forestgreen]Snake Eater[/color][/u][/color][/b][c] After spending years training in the harsh wilderness of Fire Country and dealing with various venomous animals and plants, the Inuzuka has developed a special ability that allows Kitsui's body to fight off poisons remarkably better than most, it takes an additional post for the poison to begin taking effect and once his body has dealt with the poison/venom he becomes immune to the said poison.

[c][b][color=darkGreen][u][color=Royalblue]Rabid Dog[/color][/u][/color][/b][c] Due to harsh training in Fire Country and the assistance of ROOT/Anbu, Kitsui has developed an ability that allows his saliva glands and nails to produce Rabies, a poison that drives the affected mad, the poison follows the Kitsui's Strength vs Enemies Endurance. Each time the targets get infected by Rabid Dog they become more and more unhinged, the debuff stacks as per Debuff rules while the duration doesn't change. [table=3]Stats[c]Duration[c]Effects[c]
1-5[c] 2 posts. [c] The target loses 1 Will, and 1 Speed for the duration of Rabies.[c]
6-10[c] 4 posts. [c] The target loses 2 Will, and 2 Speed for the duration, they also start to become delirious.[c]
11-15[c] 5 posts. [c] The target loses 3 Will, and 3 Speed for the duration, their brains swell up and they become delirious and extremely aggressive. [c]
16-20[c] 7 posts. [c] The target loses 5 Will, 5 Speed for the duration, delirium, and hyper aggression that causes them to burn through their endurance.[c]
21+[c] 8 posts. [c] The target loses 6 Will, and 6 Speed, the mind is blank as no thought process can be formed, and extreme aggression eats their endurance until they finally die on the final post.[/table]

[c][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Third Ability[/color][/u][/color][/b][c][/table]
[table=2, Concentrations][color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Ninjutsu[/color][/u][/color][/b][c][spoiler=4][quote=Katon][color=orangered][b]Katon Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive [color=orangered][i]ignition[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Ignition)]Katon's effect is [b]ignition[/b], which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, Katon jutsu have a [b]Burning[/b] effect, and burn anyone they come in contact with with [Control] strength.[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Sankaton Affinity][color=brown][b]Sankaton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Sankaton, and advanced form of Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Sankaton affinity. Sankaton has an [b]eroding[/b] effect. 
[spoiler=Passive (Erosion)]Sankaton is an incorporeal element that comes in the form of a fine red haze, that exudes warmth, and has the ability to [b]erode[/b]. Anything physical that comes in contact with Sankaton is eaten by the energy, which consumes the Sankaton. This gives Sankaton incredibly powerful offensive and defensive capabilities. Sankaton jutsu are notoriously draining, and are known to push the user to the absolute limit. Sankaton jutsu are limited in size by their control prerequisite, which can make them difficult to use effectively. Sankaton is unaffected by energy based elements, and the two simply pass through them. This makes Sankaton's strength, and its weakness non-matter based elements.[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu][color=#444F51][b]Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.[/quote][hr][quote=Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling]
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.[/quote][/spoiler][c]
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Taijutsu[/color][/u][/color][/b][c][spoiler=9][quote=Acrobatics]The fundamental skill of [b][Acrobatics][/b] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Close Quarters Combat]The fundamental skill of [b][Close Quarters Combat][/b] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.[/quote][hr][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][hr][quote=Rigid Structure]The fundamental skill of [b][Rigid Structure][/b] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Stealth]The fundamental skill of [b][Stealth][/b] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Perception]The fundamental skill of [b][Perception][/b] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Projectile Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Projectile Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Corded Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Corded Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Mounting]The fundamental skill of [b][Mounting][/b] indicates the user's proficiency in acting from atop amount. This includes various skills such as riding, jousting, and even being able to be effective while in flight.[/spoiler][c]
[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][b]Genjutsu[/color][/u][/color][/b][c][spoiler=3][quote=Status Genjutsu]This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.[/quote][hr][quote=Warp Genjutsu]This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.[/quote][hr][quote=Sound Initiation]
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/quote][/spoiler][/table]
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[b]Jutsu:[/b]

[spoiler=Beast jutsu][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/feInVPS.gif[/img]

[i][color=#D62828]Jūjin Style[/color][/i]
The taijutsu style most commonly used by the Inuzuka house, the high speed taijutsu style is designed to quickly assault and overwhelm the opponent with heavy handed and sharp attacks, including scratching, biting, tearing off flesh, and grabbing. While some view it as a weakness, taijutsu specialists admire the style for it’s ability to do damage without the use of a weapon.
[i]These techniques may be used by either the Clan Member or Ninken.[/i][/center]

