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Post by Checkmate » Wed Dec 21, 2016 8:23 am

Tired of writing that insanely long bio for that great character idea you have? Can't come up with enough of a personality? Then you have come to the right place! I will, for a small fee, write an appearance, a personality, custom jutsu, or even a full length bio for said great character idea. Just post here with your request, and I will deliver! The pricing system is as follows:
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Personality1001 Point
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History2001 Point
Custom Jutsu1 custom jutsu2 Points
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Satisfaction guaranteed. If anything I write is held up in the registry, I'll fix it free of charge. If for any reason we can't get the jutsu/weapon/item/ability/etc through, I'll replace it. All transactions are final, but in the case of a scrapped character idea, you may be eligible for Store Credit.

If I write more than you asked for, it's free.

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JinanAppearance3CompletePaidPidgeonPersonality, Appearance, History, Jutsu~In Progress-JinanJutsu50Complete[url=viewtopic.php?&t=8063288/1/?x=90#new]Paid[/center]GaraJutsu35Complete-[/url]
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Post by Rain21199 » Wed Dec 28, 2016 5:37 am

Character Name: viewtopic.php?&t=5953983/1/
Your request: Appearance (100), Personality (200), History (600)
Budget: I'll give you 8 points for this.

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Post by Gara » Wed Dec 28, 2016 1:48 pm

Need help editing my history Check.

It was not until days later, during a fight with some wild dogs, that Inari had discovered that his body had mutated. One of the dogs had bitten his forearm, and he had felt the dog’s teeth hit bone, but once his arm was freed Inari saw something he could not believe. His body had begun healing itself, without him using any form of Ninjutsu. It did not heal very fast, but after a few hours it was as if he had never been bitten.
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Post by Checkmate » Thu Dec 29, 2016 2:17 pm

@Gara

It was not until days later, during a fight with some wild dogs, that Inari had discovered that his body had mutated. One of the dogs had bitten his forearm, and he had felt the dog’s teeth hit bone, but once his arm was freed Inari saw something he could not believe. His body had begun healing itself, without him using any form of Ninjutsu. It did not heal very fast, but after a few hours it was as if he had never been bitten. While the dog, though it more resembled a Dire Wolf, was latched on to Inari's arm, the rest of his team had been locked in their own fights. Though he had not realized it, Inari's sensei had lead the group into the ambush to test their mettle, and to see if any of them would rise to the challenge of taking control of the group should he be unable to give commands. Inari had risen to the challenge.

While the Jounin fought off three of the biggest Dire Wolves, Inari had done his best to keep a cool head, and direct his teammates into action. Due to the size of the animals, and their enhanced physical capabilities, the only advantages that the ninja had was their chakra, and Inari had used that as best as he could. Inari had maneuvered his teammates in a figure eight until the wolves had been side by side, and used his strongest Guided Arrow technique to shoot through the rib cages of both animals. Once his teammates' opponents had been killed, they had both helped him to free his arm from the animal's mouth, and broke it's spine to kill it. Just when they had prepared to help their sensei, he had killed all three animals.

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Post by Gara » Thu Dec 29, 2016 3:06 pm

I need 8 D rank tomahawk Taijutsu, and I will need you to describe http://orig05.deviantart.net/199b/f/201 ... 8mum8m.png this picture for me please.
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Post by Checkmate » Sat Dec 31, 2016 5:40 am

[Tomahawk Style • Dual Wielding]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Having been trained from childhood in the use of tomahawks, the user has become adept in their use, able to utilize them just as well or better than any other weapon regardless of the hand used, either right or left.

[Tomahawk Style • Release]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Tomahawks are useful for both slashing and throwing, but to one not trained in their use, it will be hard to hit the right rotation and force needed to strike true. The user is able to throw her tomahawks and strike a target with any part of the weapon she desires.

[Tomahawk Style • Block]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Though not strictly defensive weapons, tomahawks are sturdy enough to block most traditional weapons without breaking. The user is able to block incoming attacks in such a way that the tomahawks do not lock together or become unusable, and also in a way that will help absorb the shock of an attack. This ensures that unnecessary damage is not done to her weapons of choice.

[Tomahawk Style • Sweep]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Sound footing and balance is a must in combat, and many take it for granted. Using this simple technique, the user will open with a feint, maybe slashing across the target's chest to draw their attention there, and will then bring her tomahawk down past the target's legs before ripping it up as hard as she can, likely sweeping the target off their legs or at least knocking them off balance and causing some damage.

[Tomahawk Style • Counter]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user has learned to block with one hand while attacking with another. Using this technique, and taking advantage of the dual wielding nature of her style, the user will block an incoming attack with one hand and release a slashing attack with the other, choosing the ideal side to both block and attack so that the target's back or other easy target is exposed.

[Tomahawk Style • Disarm]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Being adept at the art of maintaining control of her own weapons, the user is aware that disarming an opponent can quickly turn the tide of battle in her favor. Because of this, she has learned to block incoming attacks in such a way that she is able to lock a weapon with either one or both of her weapons before twisting and trying to wrench the opponent's weapon free from their grasp. This requires that the user's [Taijutsu+Strength+Speed]/3 be higher than the target's [Strength].

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Post by Checkmate » Tue Jan 03, 2017 2:23 am

Personality for Rain:

Zakuro is fiercely loyal and unwavering in his resolve to protect the ones he loves, namely those from his village. The thought that he might one day face a challenge too strong for him to overcome frightens him, driving him to train and excel beyond all expectations and reason. Because of his desire to protect above all else, he feels that he is handicapped if forced to fight in a team. He is so concerned for the welfare of others that his focus is not complete, and his combat is not as raw is it otherwise would be.

Zakuro is a feral fighter at heart, wishing to hold nothing back. In many ways, this is the only way he can be his true self. When around innocents and allies, however, he feels he must hold back, even to the degree that when he is in the village, surrounded by people, he feels an underlying anxiety of what might happen if the village was to be attacked... again. This anxiety corrodes Zakuro's heart and fondness for the village he loves so much. He feels in many ways like he and the village are star-crossed lovers. He will fight to his last breath to ensure her safety, but he knows he can never truly find peace while this inner war wages on.

