[Companion] Murasame, Aurayumi

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[Companion] Murasame, Aurayumi

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NPC Type: Henchman Companion Information
Indentification
Real Name: Aurayumi Murasame
Epithet: Soft Snow
Age: 20
Country: Tea Country
Affiliation: The Heart Empire
Clan: Murasame
Rank: Harubushi (Spring Samurai)
Hair Color: Aero Blue
Eye Color: Sky Ocean
Skin Complexion: Brown Sugar
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Demiromantic
Color Text: #00C5AB
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Forehead Protector: Headband
Theme Song: phpBB [video]
Infamy: TBA
Height: 5’3”ft
Weight: 130”lbs
Occupation: Envoy
Affinity: Wind
Interest: Men
Martial Status: Married
Wingspan: 9cm”
Handiness: Ambidextrous
Bloodtype: AB negative
Bushido:
Loyalty (Chuugi): Aurayumi epitomizes loyalty in every aspect of her being. She is unwaveringly devoted to her master, Caliban, and considers it her utmost duty to serve and protect him. Her loyalty extends beyond her duty as a samurai, as she is willing to sacrifice her own well-being for his sake.

Integrity (Seigi): Aurayumi adheres to a strict moral compass and upholds a strong sense of justice. She stands firmly for what she believes is right and does not waver in the face of adversity. Her actions are guided by a deep sense of honor, fairness, and righteousness.

Perseverance (Fudoshin): Aurayumi possesses an indomitable spirit and an unwavering determination. No matter the challenges she faces, she maintains a resolute mindset, pushing through obstacles with unwavering resolve. Her perseverance fuels her actions and drives her to overcome any adversity.

Courage (Yuki): Aurayumi embodies the spirit of bravery and fearlessness. She confronts danger head-on, never backing down from a fight or shying away from difficult situations. Her courageous nature allows her to face her fears and protect those she cares about, even in the face of overwhelming odds.

Self-Discipline (Kanetsu): Aurayumi maintains a strict sense of self-discipline, both in her physical training and in her emotional control. She possesses a strong willpower that enables her to remain focused and composed in the midst of chaos. Through self-discipline, she hones her skills and channels her energy with precision.

Respect (Sonkei): Aurayumi holds deep respect for her master, her comrades, and the traditions of the samurai. She treats others with courtesy and humility, honoring their strengths and virtues. Her respect extends to her adversaries as well, acknowledging their skills and offering them a fair fight.

Honor (Meiyo): Aurayumi upholds a strict code of honor, valuing integrity, righteousness, and moral uprightness. She maintains a strong sense of personal honor and strives to uphold the honor of her master and her clan. She never compromises her principles, even in the face of temptation or adversity.

Compassion (Jin): Despite her tough exterior, Aurayumi possesses a compassionate heart. She understands the struggles and pain of others, and she lends a helping hand whenever she can. She shows kindness and empathy, particularly to those in need or those who have suffered injustices.

Aurayumi's personal Bushido reflects her unwavering loyalty, her dedication to justice, and her unyielding determination. It guides her actions, shapes her character, and serves as a compass in the chaotic world of the samurai. With her unique blend of strength and compassion, she embodies the true spirit of the warrior.
Quotes:
”A girl’s gotta get her kicks in every now and then. This bitch has the audacity to approach you, my patron, I’ll gladly take my own life after I cease her head.”
Wardrobe
Clothing/Accessories: Aurayumi's attire is a unique blend of tattered shrouds and intricate wrappings, carefully arranged to create a distinctive style. Her hands are enveloped in bandages, serving both as protection and a reminder of her training. Wrapped around her torso is a series of layered bandages, symbolizing resilience and endurance.

Atop her head rests the skull of a fearsome creature, adorned like a kabuto, reflecting her connection to the wild and her warrior spirit. Complementing her ensemble, Aurayumi wears lavender leggings that provide ease of movement while maintaining a touch of femininity. Her choice of footwear includes wooden geta, offering stability and a connection to nature with every step. A single braid cascades down her back, symbolizing both practicality and a nod to tradition. Aurayumi’s preparedness is evident in the presence of a medical pouch that she carries on her back. Within its confines, she carries essential tools for healing and tending to injuries, a testament to her commitment to support and protect those she holds dear. Concealed beneath her green hood, a sheath is cleverly fitted, securing a weapon that she can swiftly draw when the need arises.