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Ninjutsu
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~The Sleuth
D Rank Ninjutsu
Dogs are known to be excellent trackers, and the Inuzuka do everything they can to compete with their familiars. In an attempt to mimic their ninken, the Inuzuka member will perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra to their nose, enhancing their sense of smell. While this isn’t very effective at picking out certain smells, if the user has been in close contact with someone, or has one of their possessions on hand, they will be able to more accurately pinpoint the source of scents that are less than eight posts old as long as the aforementioned source is still within one mile of where the scent was originally picked up. 

~Man-Beast Form
D Rank Ninjutsu
A technique similar in concept to the ~Beast-Man Form, ~Man-Beast Form grants the opposite effects. After completing the proper handseals, the user of this jutsu will take the form of his/her canine familiar. While allowing for unique combination assaults, the user is unable to perform handseals, and as such, only taijutsu can be utilized by the user and his/her familiar. This technique lasts for three posts.

~Whistle
D Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed handseals, the user will begin to focus chakra into his/her lungs to prepare a high-pitched whistle. The user will then place a hand to his/her mouth and begin to release the chakra. Although no sound will be heard to other humans in the area, the whistle emits a higher pitched frequency that can be heard by the canine familiars, much like a dog whistle. This technique works as long as the familiar is in a 30 meter radius of the user. It is mainly used to call familiars to the user's location or to direct strategies.

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~ Four-Legged Technique
C Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary handseals, the user of this jutsu will take on a more canine-like appearance. When activated, the user's pupils will become nothing more than slivers, nails will become more claw-like, and s/he will travel on all fours. This partial transformation grants the user +6 speed and increased maneuverability, but lowers his/her control (-6) for five (5) posts.

~Beast Change of Body Stance Technique
C Rank Ninjutsu
A variation of the Kawarimi no Jutsu, this technique allows the user to switch positions with his/her clan familiar. This can be done as long as the familiar is within 20 meters of the user and not caught in a genjutsu. This jutsu counts as one of the two teleports a character is allowed per thread

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The Sleuth II
B-Rank NinTaijutsu
Kitsui has upgraded his technique with taijutsu training to accompany the tech, he will begin by perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra to their nose, enhancing their sense of smell. This nintai is very effective at picking out certain smells, if the user has been in close contact with someone, or has one of their possessions on hand, they will be able to accurately pinpoint the source of scents that are less than ten posts old as long as the aforementioned source is still within five miles of where the scent was originally picked up. Kitsui can also respond to physical movements that give off scents as long as his speed exceeds by +5.


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Jūjin

[I]Prerequisite:[/I] CQC, Acrobatics, Deft Hands, Stealth, Perception, Ridgid Body, Mounting.


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~Double Tackle
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Both the clan member and the companion must have this technique
A combination technique utilized by members of the Inuzuka clan, the user will attempt to get on one side of the opponent as his/her familiar positions itself on the other side. Once in position, the user will charge and do a flying tackle at the opponent, aiming for the torso and head region. While this is going on, the Ninken will attempt to take out the target's legs by charging into them. If both the clan member and his/her familiar are successful, the opponent could be knocked over and possibly made vulnerable. This technique can be done on its own by either the ninken or the clan member, but isn't nearly as effective.

~Catch
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Another instance of learning from their canine companions, the Inuzuka have adopted this method of catching and holding objects thrown at them. Taking advantage of his/her speed and strong teeth, the user is able to catch projectiles like kunai and other miscellanea in his/her mouth. The user's speed must be at least equal to the strength of the opponent in order to catch the thrown object, otherwise it will be thrown faster than the clan member can intercept it. This technique must still be used with caution, as catching dangerous items with one's mouth can prove to be disastrous if done incorrectly.

~Latch Onto
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Utilizing its teeth and strength, the clan member or familiar will attempt to latch onto the opponent's body with their mouth. From this position, the canine or Inuzuka will do whatever possible to resist being removed. In order to throw off the ninken or clan member, the target must have a strength higher than their strength.

~Mount
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Modeled after a staple dog fighting technique, the user will jump on the target from behind, digging their teeth into their target's neck in the process. The combined weight of the user, and the pain from the bite of the neck is usually enough to knock the target down to the ground. 