Appearance:

At 6'2", Zakuro towers over many of his fellow shinobi, and is easily distinguishable in a crowd. What's more, his body is built strong and sturdy, with each and every muscle toned for perfect application in taijutsu. His strong jawline is blotted with sandy blond stubble, matching his full head of equally blond hair. His hair is naturally thick, and Zakuro styles it with a streamlined look, lightly slicked back to never let it fall in his face. This creates the appearance of having sprinted so quickly that his hair laid flat against his head and stayed there, thought most of the time this is done by simply running his hands back through his hair to ensure it remains in place.

His eyes are alway watching. Always watching. In fact, what one might notice most about Zakuro, are his eyes. Slightly sunken, and shadowed as the result of many sleepless nights and anxiety-riddled days, the boy's eyes have never lost their sharpness. The very color seems to assist in piercing through falsehood and identifying the best course of action in every situation.

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Post by Checkmate » Wed Jan 04, 2017 3:51 am

History for Rain:

The child's first cries called forth thunder from the skies, piercing the night with their crack and his wail. His parents were not supersticious, and thought nothing of it, but the midwife claimed that the skies spoke a forboding prophecy over the young child. He would wield the power of a storm in his hands, but he would never be able to calm the storm inside.

Sure enough, as the child grew, he was a bolt of lightning. He was always fast, and always impulsive. His parents were simple farmers, working the land near Konoha and selling their goods in the village market. Generally, such proximity to a hidden village warded off any kind of bandit raid that might otherwise be expected, but when Zakuro was just seven years old, his family's farm was raided by a particularly bold group of men on horses. Even at that young age, Zakuro's instincts led him to protect the ones he loved. He didn't think twice about throwing himself headlong into action, bolting out to challenge the offenders with his parents, afraid for their son's life, running after him.

The men took great sport in beating the boy nearly to death, the consequence for not yet having learned his place in the world. By the time his parents arived the raiders had already formed an impenitrable barrier around the now bloodied boy, and were laughing at him, challenging him to free himself. The boy's body was broken, but his spirit would never bow. He kept fighting to what would have been his last breath, but before the much stronger men could deliver the final, skull-crushing blow, a blur flashed before Zakuro's eyes, and he was free. He watched through blood-soaked eyes as his hero delt swiftly with his asailants, saving the young boy's life. He was a shinobi from The Hidden Leaf.

Zakuro never forgot what he had seen that day. His parents had always intended for him to take over the farm, but that day he had found his calling. He knew what he had to do. He wanted to never again be helpless, unable to defend his loved ones. He would become a shinobi. This dream, however, was quickly confronted by the reality of his humble origins and his family's lack of funds. His parents could not bare to see their son's dreams dashed, but they knew they could not support him through the shinobi academy.

One day, while on a trip to the market to sell crops with his parents, Zakuro heard a shinobi recruiter advertising scholarships for entry to the accademy, and made it clear that ones heritage would not bar their entry to the academy if they proved themselves worthy. The young boy dedicated the next year of his life to training and becoming all he needed to be to enter the academy. He applied all of his energy and focus to the task, astounding even his parents with his perserverance. Finally, after a year of training, his parents permitted him to apply, and he was accepted on a scholarship.

It came as no surprise to Zakuro's parents that he excelled in taijutsu. He had a level of natural talent that allowed him to quickly overtake many of his classmates in anything physical, but he seemed to always fail at everything relating to ninjutsu and genjutsu, eliciting snickers and bullying from his classmates. Zakuro made sure they paid for every remark, though, and was constantly getting into fights. Those years were a living hell for the boy, but his resolution never wavered. He would become a ninja.

Determination is not everything, however, and even with his exceptional gift for Taijutsu, he barely graduated from the academy with the rest of his class, due to his lack of skill in two thirds of the class material. He was approved for graduation, however, and became an official shinobi of The Hidden Leaf. But his journey had only just begun. Shortly after graduation, and with only a few menial labor missions under his belt, the village came under seige. Two legendary missing ninja, Yakuy and Enma, swept through the village like angels of death, terrorizing all in their wake. Zakuro feared for his life, and for the first time in his life, his fear overcame his will to defend those he cared for.

He found himself hiding as a civilian in a dark building. But there, in the dark, surrounded by so many innocents who were helpless to do anything, Zakuro came to the revelation that he was betraying his village and his honor by cowering in fear.

He rushed out of the building just as the two phantoms passed in front of him. It was an odd phenomenon within Zakuro's conciousness as time both sped up and slowed down. The two shinobi bolted past him with incredible speed, but as they did, the larger of them, Yaku, struck out, his fist connecting with Zakuro with a strength that could crush mountains. At that very moment, the boy's eyes connected with the pale, pleading eyes of a woman he would later know as Hyuuga Aina, a woman they had taken hostage and who was now helplessly being taken hostage. He had no time to think, however, as the strike from Yaku sent him flying back into the building he had been cowering in only moments before. By a strange twist of fate, or maybe a moment of mercy from a hardened criminal, Zakuro survived.

Zakuro awoke in the hospital, surrounded by hundreds of the people he had sworn to protect. The thirteen days he spent there were worse than an eternity in hell as he heaped guilt and shame onto his own conceince. He went into therapy to recover his broken body's strength, including a few days of assisting with the village's reconstruction, but no beam or boulder could be heavier than the weight he felt within. He had been so weak, so helpless.

He determined to grow and increase in strength, returning to the resolution he'd made as a child. He would never again stand by and watch as his village, his family, was in danger. He sought out a Jounin mentor, Nara Shikari. She agreed to train him, and held up her end of the deal. She taught him how to think, how to plan, and how to use his own gifts to his advantage. His newfound dedication led him to months of training harder than anyone else he knew. He was so focused, in fact, that he failed to realize how stron he had become until an encounter with an old peer, Taiga, revealed his new strength and skill. The skirmish ended as soon as it had started, and within moments Zakuro emerged victorious, much to the surprise of all involved. He was no longer the young boy who had graduated from the academy and hidden in fear at his village's hour of need.

At the recomondation of his mentor, Zakuro was selected for the Chuunin Exams, during which he was paired up against a higher ranking opponent. The same anxiety he had felt in the past returned, but this time, he did not allow it to take control. He used it as motivation, and trained all the more. In the end, Zakuro won the fight on a technicality, but he did not allow his pride to hinder his advancement, so he accepted his victory. The final test, however, an interview with Aoi, proved to be even more challenging than the fight itself. During the interview, Zakuro was challenged to identify his core motivation for growth and advancement. It was in that moment, maybe for the first time in his life, that Zakuro finally understood what motivated him and pushed him to excel. He was honor bound to protect the village and its people, no matter the personal cost. And with that goal clearly etched in his mind, Zakuro entered the ranks of a full-fledged shinobi as a Chuunin.

