[Summon] Wakinyan

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[Summon] Wakinyan

Post by Takumi » Mon Dec 30, 2019 4:17 pm

Username: Takumi
Owner: Arashi Takumi
Wakinyan (Wax)
General Information Type: Summon - Thunderbird
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Appearance: Wakinyan is a Thunderbird, an ancient species believed to be myth, and tied closely to the Arashi family. When manifesting a physical form, Wakinyan appears as a large bird of prey, standing two meters tall. He has dark feathers with hints of blue. Small sparks of lightning seem to appear from the ends of his feathers as he moves. Wakinyan’s beak, like many birds that feed on aquatic life, is hooked. Both his talons and beak are razor sharp and appear stone gray in color. Instead of normal eyes, Wakinyan’s eyes are entirely white, appearing to be entirely lightning. In addition, small sparks of lightning occasionally dart out from his eyes, adding to the appearance. Image.
Personality: Wakinyan is a very protective creature, serving Takumi loyally as both an adviser and as a soldier. The two see each other almost as brothers, and are both incredibly loyal to one another. While he is often sarcastic and quick to lash out at others, he is generally truthful and to the point. He is a very impatient creature, and has little patience for diplomatic measures, often criticizing Takumi for choosing the tactful approach to solving problems. Usually his first instinct when facing a problem is to just shock it into submission, literally. His combat mentality is very straightforward: use Raiton to overwhelm an opponent. He often relies on Takumi for battlefield strategy, and will happily follow through on any plans the shinobi creates, although often with at least one wry remark. Wax is generally a proud bird, hailing from a very noble race of spirits. Because of the connections to Takumi’s family, Wakinyan hopes to work hard with Takumi in order to make both families proud and bring honor to the Thunderbirds. Failure is a major fear for Wax, and is likely the main reason for his sarcastic nature. As such, he takes his bond with Takumi very seriously and does his best to help his brother in arms.
History
A Sacred BondShow
Wakinyan and Takumi were actually born at the same moment, one in Kirigakure no Sato, one inside a stormcloud. Because of the strong connection between the Thunderbirds and the Arashi family, it was certain from the start that the two would share a bond. For the beginning of his life, Wax learned the ways of the Thunderbirds, hunting and training. Because of his physiology, he developed much faster than his counterpart, and often sees himself as the older brother to Takumi, even though they are the same age. After becoming a full fledged shinobi, Takumi signed his contract with Wakinyan, and they began working together.

Battle Information Rank: A
Stats: 160
  • Ninjutsu: 35
  • Taijutsu: 1
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina:40
  • Control: 50
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 8
  • Instinct: 20
Equipment: Wakinyan naturally has razor sharp claws and beak. Their durability and cutting ability are tied directly to his Stamina stat.
Furthermore, Wakinyan’s wings allow for flight. Wakinyan’s feathers are charged with Raiton, with the passive determined by his Control. Individual feathers can be thrown like Kunai and replaced with Iijutsu or regrown over time.
Abilities and Concentrations Abilities: [1/1]
Stormborn SynergyShow
Through the strong bond between Wakinyan and Takumi, Wax actually remains inside Takumi’s body when not summoned, creating an almost jinchuriki-like relationship between the two. This special bond allows Wax to cast jutsu while inside Takumi, even at the same time as Takumi himself. When Wakinyan is tied to Takumi, they each have access to the other’s concentrations and jutsu, and can even learn their own jutsu that use the concentrations of the other (but cannot use them when separate). Due to the nature of the ability, the two can communicate instantly, just like with a proper jinchuriki, and the synergy allows for dual casting. When performing jutsu, an opaque form of Wakinyan’s body will appear superimposed over Takumi. As they share one body, the two are susceptible to Tenkujutsu when Wax is not summoned. If struck with a Tenkujutsu that reduces forms from a jinch, Wakinyan will be frozen and forced into a dormant state for the duration of the jutsu plus an additional two posts.
Specialization: Elemental
Ninjutsu: Elemental SpecialistShow
Ninjutsu: Elemental Specialist
Having devoted their lives to mastering the Elemental affinities, this companion is classified as an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist. Elemental specialist are able to devote a total of 7 concentrations to elemental concentrations. The companion is not able to access any specializations that are marked for Ninjutsu Specialist, but instead, can now pick up concentrations marked for Elemental Specialists. Additionally, their additional concentration MUST be used for elements. It cannot be used for ninpou styles. However, they are only able to devote a max of 4 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 4 concentrations to Genjutsu.

As an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist, Wakinyan is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, but cannot utilize non-elemental ninjutsu specializations. Additionally they are able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, and meaning as a specialist they can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats can only be Ninjutsu, Speed, Control, and Stamina.
Ninjutsu Concentrations: [1/5]
RaitonShow
Raiton Affinity:
Raiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from Raiton jutsu is determined by the strength of the jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Taijutsu Concentrations: [0/1]

Genjutsu Concentrations: [0/1]
Jutsu
RaitonShow
Raiton: Lightbulb
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling chakra, the user releases a small orb of Raiton chakra that floats around the user. This bulb gives off light for 10 meters in every direction and lasts for 5 posts.