Together, Aurayumi's attire paints a picture of a warrior who embraces both strength and grace. It reflects her resourcefulness, adaptability, and dedication to her craft. Each element of her outfit tells a story, showcasing her connection to nature, her proficiency in combat, and her unwavering determination to be a steadfast companion to Caliban.
Appearance: Aurayumi possesses a petite and delicate figure, with a height that may be considered underwhelming by some. Her smokey quartz complexion adds a touch of mystique to her appearance, while her slate gray hair cascades down in graceful waves. However, it is her enchanting jade eyes that captivate the attention of those who meet her, leaving them intrigued and drawn to her presence.

While Aurayumi's body may not boast pronounced curves in the chest and waist regions, her slender frame maintains a remarkable balance and proportion. Her physique exudes a sense of elegance and grace, reflecting her agile nature and disciplined training as a warrior. One striking feature that sets Aurayumi apart is the array of fluorescent tattoos adorning her arms and face. These intricate designs represent her rich gypsy heritage and cultural roots. Mandala flowers, dipped in white ink, create a mesmerizing pattern that dances across her skin, evoking a sense of spiritual connection and artistic expression.

It is worth noting that while Aurayumi's appearance may not conform to conventional ideals of beauty, her unique charm and inner strength make her all the more captivating. Her radiant confidence and unwavering loyalty shine through, transcending physical attributes and leaving a lasting impression on those who have the privilege of encountering her. As an individual, Aurayumi embraces her individuality and celebrates her own beauty, regardless of societal expectations. Her bodacious bosoms, though not the primary focus of her identity, are a natural part of her feminine form, accentuating her overall grace and allure.
Personality: Aurayumi, a woman of unyielding loyalty and hidden desires, possesses a complex and multifaceted personality that adds layers to her character. At first glance, she may come across as rude and conservative, but beneath that tough exterior lies a deep affection for her master, Caliban. Aurayumi's emotions towards him are a delicate balance of admiration, respect, and a burning desire to please him.

Though she may not openly express her feelings, Aurayumi's actions speak volumes. She is always by Caliban's side, anticipating his needs and ensuring his well-being. Her unwavering loyalty is evident in her unwavering presence, and she holds herself to the highest standard when it comes to serving him.

Aurayumi's tsundere approach is her way of guarding her heart, a defense mechanism to conceal her true emotions. But even through her tough facade, glimpses of affection and concern for Caliban can be seen. It is in the subtle moments when she avoids direct eye contact or blushes at his praise that her true feelings surface.

Beyond her devotion to Caliban, Aurayumi maintains a vigilant demeanor and has little interest in socializing with others. Her focus remains solely on her master, and she will go to great lengths to ensure his safety and happiness. Her loyalty extends beyond the boundaries of normalcy, willing to follow him even through the darkest of realms.

Aurayumi's conviction to serve Caliban is unwavering. She believes that by eliminating any display of weakness or vulnerability, she can better devote herself to his cause. Her commitment to him goes beyond physical service, as she strives to be his pillar of strength and support. She is determined to prove her worth and usefulness to him, even if it means pushing her own emotions aside.

In the depths of her being, Aurayumi's loyalty burns brightly. She is driven by a deep-seated desire to please Caliban and be the person he can rely on. Her grimace may mask her true feelings, but her actions and unwavering presence are a testament to her dedication. With every fiber of her being, Aurayumi stands by Caliban's side, ready to face any challenge and overcome any obstacle that may come their way.
Combat Mentality:
In a world filled with the consequences of power-hungry individuals and the perpetual cycle of life and death, Aurayumi's mind wandered into a realm of possibilities. As she stared into the mesmerizing dance of a flickering campfire, a profound fascination with its nature ignited within her. She became entranced by the radiant glow, its warmth embracing her soul, and she found herself imitating the fluid movements of the flames.

In her mind, she envisioned a future where the world would be consumed by a raging inferno, a transformative fire that would bring about a drastic change. This newfound obsession with fire sparked the birth of her unique fighting style, one that involved explosive kicks and blinding jousts with short spears. With her petite frame as an advantage, Aurayumi utilized her agility and nimbleness to outmaneuver her opponents.

Driven by her fixation on sharp objects, she developed a keen eye for improvised weaponry. Anything rigid and at her disposal became a potential tool or weapon in her hands. Hidden within her person, she always carried a concealed blade, ready to be unleashed when the situation demanded it.