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Post by Checkmate » Wed Jan 04, 2017 7:00 am

3 Jutsu for Gara:

Tomahawk Style • Evasion Release
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Though a minimalist in life, Kang is a maximalist in combat. He is able to take advantage of every oportunity and use it to his advantage. To accomplish this, he is able to swiftly dive out of the way of an incoming attack, attempting to get behind the opponent. He will then throw a tomahawk at the now exposed target's back, attempting to strike at their blind spot.

Tomahawk Style • Double Shot
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Kang is able to isolate individual targets within his mind and command two hands to act almost of their own acord. Using this ability, Kang will release both tomahawks at two different targets without losing accuracy on either one of them.

Tomahawk Style • Safety
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Kang is accustomed to doing all sorts of things with his tomahawks in hand. Because of this, he has learned to perform all activities with weapons in hand without risking hurting himself. This is done by twisting the blades so they are flat against him or out of the way when performing any kind of roll or evading maneuver.

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Post by Checkmate » Wed Jan 04, 2017 7:06 am

Appearance (paid) and Jutsu (not paid) for Sinful.

[Name] dresses to satisfy both movement and fashion. Her body has developed generously, and she enjoys showing off her curves, though she might never admit it. She wears a pair of lightweight sandals strapped to her feet, and thigh-high stockings that accentuate her slender legs and come almost high enough to meet a short skirt and spandex shorts. Her blouse matches her skirt, dark blue with silver-blue trim. It wraps around her torso and is held fast with a long light blue sash that trails behind her as she moves. The shirt itself has a very low neckline, and shows a fishnet undershirt that does nothing to mask her body's shape. The symbol of her village is displayed on the back of each of her long, fingerless gloves, which come up to her shoulders, leaving only a small space of skin naked between the tight black material and her sleeveless shirt. Over her shirt, but under the sash, is a kind of corset, hugging her waist and providing a bit of protection without hindering movement.

At her left hip are two swords, a short wakazashi and a longer katana, sheathed in a regal red. They are attached to the corset, and fastened in place to be always at the ready.

Bubble Gum Style • Bubble Blast
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and flooding her bubble gum with chakra, the user will blow a bubble. The bubble will then launch at a target with a speed of 5. Upon contact, or with a little extra chakra from the user, it will explode with the force of one exploding tag and covering everything with 5 strength sticky bubble gum for up to 3 posts.

Bubble Gum Style • Bubble Pop
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and flooding her bubble gum with chakra, the user will blow a bubble, launching it at the target with a speed of 5. Upon contact, the bubble will burst into a sticky mass, attaching to everything withing a 1m radius and holding it all together with a strength of 5 for up to 3 posts.

Bubble Gum Style • Bubble Breath
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and flooding her bubble gum with chakra, the user will blow a bubble. The bubble will then launch at a target with a speed of 5, aiming for their face. Upon impact, the bubble will pop, wrapping around the target's face with a strength of 5 and preventing sight, smell, and breathing unless the target has more than 5 strength. This lasts for 3 posts.

Bubble Gum Style • Bubble Cell
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and flooding her bubble gum with chakra, the user will blow a bubble. The bubble will expand and shoot at a target with a speed of 10. If the target is struck, the bubble will try to absorb the target into itself, trapping them within and holding with a strength of 10. The bubble will last for 4 posts, or until broken. If broken before the 4 post limit, everything inside will be covered with sticky bubble gum for the remainder of the duration.

Bubble Gum Style • Sticky Hands
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and flooding her bubble gum with chakra, the user will blow a bubble. The bubble will then shoot at the target's hands at a speed of 10. Upon impact, the bubble will burst into a sticky mass, consuming everything within a 3m radius and pulling it toward the center with a strength of 10. If the target has more than 10 strength, they will be able to break free, though they'll still be sticky. If the target has 10 or less strength, their arms will be stuck to their sides and they will be unable to form hand seals or use their hands for up to 4 posts.

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Post by Checkmate » Fri Jan 06, 2017 5:48 am

For Kit

River of Souls
S-Rank Overlay Genjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and thrusting her hand forward toward the target, the user will target the person who saw the hand pointing at them. Once initiated, the target will enter an overlay in which the entire world crumbles away and is replaced with the user holding the target by the throat over a chasm. The new scene will be lit with a pale, ghostly green light, and the wailing of thousands of damned sould will be heard from below the target's feet. If they look down, they will see that they are being held over a river of souls, all crying out in agony and torment. The user will have the chance to talk to the target, but at the user's will, the target will be dropped into the river of souls. The river will feel like acid upon their skin, and it will feel as if the souls are grabbing weakly at them, trying to drown them in their misery. The river flows in a circle down to a bright green light. After five posts, the target will reach the light and then be released from the genjutsu.

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Post by Jinan B » Wed Jan 11, 2017 2:03 am

this is so cool

That is all.
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Post by Gara » Sat Jan 14, 2017 6:06 am

Okay man i lost my touch. So I need your help again. I need a 3 B rank pyramid of taijutsu that use the upper body, deft hands, sword weapons, stealth, and acrobatics concs. Think assassin's creed more or less. A stealth style based on hidden blades more or less. And for this I will give you 35 points. I'll work with you on skype so that you dont do it alone.
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  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 7
  • Speed: 7
  • Willpower: 5
  • Power Rank: D
  • Chakra Pool: 22
  • Endurance: 20
  • Control: 20
  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 23
  • Willpower: 20
  • Power Rank: B
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  • Endurance: 8
  • Control: 8
  • Strength: 8
  • Speed: 8
  • Willpower: 8
  • Power Rank: D
  • Chakra Pool: 5
  • Endurance: 5
  • Control: 5
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Post by Sanjuro » Sun Jan 15, 2017 1:35 am

Alright, consider me curious.

Character Name: Inuzuka Kazuo
Your request: An ability, something that wouldn't break with his theme as very primal and very Inuzuka. Preferably something I can use without having to pay additional for it, like breaking specialization rules or what have you.
Budget: As much as it takes. As long as what it takes isn't more than 10.
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Hirohito, Hideki Kirigakure Bannin #0047AB
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Post by Checkmate » Tue Jan 17, 2017 3:07 am

For Gara:
36 points

Hidden Blade
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Having become accustomed to carrying weapons through crowded areas, the user has become adept at keeping those weapons hidden at all times. To do this, he must be always aware of who is watching, and use his body, the crowd, shadows, etc to obscure his weapons from view.

