[Denied]Furutsutsuri Senju

[Diatenshi]

Your ability table seems off and you have a few floating brackets in you concentrations

[Diatenshi]

What j meant by the ability table being off is the table shows two columns but you have all your text squeezed into the first vs utilizing the second column

[Varian]

You get 20 points worth of starting equipment I would recommend using even if it is just for throwables like Kunai or Shuriken.

[Yura]

I'm only counting 39 stat points. Genin get 40 so you can have one more

[Nick]

Clothing/Accessories << Can you elaborate on "Samurai gear"? Does he wear a full set of samurai armor at all times? Or does he wear the more formal clothing like this?

Charge style fuuinjutsu is restricted to ninjutsu specialists only. If you'd like to be a ninjutsu specialist and take advantage of this, please denote it on your sheet somewhere (usually in the abilities section) as per the specialist rules.

After this I think you're probably good.

[Nick]

You've got ninjutsu specialist titled in the combat mentality section, which is technically fine since there's no specific place for it, but you do also need to state which specialist stats you're taking as a ninjutsu specialist, which can be found in the rules I linked above as well.

Most people denote this by putting an asterisk next to the chosen stats in their stat lineup, bolding them, or whatever works for you.

[Niro]

That's one old looking 11 year old lol

Please be more descriptive with his clothing, try to write it as if he didn't have a picture.

Ninjutsu:10(50) <-Please just mark Specialist stats with a * or _ after the stat. Like so [b]Ninjutsu:*[/b] 10
Taijutsu:5
Genjutsu:1
Stamina:10(50)
Control:4(50)
Strength:2(50)
Speed: 3
Instinct:5

Primary Affinity: <-This should read Mokuton

[Niro]

As it reads now, with the (50) next to the stats, it implies they're somehow 50 rather than a specialized stat. Putting a special character onto the stat which is being specialized is much easier on everyone when it comes to knowing what is and what isn't a specialized stat.

[Yura]

Post when you make the changes. I'll give you another day or two before denying the app.

[Kao]

): If you change your mind and need the nocode, let us know

[Denied]