Cinder release and mark of kojin ability

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Cinder release and mark of kojin ability

Post by Diatenshi » Wed Feb 21, 2018 12:40 am

So I wanted approval on the advanced release, which is basically a solid form of Katon, and the ability and abilities origin(ie can it be done as a plotboard)

Cinder release:
Cinder Release
Due to the Mark of Kojin and his ability to utilize katon, Masaru is able to utilize Cinder, an advanced extension composed of Mokuton and Katon. Cinder release is the ability to create smoldering coals from burning wood. Cinder has a Smolder effect.
Passive (Smolder)Show
Cinder's passive is the corruption of Mokuton's. Where Mokuton grows through creation, Cinder grows through destruction converting what it destroys into itself. Cinder's effect is smoldering, which means that all cinder jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread burns from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. These secondary smolders require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Burns caused by Cinder jutsu also get worse over time, the burn smoldering slowly. Masaru is only immune to the passive of his cinder release on his left arm with the seal as the seal restrains the katon chakra that makes up cinder.

The rate at which animals and people are burned is as shown post# x burn degree
123D:1
C:1
B:1
A:2
S:2
D:1
C:1
B:2
A:2
S:3
D:1
C:2
B:3
A:3
S:4
Example JutsuShow
D-RankShow
Cinder • Cinder Weapon Creation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 cinder basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in his left hand. These tools have a strength of 5. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Desolate Defender
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user causes several waves of cinders to form on his left arm, forming a 5x3 foot, 4 inch bulwark. The bulwark has a strength of 6 and forms at a speed of 4. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Desolate Piercer
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user causes a 1'by1'' diameter stake to grow out of his left palm. The stake has a strength of 6 and forms at a speed of 4. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Desolate Destroyer
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user causes several waves of cinders to form on his left arm, forming a 1'x1' gauntlet. The gauntlet has a strength of 6 and forms at a speed of 4. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Desolate Bullet
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the ninja gathers Cinder chakra in his left hand. The chakra forms a small 1" diameter ball that travels at a speed of 5, up to 20 yards away.
C-RankShow
Cinder • Smoldering Wall
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user causes several pillars of cinders to emerge from the ground on each side of themselves. These pillars then bend and meet halfway locking together and creating a half-dome in front of the user (and underground) at a speed of 10. This half dome has a 4 meter radius and has a durability of 10 strength. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Smoldering Pillar
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user causes a large 2x2x2 meter beam of wood to emerge from the ground within 15 meters of themselves at a speed of 10 and strength of 10. Targets unable to get out of the way of the pillar will be hit by it, and those with less then 10 strength will be launched into the air. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Burning Mallet
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user focuses on an already existing source of their Cinder, causing a burning mallet with a meter diameter to grow out of it and move at a speed of 8, up to 6 meters away from the source into a target. If it successfully hits a target, it does so with 12 strength. Applies the passive on contact.
B-RankShow
Cinder • Burning Prison
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, the user focuses on a target or group of targets within 20 meters and causes burning beams to emerge from the ground around them at a speed of 20. These beams connect overhead and underground, forming a roof and bars with about two inches of space between them. It has a durability of 20 and can be as large as 6x6x6 meters. Applies the passive on contact.

Cinder • Burning Grove
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, the user focuses on a target or group of targets within 20 meters and causes a thick burning grove to emerge from the ground around them at a speed of 20. Encompassing an area of 36 meter diameter. The area becomes more and more hazardous as the entire grove will burn over the course of 3 post. Applies the passive on contact.

Mark of Kojin:
The Mark of Kojin is a blessing from an evil fire pheonix spirit. The blessing grants Masaru the affinity for katon chakra despite his Senju clan origins as well as regeneration. Although this blessing granted Masaru new strength, it was not a blessing from a benevolent spirit and as such has had a few side effects on his mental state reflecting the dark nature of the blessing's origin spirit.
EnhancementsShow
Regeneration

Katon chakra affinity
Side effectsShow
Distorted personality.
Although at his core Masaru is still the same person, his personality has darkened, becoming moody and more irritable. He now has anger management issues and occasionally needs to be put in a time out by his comrades.