Arial Tackle
D-Rank Taijustu Maneuver
Due to the user's proclivity to attack from height, and also to use heights to his advantage, the user has learned to fall large distances without injury. He is able to either land with a roll, or target someone on the ground, landing on them and rolling off again to break his fall. This can also be combined with various attacks if needed.

Body Block
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
When facing a group, it is necessary to use one's surroundings to his advantage. The user will attempt to grab an opponent or even a passerby, and use them as a human shield. When used against an opponent, this can often be combined with a block or parry. Then, the user will put his arm around their neck in a choke hold and use their body to block incoming attacks. He must have at least 5 higher strength than the person to be able to manipulate their body effectively. When he is finished with them, he will often release them with a push, likely sending them sprawling away, possibly into other enemies.

Next
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
When in combat, it is vital that awareness be maintained at all times. However, many neglect to think through their next move before it is time to make it. The user is always aware of his next strike so that even before he has finished with the first attack, he's preparing for the next. This lets him smoothly transition between targets without a moment's hesitation.

Wrists
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will attempt to grab both or one of the target's hands. If successful, he will release his hidden blades into the hands and wrists of the target, likely rendering them useless and causing a good deal of bleeding.

Lost in the Crowd
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user is able to blend in perfectly with a crowd, making him all but invisible to anyone looking on. For anyone who has less Instinct than his, he is able to go unnoticed so long as there are five or more people to blend in with.

Always a way out
C-Rank Taijustu Discipline
Any assassin knows that things can go wrong at any moment. Because of this, the user is always watching, always planning, always mapping out a plan of escape. This allows him to choose the most optimal route at any given moment, even if he is ambushed or surprised.

Patient Perch
C-Rank Taijustu Stance
Sometimes the user must lie in wait for a target to maneuver into the optimal position. Sometimes waiting could take moments, sometimes hours. Most would get cramped and need to move within minutes, but not Kang. He is able to remain in the same position, primed to attack, for hours if need be, without cramping or needing to move.

Sub-Vital Strikes
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
There are times when an assassin must settle for second best to achieve his goal. When the main vital organs are not able to be struck, the user will instead aim for secondary points such as the femoral artery, the lungs, or the iliac artery. These strikes can still be fatal, and will cause much pain if struck, but are not an instant kill.

Disarm
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will attempt to block an incoming weapon attack and then quickly spin and twist the weapon so the opponent has to let go. If the user's (speed+strength+taijutsu)/3 is higher than that of the opponent, the opponent will be unable to hold on to their weapon.

Step
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will predict the target's footfalls while they're running and aim a projectile right where their foot will step. The faster the target is moving, the harder it will be for them to dodge.

Vital Strike
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Having felled many foes, the user has learned exactly where to strike the first time so that the second becomes unnecessary. Depnding on where the target is most heavely defended, the user will strike at the carotid artery in the neck, or under the left arm pit and into the heart. If the strike is successful, the target will die before they hit the ground. If he is able to aim properly, he will strike through the corotid artery and into the spinal cord, for double insurance.

Areal Assassination
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will position himself above his target, being sure to hide himself well enough that the target is not alerted. Then, when the target moves into position below him, he will leap from his hiding place, drawing back arm with his hidden blade extended, and aim to plunge the blade deep into the target's vital organs, usually the jugular vein or the heart.

Brain Spike
B-Rank Taijustu Maneuver
A quick, brutal, and deadly attack. The user will swiftly palm strike the opponent's nose, angling his strike so that it breaks the nose and sends shards into the opponent's brain, killing them instantly. If he is not confident in his strike, he can always augment this with a hidden blade to ensure success.

Silent Death
B-Rank Taijustu Maneuver
The user will use all his skill to approach the target unnoticed. He will then skillfully assassinate his target and immediately begin walking away so that by the time the target falls, the user will be meters away. If his taijutsu is higher than the instinct of everyone in the area, he will be able to escape unnoticed.

Cripple
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will block an incoming physical attack and attempt to spin the target so that their back is facing him, or he will simply attack from their blind spot. In either case, he will aim one of his blades so that is slices into the target's spinal cord. If successful, the target will be paralyzed until they can seek medical aid.

Snap
B-Rank Taijustu Maneuver
The user will maneuver behind a target and put one hand on top of their head, and another on their chin. Then, with one lightning fast movement, the user will rip his hands outward, attempting to snap the target's neck. If the target is unaware of the attack, they will die instantly. If they are aware and try to lock their neck in defense, the user must have 10 higher strength than them to kill them, otherwise he might just tear some muscles.

Army of One
A-Rank Taijustu Maneuver
Having trained his body to the pinacle of human potential and beyond, the user is able to disappear from sight as he moves faster than the eye can percieve. The user will prime his body, not doing any other motion for half a post. Then, in an explosion of movement, the user will seemingly vanish, only being visible if the target's Instinct is higher than -10 his speed. If their instinct is -5 or higher, they will still see him, but he will become a blur. While applying this technique, the user gains +8 speed and +4 strength for one post, allowing him to quickly dispatch entire groups before finally coming to a stop. During this time, his reaction speed will be decreased, incurring a -3 to Instinct for that post. However, due to the nature of the technique, the user will be unable to move at his normal speed or strength for two posts afterward (-2 speed for 2 posts, -2 strength), and will also have a buildup of lactic acid in his muscles, making it painful to move for two posts.

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Post by Checkmate » Fri Jan 27, 2017 5:14 am

BIG SALE! BUY 5 JUTSU GET ONE FREE!

Sale runs until next Friday.