Aurayumi's fighting style epitomized her unconventional and adaptable nature. She embraced the chaos of combat, dancing on the edge of danger with each precise movement. Her explosive kicks were like bursts of flame, incinerating her foes with a relentless fury. Her blinding jousts with short spears left her adversaries disoriented, unable to match her speed and precision.

But beneath her fierce exterior and her arsenal of hidden blades, Aurayumi held a deeper purpose. She sought to disrupt the status quo, to challenge the cycle of power and the inevitable descent into darkness. She believed that through her fiery spirit and unyielding determination, she could bring about a world where the flames of change would purify the world's sins.

With each strike and parry, Aurayumi embodied the duality of fire itself—both destructive and transformative. She embraced the raw power that fire symbolized, harnessing it to forge her path and leave an indelible mark on the world. In her eyes burned a flicker of hope, a flicker that dared to ignite a brighter future amidst the ashes.

Driven by her unwavering resolve and her arsenal of unconventional techniques, Aurayumi stood as a symbol of defiance against the forces that sought to maintain control. She was a spark in the darkness, a force to be reckoned with, and a reminder that even the smallest flame has the potential to ignite a revolution.
Battle Information
  • Endurance: 5
  • Chakra Pool: 5
  • Control: 45
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 10
  • Willpower: 5
  • Mastery: 45
Equipment:
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  • 1x tweezers
  • 1x bandage roll
  • 1x mini scissors
  • 5x bandage pads
  • 1x bottle of alcohol
  • 1x scalpel

Elemental Affinities: Wind
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Cell Factor:
The Murasame clan’s genetics possess a genome that gained access to a primal spark. Calling it the Alpha Gene; I.e Alpha Spark, the clan member is able to commandeer predatory traits and is given complete access to their physiology by triggering this gene. When activated, the User is able to manifest their bodily functions and can manipulate the cells in their body to produce bio material. Undergoing a morphing sequence in which utilizes its User’s genetic algorithm, they briefly enter a “cocoon phase” and undergo a rapid transformation. In a matter of seconds, the Murasame clan member enters a cocoon of iridescent colors, undergoing a rapid transformation before emerging with a captivating Armored Bio Suit, symbolizing their predatory prowess. The Armored Bio Suit has a strength equal to the Murasame’s [control] stat and comes equipped with bio weaponry made from the same tissue. Additionally the User gains a boost in Strength, Speed, Endurance and Willpower according to the mastery chart below. Repairing the Bio Suit follows the same Regeneration Table in the rules. Bio weaponry follow the same Crafting rules. Murasame clan members also possess the unique ability to partially share their cell factor with another individual. This exchange allows them to transfer a fraction of their genetic potential, granting limited access to predatory traits and heightened physiological functions. As a result, the recipient gains not only an enhanced physical prowess but also an armored bio suit. (Nth Stat boosts don’t transfer to characters when the Armored Bio Suit is worn by them.)
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  • Base Mastery 10: +1 Strength, +1 Speed, +1 Endurance
  • Mastery 15: +1 Strength, +1 Speed, +1 Endurance, +1 Willpower
  • Mastery 20 : +2 Strength, +2 Speed, +1 Endurance, +1 Willpower
  • Mastery 25: +2 Strength, +2 Speed, +2 Endurance, +2 Willpower
  • Mastery 30: +3 Strength, +2 Speed, +2 Endurance, +2 Willpower
  • Mastery 35: +4 Strength, +3 Speed, +2 Endurance, +2 Willpower
  • Mastery 40: +5 Strength, +3 Speed, +3 Endurance, +2 Willpower
  • Mastery 45: +5 Strength, +4 Speed, +3 Endurance, +2 Willpower
  • Mastery 50: +8 Strength, +8 Speed, +5 Endurance, +4 Willpower
Concentrations
NinjutsuN/A
Taijutsu[Close Quarters Combat], [Deft Hands], [Acrobatics], [Stealth], [Perception], [Medicine], [Rigid Structure], [Sword Weapons], [Polearms]
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
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N/A
C-RankedShow
N/A
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TaijutsuShow
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* Kushou・The Viper Flicks its Tongue
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves thrusting quickly with the user’s long weapon from a distance before quickly pulling back their polearm to prevent counters. This techniques most useful aspect is that it can be used while in motion without affecting speed or momentum.

