Jiki Fukusha

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Post by RavenQueen1313 » Mon Jul 13, 2020 5:30 am

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Fukusha, Jiki Ningyo
Jiki FukushaShow
Age: 11
Gender: female
Height: 52.5”
Weight:62 lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: jiki had a pleasant face almost like a porcelain doll, snow white hair fell around her face she usually tucks behind her ears. jikis eyes where big and full of wonder and her eye always glowed purple. all of these features earned her the nickname Ningyo
  • Body: her skin was as flawless as fine china. she was pretty thin for her age and Her height was pretty average.
  • Notable Features: her clan tattoo on her chest over her heart, and she has a beauty mark under her left eye
Clothing/Accessories: when she was young she wore skirt and a crop top with fishnet shirt underneath a flower neckless her mother gave her on the day her father passed, it served as a reminder that he will always be there for her and her open toe shoes
Personality: Jiki has always been seen as delict as her name sake she was by many people considered to be made of Jiki (psoralen) she carries the stoic demeanor of her clan. jike is Varey proud to be a shinobi in the iwagakure the place she will defend to her last breath, she is also proud of her clan and its resolve to become stronger. jikes personality trait that's negative is that she can come of as snooty as she thinks she is the strongest genin in the village
  • General: stoic, prideful, sometimes snobby
  • Hopes/Dreams: to become one of the most powerful ninjutsu user in iwagakur, so she can show everyone how truly strong she is.
  • Fears: Jiki fears the loss of her only other parent, her mother. she also fears bringing dishonor to the clan by being banished. one of her greatest fears is the loss of her ability to perform her ninjutsu.
  • Combat Mentality: hits first, hits fast, and hit hard this is what she has always been taught by her mother.
Battle Information Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 16
  • Endurance: 5
  • Control: 16
  • Strength: 1
  • Speed: 1
  • Willpower: 5
  • Shōgō-zumi Mastery: 8
Equipment:
Companions: 0/1
Primary Affinity Katon
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
shogo-zumiShow
Shōgō-zumi
Shōgō-zumi StagesShow
First Stage


Second Stage


Third Stage


Tsuyoi Shōgō-zumi
This final level is unique to each individual person.

Shōgō-zumi Mastery Shōgō-zumi Doujutsu's abilities scale based off a mastery stat. This mastery stat determines the forms and stages of the Shōgō-zumi. As the stages grow so does the buff and enhancements the Shōgō-zumi gives. With the Shōgō-zumi based off the mastery stat so is its duration. The Shōgō-zumi can be used for [Mastery]/4 posts, and has a cool down equal to its usage length.
Mastery 1:No StageNo Buffs
Mastery 4:First StageAble to copy D-rank Jutsu; +2 Speed
Mastery 10:Second StageAble to copy C-rank Jutsu; +3 Speed, +2 Strength
Mastery 20:Third StageAble to copy B-Rank Jutsu; +4 Speed, +3 Strength, +3 Willpower
Mastery 30:Third Stage (Elevated)Able to copy A-rank Jutsu; +5 Speed, +5 Strength, +5 Willpower
Mastery 50:Tsuyoi Shōgō-zumiAble to copy S-rank Jutsu; +5 Chakra Pool, +5 Speed, +5 Strength, +5 Willpower, +5 Control
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
FuutonShow
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.
RaitonShow
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
DotonShow
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.
chalkShow
Passive (Releasing)Show
Chalk Style techniques have a releasing effect. Chalk Style particles come into contact with opposing jutsu or areas affected by an opponent's jutsu and cause the chakra to be forcibly released from the impacted jutsu, thus decreasing the overall duration of multi-post jutsu, such as area of effect techniques, and shortening the range of single post jutsu, such as direct offensive jutsu. These particles can also be condensed and drawn over fuuinjutsu, reducing their overall strength and difficulty to disarm the fuuinjutsu. If the Chalk Style technique reduces the post duration of a multi-post technique by an equal amount to or greater amount than the effected technique, the technique is destroyed outright.