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Post by Jinan B » Fri Jan 27, 2017 11:09 am

THE TIME HAS COME

Kurayami
Your request: Appearence, 300 words. Spoke to you on skype etc etc
Budget: 3 points I guess. Planning to take advantage of da jootso sale so sure you'll get a nice bonus from me at some point
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Post by Ivory Peacock » Fri Jan 27, 2017 4:00 pm

Hakaimono Indra
Your request:
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My first request is a personality for this lovely lady! I am too lazy to write it up, but I do know the basic idea of what I want. She needs to be a bit cold and aloof, though with a fierce loyalty to Suna and those who reside there. She is manipulating, being able to incite emotion within others easily whether through insults or some other medium. She has a deep love for children, but seems to dislike most men as well. I think that's it for the basic outline of her personality, have at it!
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This one is pretty easy! Just follow the picture, except for her eyes. Her right eye is red and her left eye is blue, due to her two Dojutsu.
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This is another thing that I had in my head but was too lazy to write. There are a few points that are absolutely essential to have in her history:
*Her mother was a...lady of the evening.
*She was born with a twin sister (Maybe name her Asura?), though she lacked the Dojutsu
*Her sister is slightly jealous, as she sees Indra as the "gifted" one
*They both entered and graduated the academy as Genin
*They were placed on the same team, alongside a young Henrin boy
*She passes her Chunin Exam, though nearly kills her opponent
*She gets promoted to Jonin, though her sister does not. This leads to a slight rift between them
*She becomes pregnant with the Henrin's child after a torrid affair
*She goes on a mission with her old team in order to bring them closer, only to be ambushed by a bandit group headed by talented Missing Nin
*She loses her child due to stress after the ambush
*Driven by anger and despair, she hunts down and slaughters the bandit group and thus earns the moniker of "The Bloody Angel"

You can do anything you want after that or in between the events ^.^
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There are two spoilers within Indra's app, one for Hand Seal Mastery and one for Silent Killer. I would like all of those to be done, if you could. I think the names should give you an idea of what they should be, but if not then you can PM me with any questions!
I have decided to only keep the Silent Killer spoiler. However, I would like three D-Rank Jutsu, 2 C-Rank jutsu and a B-Rank jutsu made for her Enton, if that's okay. And for my free jutsu, I would like Temari's Sickle Weasel and Great Sickle Weasel techniques made, though with Salamander in the name rather than Weasel.
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Personality: 200 Words (At least) = 2 Points
Appearance (w/pic): 200 Words (At least) = 2 Points
History: Go nuts = Pricing matching words
Jutsu: 10 Custom = 20 Points (Two free 'cause I bought 10)
Total = 24+ Points

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Post by Jinan B » Mon Jan 30, 2017 6:38 am

This request in accordance with Skype chat:
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So yeah, just to reitterate; 6 jutsu for each of my characters. The specs shalt be as follows.

Kirino: Tai basically, you can see his up and coming tai style in his CP, I'm looking for 6 more jutsu, D rank or C rank, that subscribe to that theme.

Katsu: 6 Mokuton jutsu, 3 B rank and 3 A rank. Keep in mind that Katsu is going to eventually be a support based ninja, but at the same time mokuton will probably be his most effective means of attack so switch aggresive/supporting jutsu as you wish. Also just a few notes that may help you: he is a Mokuton body, clan channeling is a thing, and I need these to beat Ty's ass in our thread :)

Ken: Genjutsu: 6 B rank Gen that can work with supplementing his tai and stuff, he also has a bit of a blade theme going for him.

Katashi: Katashi's gonna be a bit of a show off so he'll need some extravagent Shouton to match, pick your rank from D-B at your leisure. If it helps, his crystal is going to be Peridot.

Kurayami: Some sufficiently spooky Genjutsu that'll boost his whole ancient lich vibe. I'm not planning to spend points supporting more than 1 A rank at start up, but feel free to make any part of that pyramid if you wish.

So obviously I wrote this in a hurry and may not have sufficiently fleshed out ideas and stuff, feel free to message me if you need individual jutsu stuffs, or if you want info regarding Katashi or Kurayami
Budget: 50/25 points dependant on deal etc etc
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Post by Nick » Mon Jan 30, 2017 6:45 am

Wait a minute these look like normal prices to me. THIS GUY IS A PHONY! A BIG FAT PHONY!
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Post by Checkmate » Mon Jan 30, 2017 2:55 pm

For Jinan. 50 points. Just let me know how you want them coded and I'll make up a nocode for each one for you.

Kirino:

Skyfall
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Skyfall is a technique that can be added to any flipping technique. Utilizing agility and speed, the user will extend one leg to deliver a kick while flipping, built with power from the flip. The direction and effectiveness of the flip depend on other techniques and ingenuity.

After Thought
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Due to the fast-paced nature of this style, there are times when an opponent's movements change the required path for an attack. Any time a kick does not hit its intended target, the user is able to launch a second kick very quickly, and without retracting the leg entirely. This results in less time for the target to dodge or block, but makes it impossible to strike with full strength, resulting in -3 strength to the follow up kick. This can be repeated, but will likely become predictable after one or two.

Jumping Round House
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will first raise one leg, as if to strike with a round house kick, but at the last moment, he will jump and kick with the other leg, likely catching the opponent off guard, while also kicking with a great deal of power.

Drop Kick
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
One of the few offensive techniques in his repitoir, this technique is used to catch the opponent off guard and force them off balance. Starting with a step or two to build momentum, the user will charge at the opponent and leap forcefully into the air, bringing his legs up together to kick the target with the full force of momentum, body weight, and added force from the kick. This will send the user falling toward the ground, but in a controlled and predictable manner so he can recover with a roll or kip up.

High Rise
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Though he is more accustomed to fighting opponents individually or in small numbers, the user is also able to face many at once. Due to his preference toward having sufficient space to move, any time that he is fighting in a crowd, or if he is surrounded, he will seek to get out of the center as quickly as possible, preventing most of his enemies from converging on him at once. To accomplish this, he will leap into the air, aiming to land a foot on the shoulder of one of his opponents or a bystander. He will then leap from shoulder to shoulder, maintaining balance and momentum so that he is only touching each person for a moment. This allows him to escape from a crowd quickly, and can be combined with other techniques to add aggression to his escape.

Rip Cord
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This technique is often used when a kick is narrowly dodged. The user will bring his second leg up parallel to the first, with the opponent's body part in the middle. He will then wrench his body with all of his might to kick with both legs in a scissor formation. Though this is not performed at full strength (-3), it can catch a target off guard and knock them off balance, or even floor them.

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Katashi:

Insomnia
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling and flooding his mouth and chest with chakra, the user will spit a 5 inch long, 1 inch thick crystal 'probe' at the target, at a speed and strength of 10. Once inside, the probe will try to burrow throug the targets, aiming for the stomach or lungs. Whether or not it reaches its destination, due to any hindrance, it will detonate with the force of three exploding tags.