Burning Rage
Along with the anger issues Masaru has been found to go into a beserker rage. Usually only occuring when someone crosses his bottom line such as killing his comrades or attacking the village of Konoha. During his beserker rage Masaru's Ninjutsu, and genjutsu
drop by three each, and his taijutsu increasing +3 and his speed increasing +3. During this state the katon from his Blessing leaks out and forms body of flame surrounding him as the chakra leaks from his pores. This flame harms him burning his skin, however due to his regeneration only the outermost layer of tissue burns becoming charred and blackened. His stamina drops by an additional 5 from the leaking chakra and the flames can cause 3rd degree burns on contact. As a result of the rage itself Masaru begins to act feral losing the ability to distinguish friend from foe and his attacks becoming simple and straightforward. The adrenaline boost from the rage increases his strength by 6.
Outline of origin:

Masaru encounters fire spirit during mission, investigating disappearances from a nearby village

Spirit tortures Masaru expecting him to break

Masaru refuses believing in Konoha's will of fire

After Severe torture the spirit acknowledges Masaru's will/temperment

Spirit saves Masaru's life instead of ending it and leaves him with a blessing

The spirit warns masaru not to trespass its territory again then drops off his body outside its territory

Masaru wakes up and returns to village to report his investigation.[/spoiler]
Tools of WarShow
Burning BrightShow


Will of Fire-
Senju Masaru

Genin
[color=orange]


Light of Hope-
Awai Akihiro

Genin
[color=red]
Bloody MistShow


Wintery Hunter-
Tenshi Aisu

Chuunin
[color=#15aabc]


Viral Menace-
Toukai Chisaki

Chuunin
[color=#ff0080]
Free AgentsShow


King of Pirates-
Ryoshi Kaisui

C-Rank MN
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The Doctor-
Shoutohiro Toshi

C-Rank Samurai
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Cinder release and mark of kojin ability

Post by Yura » Mon Feb 26, 2018 6:16 am

What exactly is the 'cinder' though? Is it a half burned stick that spreads the passive when it strikes something? Is it a more of a particulate style that blows around 'coals' that burn and spread? Is it chakra that has no real physical manifestation but can apply a passive effect? Or is it literally just fire that burns differently? You do a lot to describe what it does, but not really what it is. The jutsu don't help much because you could literally make weapons out of just about anything including a particulate style/pure flames.
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The Mark of Kojin is a blessing from an evil fire pheonix spirit. The blessing grants Masaru the affinity for katon chakra despite his Senju clan origins as well as regeneration. Although this blessing granted Masaru new strength, it was not a blessing from a benevolent spirit and as such has had a few side effects, namely changes in Masaru's personality, which has become a bit darker and slightly sadistic.
If there are side effects, list all of the side effects, especially if they have combat relevance.
NameRankVillageTeamColor
Nara, ShikariBanninKonohagakureMamorinuku#fb8a00
Enkouten, MitsuoJouninIwagakureTeam 18|Jousai#ff2200
Inji, AyakoC-RankWaterfall#8080ff

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Cinder release and mark of kojin ability

Post by Diatenshi » Mon Feb 26, 2018 12:33 pm

Defined the side effects as personality changes and defined what cinder actually is
Tools of WarShow
Burning BrightShow


Will of Fire-
Senju Masaru

Genin
[color=orange]


Light of Hope-
Awai Akihiro

Genin
[color=red]
Bloody MistShow


Wintery Hunter-
Tenshi Aisu

Chuunin
[color=#15aabc]


Viral Menace-
Toukai Chisaki

Chuunin
[color=#ff0080]
Free AgentsShow


King of Pirates-
Ryoshi Kaisui

C-Rank MN
[color=#7fffd4]


The Doctor-
Shoutohiro Toshi

C-Rank Samurai
[color=green]

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Cinder release and mark of kojin ability

Post by Kabu » Thu Mar 01, 2018 5:38 pm

This needs to be moved either to help and suggestions or to a test thread as we can't currently approve it as a mod due to there not being a character associated with it anywhere on the forum.

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