Chalk particles produced by these techniques must cover at least a significant portion of the area of effect (~40%) of the jutsu it's interacting with to be effective. Below is a table detailing the post limits for Chalk Style techniques, based on the Strength rating of the technique:
  • 1-14 Strength: -1 post duration (multi-post); 5-meter range reduction (single post/constant).
  • 15-24 Strength: -2 post duration (multi-post); 10 meter range reduction (single post/constant).
  • 25-34 Strength: -3 post duration (multi-post); 20 meter range reduction (single post/constant).
  • 35+ Strength: -4 post duration (multi-post); 40 meter range reduction (single post/constant).
SuitonShow
Suiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive enveloping effect.
Passive (Enveloping)Show
Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.
KoutonShow
Kouton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kouton, and advanced form of Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kouton affinity. Kouton has an resisting effect.
Passive (Resisting)Show
Kouton has a resisting effect. This means that Kouton jutsu ignore the effects of other affinities, regardless of their nature. If a Kouton spear was thrown through a water shield, the spear would not be caught by the shield, nor would it be destroyed by Sankaton, or cut by Fuuton. This resisting effect does not apply to active effects by jutsu. This means a fuuton jutsu that cuts with 30 strength would still cut through a 20 strength kouton shield, but it would not be affected by the secondary cutting by Fuuton. This makes Kouton very effective for breaking through and penetrating defenses that opponents expect to protect them. It's hardy nature makes Kouton very popular amoung Doton users.
Taijutsu
Genjutsu
Status GenjutsuShow
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.
Sound InitiationShow
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
fuutonShow
D rankShow
(*) Fuuton • Wind Skating
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their ability to translate force (-3 Strength). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.
RaitonShow
D riankShow
(*) Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at [Control] Speed and Strength.
dotonShow
D rankShow
Doton • Binding Formation
(*) D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength
ChalkShow
D rankShow
(*) Chalk Style • Diffusing Cloud
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming hand seals, the user will stomp the ground and cause a 10-meter x 10-meter x 10-meter cloud of Chalk to rise up in front of the user at [Control] Speed and Strength. The Chalk particles from this technique linger in the area for up to three posts. The passive debuff from this technique stacks with those of other Chalk Style techniques.
SuitonShow
D rankShow
(*) Suiton • Defensive Barrier
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will spray water created from the inside of their chest through their mouth. Once the water is expelled, it will form an umbrella shape that is concave to the user and about two meters in diameter. This defense is somewhat solid and can be formed in any direction the user can spit, up to 10 meters away. The defense is shot at [Control] Speed and has [Control] Strength and unless completely destroyed it lasts for three posts before falling lifelessly to the ground.
KoutonShow
D rankShow
(*) Kouton • Shrapnel Bomb
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user will create a hollow ball of steel about the size of a soccer ball. They will then fire this ball at [Control] speed in a single direction for up to 10 meters. Upon contact or reaching its maximum range, the ball will detonate with [Control] Strength, showering the effected area in metal shards.
TaijutsuShow
Place Taijutsu in here
GenjutsuShow
status genjutsuShow
D rankShow
Vertigo
D-Rank • Status Genjutsu
after completing the needed hand signs the user will whistle and those who can hear it have the effects of mild vertigo for up to 3 post

History
Historical AccountsShow
before Jikis birth her parents performed the ritual of the fukusha her father put in a red cloak for ferocity a hand carved wooden sword for battle prowess and a map for her to never lose her way, jikis mother put a lilly for beauty a scroll of the family history for family connection and for knowledge. what her parents where not ready for was that their child was to be born pale skin but to more of a disturbance was her snow-white hair. light colored hair was rare in the family, but pure white hair was just unheard off her mother feared her child would become a social pariah.

growing up she was a very careful child, not rough housing or even play in general. when she was 6, her dad took her and her mother on a trip that was required by the village and during their trip they were attacked. jikis mother being a high level nin she thought she could protect her husband and her daughter. but it was all for not for a nin had appeared behind her husband and grabbed jiki. jiki kicked and screamed trying to get away the missing nin told jikis dad to forfeit his life or his daughter will be slain instead. her father looked to his wife then to jiki he agreed, and they let jiki go. in front of 6-year-old jiki the missing nin slit her father’s throat. jiki screamed is terror her eyes went from dark black to brilliant purple her mother whisked jiki away and they escaped barely.

With jiki having the family’s blood line her mother decided to put jiki through the academy once there jiki learned about tracker nin, she knew what she wanted to be. After her 4 years at the academy jiki was now 11 and a genin she is ready to face what the world had to throw at her.
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Jiki Fukush

Post by TheLacarix » Tue Jul 14, 2020 9:36 am

Vertigo < This is not structured right. It should be:
Vertigo
X-Rank Type Genjutsu
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Characters
Aizawa, Yoru
S-Rank - Bannin - Rogue Shinobi
Konohagakure - Kishikaisei
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Aizawa, Nobu
D-Rank - Genin
Konohagakure
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Jiki Fukusha

Post by Niro » Sun Jul 19, 2020 3:59 pm

2 days to edit
#MakeIwaGreatAgain
NameVillageRankTeam
Kosuke [color=#DC143C]Miracle CountryC-rank
Tatsuo [color=#940839]IwaBanninTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen]IwaGenin

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Post by RavenQueen1313 » Mon Jul 20, 2020 1:28 am

I did edit it
Hit First, Hit Fast, Hit Hard.