Missile
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling and flooding his hands with chakra, the user will create a 5 inch long, 1/2 inch thick crystal missile before firing it at the target, at a speed of 35 and a strength of 5. The missile is fully controllable for up to 3 posts, and is usually used to strike at vulnerable points. If possible, the missile will pierce straight through the target, moving on to the next with ease. However, if it is not strong enough to pierce through completely, it will instead shatter inside the target, so that razor sharp flakes are left behind inside the target, causing further damage and pain any time the target moves.

Razor Field
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling and flooding his hands with chakra, the user will slam his hands on the ground, radiating Shouton Chakra across the ground at a speed of 10, and causing the earth around him to 'frost over' with crystal, covering a 10m radius with thin, extremely sharp crystal that shatters under the lightest pressure, and cuts with 30 strength. The Water Walking technique may be used to prevent the crystal from breaking.

Bloody Halo
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling his chakra to his hands, the user will twirl his hands around his body in a circle, creating a spinning halo of crystal spikes, 108 in total. The halo is able to expand or contract, but cannot go more than 5m from the user. While active, the halo spins at a speed of 10 and hits with a strength of 10. It can also be raised or lowered as the user wishes to make sure it is able to prevent anyone from ducking under it or jumping over it.

Doom Cloud
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into his hands, the user will throw his hands into the air, shooting Shouton chakra into the air. This will create a 5m wide floating cloud of crystal shards, each only about one inch long in diameter. There are thousands of shards, which will start swirling around in a green cloud, up to 30m in the air, which can then be controlled by the user up to 30m away at a speed of 10. Then, when the user wishes, within 4 posts, he can make the cloud to 'rain' on the target at a speed and strength of 20.

Shardnado
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling his chakra to his hands, the user will spin his hands around his body in a circle, shooting Shouton chakra into the air around him. This will create a 3m radius whirlwind of crystal shards, each only about one inch long in diameter. There are thousands of shards, which will start swirling around him in a green tornado that moves at a speed and strength of 20.

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Ken:

Blade Wall
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, then draw a sword. Anyone who sees him draw the sword will fall into his genjutsu. From that moment, the sword will begin to multiply laterally, forming a circle around the targets at a speed of 20. The circle will begin to spin at a speed of 20. The swords look and feel physical if touched, and also sound as if they're slicing through the air. Across the next 4 posts, the ring will begin to constrict, becoming steadily smaller until the target is confined within a 3m diameter circle. This lasts for 4 posts. During this time, if the target tries to go over or under the wall, it will appear to follow them, remaining at shoulder level no matter where they go vertically.

Pursuit
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will call out "you will not prevail!" Anyone who hears the trigger will see one of Ken's swords begin to float, point toward the target. Then, the sword will seem to speed toward them at a speed of 20. If it is able to catch them, it will pierce them, ignoring any defenses constructed in its way. If struck, the target will see the sword pierce them, see blood (if applicable), and feel the pain that would be expected from an equivalent stab wound.

No Escape
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will call out "you cannot escape!" Anyone who hears the trigger will see three giant swords descend from the heavens at a speed of 20, blocking their most logical avenue of escape. When the swords strike the ground, the target will hear the swords land, see them, and also feel the ground shaking with the great weight of the blades. Within the next 4 posts, any time the target tries to escape, another set of three blades will descend, blocking any and all attempts at escape. If the target tries to go through the blades, they will feel, hear, and see the blades fall, but will then be met by another set.


No Hands
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will call out "it's out of your hands!" Anyone who hears the trigger will see their hands disappear, and be unable to see or feel their hands for 3 posts. Though technically this does not prevent them from forming hand seals, it makes it much more difficult.

Just Us
B-Ranked Genjutsu Warp
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will look at the target and call out "it's just us, then." If the person he is looking at sees his gaze and hears the phrase, they will see the world around them begin to fade, though not entirely. They will still be able to see everything happening around them, but they will have the distinct impression that they are somehow in an alternate plane, almost like a spirit world. This only minimally effects the senses, but it effects all six, dulling them slightly without impacting reaction time. Furthermore, if they attempt to call out to a comrade, it will seem as if their comrade cannot hear them. This is be because, though they think they're talking and making noise, they are actually only moving their mouth. With a good deal of concentration, they will be able to overcome this inhibition if they are aware of it, even though they will hear their own voice.

Latency
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will point at a target and say, "you'll never see me coming." If the person he is looking at sees his gaze and hears the phrase, it will effect their vision powerfully. For the next two posts, any time Ken moves, it will seem as if his movements happen a split second later than in reality, but only outside of a 10 foot radius. Any movements within this radius will be seen and comprehended in real time. This is often used in conjunction with Ken's impressive speed to quickly close distances without an opponent having much time to react.

The Titans
B-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will thrust his arm into the air and shout "titans!" All who see and hear these triggers will fall prey to the genjutsu. To begin, they will see Ken grow from his already impressive height to double that size, his weapons seeming to scale with him. While this growth is happening, they will hear wind rushing above them as ten equally massive giants fall from the sky in a 10m circle around the target, crashing to the ground with a thunderous quaking of the earth. Each of the titans looks like one of Ken's deities. The titans are able to attack, but have no physical substance, being intended for intimidation more than anything.
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Kurayami:

Chill
C-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will make the sound of breathing out. Anyone who hears him exhale will begin to feel the temperature around them grow cold, becoming no freezing, but uncomfortably cold. In addition, the air will feel 'heavy' and 'thick' as if there is a presence there for up to 5 posts.

Ambient Evil
C-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will allow himself to be seen, usually by simply stepping into view. Anyone who sees him for the first time will immediately feel goosebumps, chills running up their spine, and the hair on the back of their neck stand up. These three sensations are likely enough to give anyone the heeby geebies for up to 4 posts.

Weeping Woman
D-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will suddenly stop and slowly turn his head, as if trying to hear something. Anyone who sees him do this will begin to hear the sound of a woman weeping in the distance. It will be clear by her voice that she is alone, afraid, and in pain. This lasts for 5 posts.

Echoes in the Dark
D-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will cough a throaty cough. Anyone who hears this will then hear everything the user says as if it is coming from all around them, and also echoing through the air, giving him an ominously hollow voice for the next 5 posts.