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~Piercing Fang
C Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: ~ Four-Legged Technique must be active.
The basis for the Beast-Man form style of combat, this attack is performed by an individual clan member. By spinning rapidly, the user turns into a whirling mass before launching themselves at his/her target. By putting their full body into the attack, the clan member will hit an opponent or nearby object at full strength with their claws, easily rending flesh from bone.

Psyche!
C Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Piercing Fang
The user twirls towards their enemy and stops mid turn and attempts to grapple their target, using their momentum, strength, and surprising skills to wrestle their target down and hold them in a rear naked chokehold. 

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[spoiler=Ninjutsu][table][quote=Sankaton Affinity][color=brown][b]Sankaton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Sankaton, and advanced form of Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Sankaton affinity. Sankaton has an [b]eroding[/b] effect. 
[spoiler=Passive (Erosion)]Sankaton is an incorporeal element that comes in the form of a fine red haze, that exudes warmth, and has the ability to [b]erode[/b]. Anything physical that comes in contact with Sankaton is eaten by the energy, which consumes the Sankaton. This gives Sankaton incredibly powerful offensive and defensive capabilities. Sankaton jutsu are notoriously draining, and are known to push the user to the absolute limit. Sankaton jutsu are limited in size by their control prerequisite, which can make them difficult to use effectively. Sankaton is unaffected by energy based elements, and the two simply pass through them. This makes Sankaton's strength, and its weakness non-matter based elements.[/spoiler][/quote]

[color=brown][b][Death Claws][/b][/color]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, causing Sankaton to form around their claws. The next time their claws comes in contact with something, the Sankaton to flush forward to it, causing burns on contact, and eroding with [Control] Strength. This jutsu can be risky as it's possible for the user to accidentally touch themselves with the Sankaton.

*[color=brown][b][Corroding Hearts][/b][/color]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the ninja covers a small projectile in Sankaton chakra. Whenever the projectile hits a target, the sankaton will strike first at [Control] Strength, eroding the material it strikes.

*[color=brown][b][Annihilation: Introduction][/b][/color]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a .5x.5x.5m diameter film of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The film can then be moved around and controlled within a 10m area of the user, weakening the strength of anything that passes through it by [Control] strength, and causing anything smaller than the film to completely disappear.


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[color=Gold][u][color=Forestgreen][center][b][big]History:[/big][/b][/color][/u][/color][/center]

Born in and raised under a regular Inuzuka family, Kitsui was the first-born son. The boy would be growing up to become a very inteligent boy, as a youngling Kitsui spent his time reading a book rather than being out and playing with the other kids. This got his father thinking that it was time for the boy to have his ninken. Fearing that he would not have the capacity to defend himself.

At the beginning of their friendship, Kitsui and Shikon did not get along. The dog was more energetic while Kitsui would just sit inside and read a book or two but one day the boy changed his mind and thought that it was time to change his ways. He took his dog out to the woods where he could play with Shikon and also have some time to read. Their friendship grew even faster when they trained up their clan jutsu, which would come in handy later in life.

Later when the boy enrolled into the genin academy he was astonished to have somewhere to go every day and learn new things while his comrades were just skipping class or sleeping. He graduated at the age of twelve and turned thirteen before he had the chance to get a genin team but this did not bother Kitsui at all, he worked with his team but got into a lot of trouble and chose to take two sabbatical years off before he returned to duty, now hoping to become a Chuunin and prove his peers that he was a force to be reckoned with. 