Raiton: Electro Eye
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prerequisite: Dendougan
After channeling chakra to one of the eyes of the Dendougan, the user will form a stationary electric orb directly linked to the doujutsu. The vision in that eye will be normal, but by closing the linked eye, the user can see whatever the orb is facing, in the same electro vision of the Dendougan. This jutsu shares the same duration and cool down as the regular Dendougan.

Raiton: Pulse
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
The user channels Raiton chakra before releasing it outward from their body in every direction for 15 meters. This chakra is not harmful in any way, and is imperceptible to anyone without enhanced sensory techniques. This pulse will travel through thin walls, but any remaining distance will be halved. This pulse is easily seen through walls by the Dendougan.

Raiton: Stud Finder
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
The user starts this jutsu by channeling Raiton chakra into their hand/extremity. They they place the hand against a wall and release the chakra out through the wall. This pulse sends chakra to the other side of the wall and out from the point of entry, surging out 15 meters or until it hits another wall. This chakra is not harmful in any way, and is imperceptible to anyone without enhanced sensory techniques. This pulse is easily seen through walls by the Dendougan.

Raiton: Static Trap
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra into their hand/extremity, the user will touch a piece of metal within five posts. Anyone else who touches that metal within the five post limit will be shocked, applying the Raiton passive and dropping their Taijutsu stat by 1.

Raiton: Jolt
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user will apply the chakra to someone unconscious. This will stimulate the brain and wake someone up, or combat the effect of fatigue for three posts.

Raiton: Shocking Shielding
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user focuses their chakra to an already existing. This increases the strength of the barrier by 15 and applies the Raiton passive to anything that touches it. Furthermore, it increases the duration of the barrier by 4 posts, as long as the user maintains channeling on it.

Raiton • Jamming Pulse
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at 15 speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 5 points for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals.

Raiton • Galvanic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. The user's Raiton techniques will travel 5 points faster when they travel through this zone for 3 posts. This technique ends the moment the user leaves this area. They also return to normal speed upon leaving the area. This technique does not apply the shocking effect.

Raiton • Voltaic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
After channeling, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. This will produce an electric current on the ground in this area visible as crackling lightning on the surface. Any other than the user who step into this zone will have the shocking effect applied and their legs will sustain first degree electrical burns. This current lasts 3 posts, while it ends immediately if the user leaves the area.

Raiton: Tesla Dart
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra into a projectile, the user will launch the weapon forward. If the projectile comes within 5 meters of a person or metal, a jolt will emit from the charged weapon, travelling at a speed and strength of 15 and applying the Raiton passive to the person or object.

Raiton: Electroboost
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling chakra, the user imbues Raiton chakra into the body of their choice. This increases the electrical impulses of the body, increasing Strength by 3 and Speed by 6. In turn, this weakens the target’s ability to think critically, dropping Ninjutsu by 5 and Instinct by 4.

Raiton: Electroboost (B)
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling chakra, the user imbues Raiton chakra into the body of their choice. This increases the electrical impulses of the body, increasing Strength by 3 and Speed by 6. In turn, this weakens the target’s ability to think critically, dropping Genjutsu by 5 and Instinct by 4.

Raiton: Shocking Reinforcement
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user applies chakra to an already existing barrier. This increases the strength of the barrier by 20 and applies the Raiton passive to anything that touches it. Furthermore, it increases the duration of the barrier by 5 posts, as long as the user maintains focusing chakra into it.

Enhanced Tesla Dart
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra into a projectile, the user will launch the weapon forward. If the projectile comes within 10 meters of a person or metal, a jolt will emit from the charged weapon, travelling at a speed 15 and a strength of 25 and applying the Raiton passive to the person or object.

Raiton • Thunder Wave
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel Raiton chakra, and then fire a cone of lightning which begins at 5m wide closest to them and then 30m wide at the furthest point. The cone extends 40m from the user's body at a speed of 20. This cascade of lightning roars tremendously loud, and strikes all caught within it at 15 strength. Those caught in the blast will have their speed reduced by 5 points for 2 posts.

Raiton: Cloak
A-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user forms a cloak around themselves that serves as protection against attack. The cloak forms at a speed of 15 and can withstand attacks of up to 35 strength, as well as applying the Raiton passive to anything it touches. This technique lasts for 8 posts.

Raiton: Shocking Bulwark
A-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user channels chakra to an already existing barrier. This increases the strength of the barrier by 25 and applies the Raiton passive to anything that touches it. Furthermore, it increases the duration of the barrier by 6 posts, as long as the user maintains focus upon the barrier.