True Phantom
A-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will spread his arms wide as if to welcome an attack. For the next 6 posts, anyone who saw him do this will no longer be able to see him dodge something, so long as he returns to his original position within that same post. To those effected, it will seem like he never moved, and that the attack passed right through him. If the user tries to attack in any way during this post, the target will instantly be broken free from the illusion.

Ghost
D-Ranked Genjutsu Illusion
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will physically move from his location. All who saw him begin to move will not be able to see his legs moving any more, but will instead see him simply hover. If he uses his legs to attack, this effect will be broken.
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Katsu:

Extension
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra through his body, saturating the wooden body with chakra. During the next five posts, the user will be able to shift and extend any body part up to 10m at a speed and strength of 20. This can be used in conjunction with a punch or kick to add range, and can also be used to shift the shape of his body parts to be more suitable for bashing or piercing.

Golem
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra through his body, saturating the wooden body with chakra. When he is finished, the wood of his body will begin to grow out in tendrils, forming into the shape of a golem, 10ft tall. The golem is created with a thick, 30lb club and has the following stats: Strength: 13 , Speed: 12, Taijutsu: 10, Stamina: 10.

Surprise
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra through any of his Mokuton creations he is touching, sending a large amount of chakra to a specific point. When he wills, that point will explode with the force of 5 exploding tags, sending splinters ripping through anything in range.

Crossbow
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra into his arm, causing tendrils of wood to grow and form into a wrist-mounted crossbow. The crossbow is capable of firing projectiles at a speed of 25 for up to 30m, and will continuously generate and fire up to 10 bolts per post for as long as the channel is maintained.

Shifting Labyrinth
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra through his body, saturating the wooden body with chakra before slamming his hands on the ground. At a speed of 20, the ground will begin to erupt with a thick root structure, growing taller and wider in the form of a maze, 100m wide, with a strength of 30. Any time an enemy tries to touch the walls, the tendrils of wood will grow out aggressively in an attempt to trap them. A comparatively thin canopy also forms after the walls have grown 15 ft tall. The canopy is a trap, however, intended to lure a shinobi to try and jump or climb to escape. Even though the canopy is thinner, it is equally as strong as the rest of the labyrinth and will aggressively try to grab anyone who comes near it, grabbing and holding with a strength of 30. By casting this technique again, the user is able to completely change the layout of the maze, able to keep someone trapped for as long as his chakra lasts.

Crater Maker
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
After having already created a wrist-mounted launcher, the user will channel chakra into one of the bolts. When he is finished, he will launch the projectile, causing it to explode with a force of 7 exploding tags upon impact, sending splinters and debris flying.
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Post by Checkmate » Mon Jan 30, 2017 3:15 pm

For Jinan. 3 points. Let me know ASAP what edits you want me to make.

Kurayami is a haunting sight to behold. Even from afar, it is clear that this... thing is no longer human, but perhaps once was. He stands an average height of 5'10", but that is the only average thing about him. Looking more like a skeleton than a man, Kurayami has features beyond gaunt. Though there are still bits of dried flesh clinging to his skeleton, most of it has long since fallen off, leaving a ghostly walking skeleton shadow behind.

Kurayami's most harrowing feature by far, even more than his body, is his eyes. If it is true that the eyes are the window to the soul, then Kurayami's soul has been destroyed and left a void, for that is all that can be seen when beholding his visage. His eyes, though physical, are the purest expression of blackness, matching the heart that sits mounted in the center of his chest. From this heart run dark tendrils, though their purpose is not clear, since there is clearly no blood left to fill his veins.

It is unclear how much of his body truly remains, for he wears a cloak fabricated from the darkness itself. It is never still, always seeming to shift and blow, even when there is no wind. The cloak covers his lower body, shoulder, and back, and has hood to cover what is left of his skull, but even that has been corrupted and misshapen. His nose is a hollow nothingness, and his chin seems to have been drawn to a point. No matter his mood, the shape of his face is always that of a malevolent grin as his black eyes shift hungrily about for a soul to devour, or for purity to taint.

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Post by Gara » Sun Feb 05, 2017 3:14 pm

Alrighty Check, I need some more stuff ole buddy ole pal. I need a style write up for the last set of jutsu you made me, the ones for Kang, and I need thirty five pints worth of Hyouton jutsu that are designed to work with the other jutsu you made for him. xD
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  • Speed: 7
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  • Chakra Pool: 22
  • Endurance: 20
  • Control: 20
  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 23
  • Willpower: 20
  • Power Rank: B
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  • Speed: 8
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  • Speed: 10
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Post by Checkmate » Sat Feb 18, 2017 6:57 am

@Gara: 35 points.

Assassin Style
Kang is a trained assassin - a lethal killer. By combining the skills taught to him by the village and some he's acquired along the way, he has truly become a living weapon. The Assassin Style is one breeding efficiency with brutality. If he can sneak up and finish the target with one swift movement and vanish without a trace, he will. However, when things get a little messy, he can't very well turn tail and run. He must complete the mission, no matter the cost. The Assassin's style combines [Stealth], [Deft Hands], [Upper Body], [Perception], [Acrobatics], [Medicine], and [Sword Weapons] concentrations to create a truly lethal style.

Liquid Hyouton
By slightly shifting the ratio of Suiton and Fuuton chakra already present in Hyouton techniques, the user is able to give their Hyouton a liquid quality. This is mostly aesthetic, but can provide limited additional utility. The main difference is that many of the techniques have an "enveloping" quality, similar to Suiton. This allows them to stick to opponents. This is not an additional passive, but instead an active ability that must be mentioned in the technique.


Hyouton • Don't let them in
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his body, the user will stomp on the ground, causing 4 walls of ice, each up to 8 feet wide and 10 feet tall, to rise up within 20m of his position. Though these walls only have 5 strength and form at 5 speed, and are therefore not useful for defending against ninja, they are useful for blocking off passageways and preventing entry into an arena of battle for civilians.

Hyouton • Don't let them see
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Prereq: An Ice Blade
After channeling chakra into one of his ice blades, the user will try to stab the target. If successful, he will break the blade off in the wound. Then, with a single hand seal, he is able to cause the blade to explode outward with the force of one exploding tag, sending frozen shrapnel in all directions.

Hyouton • Conceal
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his hand, the user will attempt to strike at the target's eyes. If he is able to get within 12" of the target's eyes, Hyouton chakra will lash out at 5 speed toward their eyes, causing first degree frostnip, which will make it hard to see and keep their eyes open.