A week before signing up to the exam he was hired by Nara, Shiroyasha in order to track down a stalker, the stalker in question turned out to be a black ops agent part of Anbu, due to them finding a Root hideout, they were forced to either join the org or have their memory wiped. Now a Root member and signed up for the Chuunin exam the boy stressed through his training, fortunately, he landed with a great team consisting of Kureha (A fellow Konoha nin) and Leimine from Sunagakure, together they fought a great beast and made it back in one spot. Ranking up to Chuunin did good for the boy's confidence, he started taking his training far more seriously, and with time he figured that he wanted to become Konoha's number one tracker, not a far-fetched dream if he continued the path he was on.
(I wonder, are we granted the flack-vest for rankng up?)
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Karagata, Yuuto
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SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
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Chishiki
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Username: Kitsui
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Stat Training: (4/75)
I am Kitsui
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Inuzuka, Kitsui
General Information Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 5’5
Weight: 135 lbs
Hair: Short dark brown shaggy hair
Eyes: dark narrow, slit-like pupils
Physical Features: fit but doesn’t show that many muscles. Kitsui also has sharp and long canine teeth. Red Inuzuka tattoos on his cheeks
Clothing/Accessories: Kitsui wears black ¾ shorts, Tight black tank top, and a marine blue hooded shirt over it. Regular black ninja sandals and bandages cover the visible part of his right leg. Kitsui also has a brown wristband. Two pouches wrapped around his left leg and at leisure times he wears a loose light blue sweater.
Forehead Protector: wears it like a belt. Black colored
Personality: Kitsui is calm and focused. He is more of a strategist type of fighter, who thinks first and strikes later. He fights as a supporter more than the attacker. He is known to mock his enemies to make them make a move for him to calculate the next move. Where his dog acts like his counterpart, Kitsui in private is very talk active and energetic. He can get serious when someone is disrespectful to him or his pet. On his off days Kitsui likes to prank people and generally tries to keep an uplifting persona that makes others enjoy their time, usually clumsy, the late teenager has mostly spent his time slacking and would rather do that than socialize with people if he was truly honest. Yet, he knows that his ninja duties have to come first, or so his mother tells him.
Post Chuunin Exam the kid has grown a bit, and become somewhat mature, not that he doesn't still prank people but he takes his training far more seriously now that he knows that his expertise is useful, he made new friends along the way, and does his best to become a better ninja every day, whether that is training with Shiroyasha, deepening his Black ops work or helping genin become better ninjas. Kitsui has a new goal and that is to become Konoha's number one tracker.

One day at the time.
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Kitsui wears a large black robe above his Root/Anbu outfit, this outfit leaves almost nothing to the eye as it covers most of his skin save for his toes and the side of his ears as his Monkey mask covers most of his face. The hood also covers most of his head when he slides it up, he wears a large pouch on his back, a shrunken holster on his right leg and black gloves.
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Genin

Battle Information Rank: C- Chuunin
Village: Konohagakure No Sato
Affinity/Specialization: [Sankaton]

Stats: 68 (D)
  • Chakra: 9
  • Endurance: 15
  • Control: 10
  • Strength: 11
  • Speed: 15
  • Will: 8
Equipment:
• [25] Kunai(s) in his Pouch
• [15] Shuriken(s) in his shuriken holster.
• [3] Explosive noted Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Note flash Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Smoke bomb Kunai(s) in his pouch
• [3] Explosive notes in his pouch
• [2] Smoke bomb in his pouch
• [28m] Wire in his pouch
• [1] journal in his pouch
• [2] Unread books in his pouch

Combat Style: Focusing on using his bloodline to attack his enemies, while calculating what he should do next.

Although the Inuzuka clan does not have a true bloodline ability, their strong affinity with their animal familiars has bred the blood of the beast into every one of them. From small physical traits—slitted pupils and sharp eye (canine) teeth—to their senses—a heightened sense of smell and hearing—members of the Inuzuka clan are less human than they appear. These innate traits give them an edge that only an animal could have and allow them to work in complete harmony with their animal familiars. ~ Inuzuka Clan
Companions: (1/1)
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Snake Eater After spending years training in the harsh wilderness of Fire Country and dealing with various venomous animals and plants, the Inuzuka has developed a special ability that allows Kitsui's body to fight off poisons remarkably better than most, it takes an additional post for the poison to begin taking effect on both onset and active durations, and once his body has dealt with the poison/venom he becomes immune to the said poison.
Rabid Dog Due to harsh training in Fire Country and the assistance of ROOT/Anbu, Kitsui has developed an ability that allows his saliva glands and nails to produce Rabies, a poison that drives the affected mad, the poison follows the Kitsui's Strength vs Enemies Endurance. Each time the targets get infected by Rabid Dog they become more and more unhinged, the debuff stacks as per Debuff rules while the duration doesn't change.
StatsDurationEffects
1-5 2 posts. The target loses 1 Strength, and 1 Speed for the duration of Rabies and hyperactivity sets in.
6-10 3 posts. The target loses 2 Will, and 2 Endurance for the duration, they also start to become delirious, and excitable behaviour is being stressed.
11-15 4 posts. The target loses 3 Endurance, and 3 Strength for the duration, their brains swell up and they become delirious and have extreme hallucinations.
16-20 5 posts. The target loses 5 Endurance, 5 Speed for the duration, delirium, and hyperactivity that causes them to burn through their endurance and a lack of coordination.
21+ 6 posts. The target loses 6 Will, and 6 Strength, the mind is blank as no thought process can be formed, and extreme hyperactivity that eats their endurance, hydrophobia (fear of water) and aerophobia (fear of drafts or of fresh air). Death occurs after a thread if they aren't healed with Iijutsu due to cardio-respiratory arrest.
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Concentrations
Ninjutsu
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Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, Katon jutsu have a Burning effect, and burn anyone they come in contact with with [Control] strength.