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Jiki Fukusha

Post by Kao » Mon Jul 20, 2020 7:04 pm

- Hi there. Unfortunately in Iwa the youngest your genin can be is 11 due to the age restriction of entering the academy and the fact that everyone has to attend for a minimum of 4 years.

- are you sure you want no equipment? No Kunai, shuriken, etc?

- next to companions should say (0/1) to indicate you currentLy have no companions

- all of your ninjutsu appear to be archives. You need to put the asterisk (*) back in the title; this symbol indicates archived jutsu which makes for faster checks

- your Genjutsu needs a set post limit. I recommend two or three posts.

- your history should say something about her going to the academy and becoming a genin. Maybe include how she performed in the academy and how long she has been a genin
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Komiya ShizuoJounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#209DD3]
Ishiwara SetsunaGenin Iwagakure no Sato[color=#E81D1D]
Awai FusaeB-Rank MNKonohagakure no Sato[color=#D95FEA]
Important NPCsShow
Akari Kanehara Akari clan elder [color=#80A0FF]
Sakata KannaIwagakure Councilwoman [color=#3DA43B]
Hazuki Shuran Jinchuuriki researcher [color=#E854C0]
Enkouten Kaizen Iwagakure councilman [color=#C65871]
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Post by RavenQueen1313 » Tue Jul 21, 2020 3:09 am

I fixed what was needed and I spent all my points in character creation and I'm making an app for a companion
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Post by RavenQueen1313 » Mon Jul 27, 2020 5:14 am

This caracter is done
Hit First, Hit Fast, Hit Hard.

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Jiki Fukusha

Post by ShinobiTruth » Wed Jul 29, 2020 4:33 pm

Hey, so a small thing here. Having concise entries for stuff can be nice; with that being said, the "General" section of the personality on the app is intended to be completed. I would also encourage you to be a bit broader in how you are describing this character's personality. We should really get a good feel for the character as a whole, not merely their martial or academic goals. The stuff that you put next to the word "Personality" should be placed where it says "General" right underneath it.

To give you some context about what I'm suggesting, here's one of my character's for reference:
Quote:
Hijikata is normally a soft-spoken individual, and like most citizens of the Grass Country, works to live in a way that is at one with nature. He is poised, graceful, and exudes a quiet strength. He places honor above all else, and he seeks to treat others as he would himself. Many would find him as a man without fault. He enjoys calligraphy, art, fishing, cooking, and many other simple crafts and skills, such as weaving jingasa hats out of straw or even farming every so often.

Despite originally having a deep-seated, profound hatred for shinobi and their chakra arts, mostly due to the wanton destruction less responsible parties have caused to the common man, recent meetings and events have forced the wandering teacher to reevaluate his beliefs on shinobi and their place in the world. Though he is still uneasy around shinobi, he has been able to, in large part, move past his prejudices and learn to view each shinobi individually.

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Post by Diatenshi » Thu Jul 30, 2020 1:14 pm

Quote:
[color= slategray](*) Kouton • Shrapnel Bomb[/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user will create a hollow ball of steel about the size of a soccer ball. They will then fire this ball at [Control] speed in a single direction for up to 10 meters. Upon contact or reaching its maximum range, the ball will detonate with [Control] Strength, showering the effected area in metal shards.
Broken color tag
Tools of WarShow
Burning BrightShow


Will of Fire-
Senju Masaru

Genin
[color=orange]


Light of Hope-
Awai Akihiro

Genin
[color=red]
Bloody MistShow


Wintery Hunter-
Tenshi Aisu

Chuunin
[color=#15aabc]


Viral Menace-
Toukai Chisaki

Chuunin
[color=#ff0080]
Stone SolidShow


The Doctor-
Shoutohiro Toshi

C-Rank Samurai
[color=green]
Desert StormShow


Yin Yang Divided
Naegi Waruhito

Genin
[color=#8b14f9]
Raging SkiesShow

Free AgentsShow


King of Pirates-
Ryoshi Kaisui

C-Rank MN
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Post by RavenQueen1313 » Sat Aug 01, 2020 1:37 pm

Fixed
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Jiki Fukusha

Post by TheLacarix » Sun Aug 02, 2020 2:15 pm

So you have some grammar issues and spelling mistakes throughout your app, just re-read the app and double check it all.

Other than that seems fine.
Characters
Aizawa, Yoru
S-Rank - Bannin - Rogue Shinobi
Konohagakure - Kishikaisei
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Aizawa, Nobu
D-Rank - Genin
Konohagakure
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Jiki Fukusha

Post by RavenQueen1313 » Mon Aug 03, 2020 4:38 am

fixed
Hit First, Hit Fast, Hit Hard.

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