Hyouton • Don't feel
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his hands, the user will attempt to strike at the target's hands. If he is able to make contact with one or both hands, hyouton chakra will strike out and cause first degree frostnip on the hands, making it harder to hold weapons and make hand seals.

Hyouton • Don't let them know
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his ice blades, the user will stab the target and then break off the blades. The blades will very quickly melt, leaving only a gaping hole, with no murder weapon.

Hyouton • Well now they know
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his hand, the user will create a one inch diameter razor disk of Hyouton chakra before attempting to palm strike a target, jamming the disk into the contact point. Then, with a single seal, the disk will begin to spin at a speed of 15, cutting with a strength of 5, while also expanding to become 18" in diameter.

Hyouton • Let it Go
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his body, the user create a cloak of liquid Hyouton before rapidly moving up to 20m away, leaving the cloak behind. This is used to escape physical attacks, and doubles as a trap. If the attacker runs through the cloak, it will latch onto them with a strength of 10, causing 2nd degree frostnip over their whole body instantly. If the attacker does not remove the cloak, third degree frostbite will occur after three posts.

Hyouton • Can't hold it back anymore
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his body, the user will release the chakra in the form of a freezing blast of hyouton chakra, exploding outward from his body and causing second degree frostnip to anyone within 2m. This is often used when the user is surrounded by many weaker opponents.

Hyouton • Here I stand
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his body, the user will prepare to be struck. When the attack comes in, liquid Hyouton will shoot out from his body at a speed of 10 in a spiral, aiming to wrap around and envelop the attack, causing 2nd degree frostnip upon contact and creating an opposing force, decreasing the strength of the attack by 3.

Hyouton • Shing
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into his arms, the user will create two ice blades, exactly like his hidden blades. This is used to replace a blade that has been fired. These blades can be broken off inside of a target, in which case they will cause 3rd degree frostbite after 3 posts of exposure.

Hyouton • Chains of the Abyss
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his ice claws, the user will attempt to stab a target. If successful, the claws will break off and rapidly elongate at a speed of 20, transforming from claws into chains that shoot down into the ground, holding the target with 20 strength.

Hyouton • Liquid Nitro
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his hands, the user will spin around, spraying everyone in a 15m radius with liquid Hyouton. The spray will spread on impact, creating 3rd degree frostbite on impact.

Hyouton • Geyser
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his hands and feet, the user will create steady streams of liquid Hyouton at a strength of 20 and speed of 20 that will coat anyone within 15m with freezing chakra, unless they are able to evade.

Hyouton • No Escape
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra through his body, the user will slam hands on the ground, causing ice to rocket across the ground at a speed of 25. The ice will chase the target for up to 50m and if it catches up to them it freezes their feet.

Hyouton • Frozen
A-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of his blades, the user will attempt to stab the target. If successful, all of the chakra will flood into the target, racing out at a speed of 25 to freeze the whole body.

Hyouton • Frozen Hand
A-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into his hands, the user will attempt to strike the target. Every strike that lands within the next 5 posts will cause B-Rank Frostbite damage.

Hyouton • Frost Bite
A-Rank Ninjutsu
A truly feral technique usually saved for targets to be eliminated with prejudice, this is a jutsu that will almost instantly result in death. By channeling chakra to his mouth and teeth, the user will grow ice fangs over his canines. Then, if he is able to bite a target, he will inject a massive flood of Hyouton chakra into the target, freezing their veins as the hyouton travels to both the brain and the heart. The target's veins will quickly turn black, and their skin will turn a pale blue, emanating from the wound at a speed of 25 until death is final. The only way to stop the spreading once the wound has landed is to sever the limb that was bitten before the blackness spreads. But if he is able to bite the torso or neck, defense is futile.

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Post by Checkmate » Mon Mar 06, 2017 2:34 am

Ivory Peacock:
Fri Jan 27, 2017 9:00 pm
Hakaimono Indra
Your request:
PersonalityShow
My first request is a personality for this lovely lady! I am too lazy to write it up, but I do know the basic idea of what I want. She needs to be a bit cold and aloof, though with a fierce loyalty to Suna and those who reside there. She is manipulating, being able to incite emotion within others easily whether through insults or some other medium. She has a deep love for children, but seems to dislike most men as well. I think that's it for the basic outline of her personality, have at it!
AppearanceShow
This one is pretty easy! Just follow the picture, except for her eyes. Her right eye is red and her left eye is blue, due to her two Dojutsu.
HistoryShow
This is another thing that I had in my head but was too lazy to write. There are a few points that are absolutely essential to have in her history:
*Her mother was a...lady of the evening.
*She was born with a twin sister (Maybe name her Asura?), though she lacked the Dojutsu
*Her sister is slightly jealous, as she sees Indra as the "gifted" one
*They both entered and graduated the academy as Genin
*They were placed on the same team, alongside a young Henrin boy
*She passes her Chunin Exam, though nearly kills her opponent
*She gets promoted to Jonin, though her sister does not. This leads to a slight rift between them
*She becomes pregnant with the Henrin's child after a torrid affair
*She goes on a mission with her old team in order to bring them closer, only to be ambushed by a bandit group headed by talented Missing Nin
*She loses her child due to stress after the ambush
*Driven by anger and despair, she hunts down and slaughters the bandit group and thus earns the moniker of "The Bloody Angel"

You can do anything you want after that or in between the events ^.^
JutsuShow
There are two spoilers within Indra's app, one for Hand Seal Mastery and one for Silent Killer. I would like all of those to be done, if you could. I think the names should give you an idea of what they should be, but if not then you can PM me with any questions!
I have decided to only keep the Silent Killer spoiler. However, I would like three D-Rank Jutsu, 2 C-Rank jutsu and a B-Rank jutsu made for her Enton, if that's okay. And for my free jutsu, I would like Temari's Sickle Weasel and Great Sickle Weasel techniques made, though with Salamander in the name rather than Weasel.
Budget:
TotalShow
Personality: 200 Words (At least) = 2 Points
Appearance (w/pic): 200 Words (At least) = 2 Points
History: Go nuts = Pricing matching words
Jutsu: 10 Custom = 20 Points (Two free 'cause I bought 10)
Total = 24+ Points
I'm going to deny this request. I'm closing the shop and I've honestly made no progress on it.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

Shop closed.

Note: As of this moment, Gara still owes 35 points.

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