Sankaton Affinity:
Sankaton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Sankaton, and advanced form of Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Sankaton affinity. Sankaton has an eroding effect.
Passive (Erosion)Show
Sankaton is an incorporeal element that comes in the form of a fine red haze, that exudes warmth, and has the ability to erode. Anything physical that comes in contact with Sankaton is eaten by the energy, which consumes the Sankaton. This gives Sankaton incredibly powerful offensive and defensive capabilities. Sankaton jutsu are notoriously draining, and are known to push the user to the absolute limit. Sankaton jutsu are limited in size by their control prerequisite, which can make them difficult to use effectively. Sankaton is unaffected by energy based elements, and the two simply pass through them. This makes Sankaton's strength, and its weakness non-matter based elements.

Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu:
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.

Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Taijutsu
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Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.

Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.

Rigid Structure:
The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Projectile Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Corded Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Mounting:
The fundamental skill of [Mounting] indicates the user's proficiency in acting from atop amount. This includes various skills such as riding, jousting, and even being able to be effective while in flight.
Genjutsu
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Status Genjutsu:
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.

Warp Genjutsu:
This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.

Sound Initiation:
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Jutsu:
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Jūjin Style
The taijutsu style most commonly used by the Inuzuka house, the high speed taijutsu style is designed to quickly assault and overwhelm the opponent with heavy handed and sharp attacks, including scratching, biting, tearing off flesh, and grabbing. While some view it as a weakness, taijutsu specialists admire the style for it’s ability to do damage without the use of a weapon.
These techniques may be used by either the Clan Member or Ninken.

Ninjutsu

~The Sleuth
D Rank Ninjutsu
Dogs are known to be excellent trackers, and the Inuzuka do everything they can to compete with their familiars. In an attempt to mimic their ninken, the Inuzuka member will perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra to their nose, enhancing their sense of smell. While this isn’t very effective at picking out certain smells, if the user has been in close contact with someone, or has one of their possessions on hand, they will be able to more accurately pinpoint the source of scents that are less than eight posts old as long as the aforementioned source is still within one mile of where the scent was originally picked up.

~Man-Beast Form
D Rank Ninjutsu
A technique similar in concept to the ~Beast-Man Form, ~Man-Beast Form grants the opposite effects. After completing the proper handseals, the user of this jutsu will take the form of his/her canine familiar. While allowing for unique combination assaults, the user is unable to perform handseals, and as such, only taijutsu can be utilized by the user and his/her familiar. This technique lasts for three posts.

~Whistle
D Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed handseals, the user will begin to focus chakra into his/her lungs to prepare a high-pitched whistle. The user will then place a hand to his/her mouth and begin to release the chakra. Although no sound will be heard to other humans in the area, the whistle emits a higher pitched frequency that can be heard by the canine familiars, much like a dog whistle. This technique works as long as the familiar is in a 30 meter radius of the user. It is mainly used to call familiars to the user's location or to direct strategies.

~ Four-Legged Technique
C Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary handseals, the user of this jutsu will take on a more canine-like appearance. When activated, the user's pupils will become nothing more than slivers, nails will become more claw-like, and s/he will travel on all fours. This partial transformation grants the user +6 speed and increased maneuverability, but lowers his/her control (-6) for five (5) posts.

~Beast Change of Body Stance Technique
C Rank Ninjutsu
A variation of the Kawarimi no Jutsu, this technique allows the user to switch positions with his/her clan familiar. This can be done as long as the familiar is within 20 meters of the user and not caught in a genjutsu. This jutsu counts as one of the two teleports a character is allowed per thread

The Sleuth II
B-Rank NinTaijutsu
Kitsui has upgraded his technique with taijutsu training to accompany the tech, he will begin by perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra to their nose, enhancing their sense of smell. This nintai is very effective at picking out certain smells, if the user has been in close contact with someone, or has one of their possessions on hand, they will be able to accurately pinpoint the source of scents that are less than ten posts old as long as the aforementioned source is still within five miles of where the scent was originally picked up. Kitsui can also respond to physical movements that give off scents as long as his speed exceeds by +5.