Raiton: Charging Augment
A-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prerequisite: 28 Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra, the user applies Raiton chakra to their limbs, causing visible electricity to form around the extrmities. This jutsu increases the strength of any attacks by 28, and applies the Raiton passive. This jutsu lasts 10 posts or can be dispelled early.

Raiton: Casting Clone
A-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user forms a clone of themselves. This clone is capable of performing any jutsu known by the user, up to A-rank. The clone has the following physical stats.
Taijutsu: 10
Stamina: 27
Strength: 3
Speed: 5

Raiton: Divine Cloak
S-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user forms a cloak around themselves that serves as protection against attack. The cloak forms at a speed of 20 and can withstand attacks of up to 50 strength, as well as applying the Raiton passive to anything it touches. This technique lasts for 10 posts.

Raiton: Divine Aura
S-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After channeling Raiton chakra, the user forms an aura around themselves, reaching out [Control/5] meters that lasts for 10 posts. Anything that touches the aura will be repelled with a force of 35 strength and have the Raiton passive applied to them.
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[Summon] Wakinyan

Post by Takumi » Mon Dec 30, 2019 4:19 pm

Using 50 OPHP for a Free Companion Mission for an A-Rank Companion.

Putting all 100 of the allocated points into Jutsu.

Will be adding Companion Master to Takumi's sheet in my next mod.

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[Summon] Wakinyan

Post by ShinobiTruth » Mon Jan 13, 2020 4:06 pm

Raiton: Stud Finder <==== Requiring Sensory and advanced Tai to detect a D-Rank is a bit much. I’d recommend replacing that with “without enhanced sensory techniques”. This is important, since it otherwise sounds like you’d need to have PHT to detect a D-Rank.

Raiton: Jamming Pulse <==== Drop the range to 20 meters.

Raiton: Shocking Shielding <==== In order for the duration of the affected barrier to be extended, there needs to be some sort of reasoning. Enhancing the barrier with Raiton is fine, but unless it’s explicitly affecting a Raiton barrier, I don’t see how this technique would increase the duration of a barrier. Same thing applies for any other versions of this technique you have in this mod.

Raiton • Thunder Wave <==== Drop the range by 10 meters.

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Post by Takumi » Wed Jan 15, 2020 3:23 pm

Stud Finder: I edited the language accordingly. I had not intended for it to require PHT but if that's how you read it, your language suggestion doesn't change my intent at all so I'm good with it. I changed the language for the jutsu above it as well so that they are matching.

Jamming Pulse and Thunder Wave: These are both taken from the archives. Thunder Wave is only changed from hand seals to channeling, and Jamming Pulse has an increased ninjutsu requirement as well as the channel change, so I don't think they should be changed.

I don't see how the Shocking Shielding line of jutsu is any different than a standard barrier enhancement technique, which increases the strength and duration of a barrier. From an IC standpoint, it's pumping more chakra into the barrier so it makes sense that the duration is extended.

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Post by WrightJustice » Tue Jan 21, 2020 8:49 am

With the shield jutsu I believe you need to make sure they are focused which means keeping contact and being unable to do anything else if you want the full boost, otherwise you need to cut down the strength and duration by half.

As for the archives I believe they are some of the jutsu up for nerfing since they are too powerful for ranged debuffing, though you have increased the requirements for the Jamming Pulse so that is probably fine.
Thunder Wave should probably be lowered like Truth says though, at least as it is now.

Is there meant to be two almost identical versions of Raiton: Electroboost ?
If so, might I suggest trying to make them a bit more distinct in name (other than calling one B)?

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Post by Takumi » Wed Jan 22, 2020 9:48 pm

I can't do it now, but I'll look into the shielding jutsu when I have a chance, see what the best option is.

In the meantime, if I changed Thunder Wave to the archive for the moment would I be good? Then I can see how staff wants to adjust it and follow suite accordingly in the future.

Yes, the two Electroboosts are intentional, hence the B. I'd rather leave it as is, because it's designed to signal an alternate option, and fits my character's battle mentality (So it fits what I'm going for IC and OOC). But, if staff would really rather it change, I can try to come up with something, that's fine.

While I respect that checks are on going, has there been discussion about the ability and equipment that I should be aware of, maybe help clarify anything?

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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Feb 25, 2020 11:47 am

1/2
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Post by Niro » Mon Apr 06, 2020 12:22 pm

Do you want this accepted or would you like to revamp it first?
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Post by Takumi » Mon Apr 06, 2020 1:00 pm

I am currently working on revamping it to the new system, so I can do that in this app, was just waiting for Kinesis rules, although the [Evolve] perk change may impact what I do, which is kind of annoying. I say wait to accept this and I'll post again when it's all sorted.

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Post by Takumi » Sat Apr 11, 2020 10:22 am

On second thought, I'd rather this just get accepted and then fixed in a separate mod. Thanks.

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Post by Varian » Tue Apr 14, 2020 4:35 pm

2/2 Accepted
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