Jūjin

Prerequisite: CQC, Acrobatics, Deft Hands, Stealth, Perception, Ridgid Body, Mounting.



~Double Tackle
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Both the clan member and the companion must have this technique
A combination technique utilized by members of the Inuzuka clan, the user will attempt to get on one side of the opponent as his/her familiar positions itself on the other side. Once in position, the user will charge and do a flying tackle at the opponent, aiming for the torso and head region. While this is going on, the Ninken will attempt to take out the target's legs by charging into them. If both the clan member and his/her familiar are successful, the opponent could be knocked over and possibly made vulnerable. This technique can be done on its own by either the ninken or the clan member, but isn't nearly as effective.

~Catch
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Another instance of learning from their canine companions, the Inuzuka have adopted this method of catching and holding objects thrown at them. Taking advantage of his/her speed and strong teeth, the user is able to catch projectiles like kunai and other miscellanea in his/her mouth. The user's speed must be at least equal to the strength of the opponent in order to catch the thrown object, otherwise it will be thrown faster than the clan member can intercept it. This technique must still be used with caution, as catching dangerous items with one's mouth can prove to be disastrous if done incorrectly.

~Latch Onto
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Utilizing its teeth and strength, the clan member or familiar will attempt to latch onto the opponent's body with their mouth. From this position, the canine or Inuzuka will do whatever possible to resist being removed. In order to throw off the ninken or clan member, the target must have a strength higher than their strength.

~Mount
D Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Modeled after a staple dog fighting technique, the user will jump on the target from behind, digging their teeth into their target's neck in the process. The combined weight of the user, and the pain from the bite of the neck is usually enough to knock the target down to the ground.

~Piercing Fang
C Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: ~ Four-Legged Technique must be active.
The basis for the Beast-Man form style of combat, this attack is performed by an individual clan member. By spinning rapidly, the user turns into a whirling mass before launching themselves at his/her target. By putting their full body into the attack, the clan member will hit an opponent or nearby object at full strength with their claws, easily rending flesh from bone.

Psyche!
C Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Piercing Fang
The user twirls towards their enemy and stops mid turn and attempts to grapple their target, using their momentum, strength, and surprising skills to wrestle their target down and hold them in a rear naked chokehold.
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Sankaton Affinity:
Sankaton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Sankaton, and advanced form of Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Sankaton affinity. Sankaton has an eroding effect.
Passive (Erosion)Show
Sankaton is an incorporeal element that comes in the form of a fine red haze, that exudes warmth, and has the ability to erode. Anything physical that comes in contact with Sankaton is eaten by the energy, which consumes the Sankaton. This gives Sankaton incredibly powerful offensive and defensive capabilities. Sankaton jutsu are notoriously draining, and are known to push the user to the absolute limit. Sankaton jutsu are limited in size by their control prerequisite, which can make them difficult to use effectively. Sankaton is unaffected by energy based elements, and the two simply pass through them. This makes Sankaton's strength, and its weakness non-matter based elements.
[Death Claws]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, causing Sankaton to form around their claws. The next time their claws comes in contact with something, the Sankaton to flush forward to it, causing burns on contact, and eroding with [Control] Strength. This jutsu can be risky as it's possible for the user to accidentally touch themselves with the Sankaton.

*[Corroding Hearts]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the ninja covers a small projectile in Sankaton chakra. Whenever the projectile hits a target, the sankaton will strike first at [Control] Strength, eroding the material it strikes.

*[Annihilation: Introduction]
D-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a .5x.5x.5m diameter film of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The film can then be moved around and controlled within a 10m area of the user, weakening the strength of anything that passes through it by [Control] strength, and causing anything smaller than the film to completely disappear.

History: Born in and raised under a regular Inuzuka family, Kitsui was the first-born son. The boy would be growing up to become a very inteligent boy, as a youngling Kitsui spent his time reading a book rather than being out and playing with the other kids. This got his father thinking that it was time for the boy to have his ninken. Fearing that he would not have the capacity to defend himself.

At the beginning of their friendship, Kitsui and Shikon did not get along. The dog was more energetic while Kitsui would just sit inside and read a book or two but one day the boy changed his mind and thought that it was time to change his ways. He took his dog out to the woods where he could play with Shikon and also have some time to read. Their friendship grew even faster when they trained up their clan jutsu, which would come in handy later in life.

Later when the boy enrolled into the genin academy he was astonished to have somewhere to go every day and learn new things while his comrades were just skipping class or sleeping. He graduated at the age of twelve and turned thirteen before he had the chance to get a genin team but this did not bother Kitsui at all, he worked with his team but got into a lot of trouble and chose to take two sabbatical years off before he returned to duty, now hoping to become a Chuunin and prove his peers that he was a force to be reckoned with.

A week before signing up to the exam he was hired by Nara, Shiroyasha in order to track down a stalker, the stalker in question turned out to be a black ops agent part of Anbu, due to them finding a Root hideout, they were forced to either join the org or have their memory wiped. Now a Root member and signed up for the Chuunin exam the boy stressed through his training, fortunately, he landed with a great team consisting of Kureha (A fellow Konoha nin) and Leimine from Sunagakure, together they fought a great beast and made it back in one spot. Ranking up to Chuunin did good for the boy's confidence, he started taking his training far more seriously, and with time he figured that he wanted to become Konoha's number one tracker, not a far-fetched dream if he continued the path he was on.
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Sushi
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H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
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N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
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Chishiki
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Post by Kanade » Fri Feb 23, 2024 8:51 am

10 posts and 5 miles is a bit long and wide for a B rank.

To the flak jacket question: no

To the ability in question: see discord mod questions.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Feb 23, 2024 9:10 am

The d rank is 1 mile and 8 posts, so it being 2 ranks above the d rank should afford me far longer range. I think it's because the inuzuka are inherently better at tracking as that's their thing. But eeh, what would you suggest otherwise because yeah, d rank is 1 mile and 8 posts..

Okay on flak.

Changed the poison resistance ability and added another one, Rabid Dog (Rabies)
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Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
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SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
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Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
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Post by Niro » Mon Feb 26, 2024 8:20 am

Snake Eater <-Is this only onset duration or active duration as well?

Rabid Dog <-This reads as them getting increasingly more angry and then just dying which doesn't make a lot of sense. I'm also not a fan of inflicting a debuff that causes death with a minimum stat of 21. I'd go more into the actual effects of rabies and how it affects the body moreso than just 'really angry' to get a death effect
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Post by Trusted Grader » Mon Feb 26, 2024 10:14 am

Active and onset if I am allowed.

I changed it to be more like rabies, where death comes if you don't heal yourself.
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Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
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Aisu, Yuri
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Post by Kabu » Mon Feb 26, 2024 7:00 pm

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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Mar 13, 2024 6:53 pm

I’m still not fully following what the mechanism for rabies is.

What does the ‘stats’ column represent? The description seems to suggest the primary mechanism is number of hits, but the stats column makes it seem like it’s just a stat difference?
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Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Mar 13, 2024 8:04 pm

The effect if his stats is x amount higher, so if Kitsui has 1-5 higher strength stat then the first column effect happens, and so forth.
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Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
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[Olive]
[N/A]
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Nara, Chikara
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The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Mar 14, 2024 1:04 pm

If this is checking the strength stat, it cannot also reduce strength then. As we don’t allow debuffs to check the stat being debuffed.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Thu Mar 14, 2024 5:02 pm

Fixed!
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Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
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Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
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Post by Kabu » Fri Mar 15, 2024 7:38 pm

Rabid Dog <- Firstly I think that causing death is going to be a no-go. More importantly how exactly is this transmitted? Is it on any kind of contact? Done by jutsu? Extended contact? I think it should also have some kind of onset time, much like poisons do.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Mar 15, 2024 10:12 pm

Well, it's a poison, so it's on set time like regular poison, and anything that's 20+ almost always kills here. Rabies does kill, and it takes 6 posts for death to be activated.
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Treasure Hunter
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[Olive]
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Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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Kirie
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Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Mar 22, 2024 2:35 pm

“ except the final one which shortens down to 4 posts if their Endurance drops below half of Kitsui's Strength.”

I’m not a fan of this addendum because the gamey thing to do would be to set your strength to like 10 or something so anyone over 5 strength automatically activates this caveat. Obviously not what you’re doing but you’d be setting a precedent for it.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Mar 22, 2024 7:33 pm

Fixed.
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Shoshiki, Amaya
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H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Mar 25, 2024 8:43 pm

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Post by Kabu » Sun Mar 31, 2024 3:17 pm

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