* Kushou・The Courtier Taps his Fan
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves proper use of the pole of the user’s weapon to deflect blows. By properly angling and manoeuvring their spear or staff they can deflect other like weapons, hand to hand blows or even sword blows by striking the right place at the right time, even while in motion.

* Kushou・Parting the Silk
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This simple technique involves engaging an opponent’s weapon or one of their arms and moving it slightly to one side with the user’s weapon. This creates a very small opening which the user then exploits by kicking the opponent, keeping their weapon guarding the opponent’s arms.

* Kushou・Low Wind Rising
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The foundational stance of the Kushou style, Low Wind Rising involves the spinning of the user’s spear or polearm around their body constantly whilst remaining in motion. While in this stance, the user will be able to deflect projectiles with less strength than their own, while also making unpredictable movements of their spear.

* Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will vault themselves into the air using their polearm and then unleash a powerful blow from above. This technique is used to disorient and surprise foes as well as overpower them as it strikes with all of the user’s body weight and momentum from the spin they perform in the air in order to strike with the spear that was touching the ground moments before.
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* Kushou・Folding the Fan
C-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: [Sword Weapons] concentration
A supplementary stance of the Kushou style, Folding the fan involves pulling back the user’s polarm and using only a portion of its length in order to engage briefly in shorter range with opponents. This sacrifices the user’s range advantage, but also allows them to more properly deal with those who get inside their range. This allows the use of a polearm weapon like a sword weapon.

* Kushou・Twisting the Wind
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This is the core technique of the Kushou Style. The user will begin in the Low Wind Rising stance and then approaches their opponent. They will begin with a wide arcing blow to begin this combination of blows. Following this they will spin their polearm and their body as they follow their opponent across the battlefield, chasing them down as they block and evade. This technique takes the user’s entire post, and can strike a number of times equal to half their speed. Those who block more than one blow will suffer a -3 to Strength for 3 posts as the weapon’s momentum and force jars their body.

* Kushou・The Swallow Rides the Wind
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
The user of this technique must first launch themselves high into the air as if with The Swallow Takes Flight. They will then begin to spin and unleash a flurry of blows from above. The user is capable of performing up to three strikes in the air, each of them prolonging the user’s airtime. The Swallow Rides the Wind is useful as it maintains the advantageous high ground and all of the forward momentum toward the opponent throughout all of its blows, giving the user an effective +6 Strength and -6 Control for the three blows.

* Kushou・Bundling Straw
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
This technique is a kind of mental preparation for the constant movement and spinning involved in the Kushou style. This enables the user to gather snippets of vision, sounds and tactile sensory information in order to be properly aware of the battlefield around them whether standing still or in rapid circular motion. The user is effectively aware of their surroundings within 25m of their person, able to recognize when attacks are coming and the body positions of opponents.

* Kushou・Unfolding the Fan
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
While rare for a practitioner of Kushou-ryu to be on the defensive, this technique is designed to facilitate effective defence against other close ranged opponents. The user of this technique is constantly aware of distancing between the opponent and themselves, and therefore will aim all of their strikes to prevent the opponent from closing the gap using their long weapon. This will make it extremely difficult for those with less skill than them to get close to the user safely without somehow neutralizing the user’s weapon.
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* Kushou・The River Undercuts the Bank
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will first block an incoming strike. Then, they will almost immediately cease resisting, causing the opponent to fall forward slightly and lose their balance provided they do not possess a Perception technique of equal or greater rank. This successfully created opening allows the user to raise the lower end of their weapon to strike from inside the opponent’s guard, typically at either the groin or the chin with full strength.

* Kushou・Watered Silk
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will strike the ground with one end of their weapon hard, dragging it in a line. This will fling a cloud of dirt, rock and dust up into their opponent’s eyes as if the user had thrown it. The use of one end of their weapon in this enables the immediate return of the opposite end for a follow up strike at either a blinded opponent or an opponent that is quite predictably dodging the debris.

* Kushou・Threading the Needle
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
After either blocking an opponent’s strike or having one of their strikes blocked, the user will flick their weapon. Using their great leverage and range to their advantage, the user is able to skilfully dart their weapon around the opponent’s existing guard for a series of quick thrusts aimed at their torso.
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Place Genjutsu in here

History
The Man Who Smelled Of Sunflowers:
Long ago, the Murasame clan rose to prominence in the land of tea and honey, known for their skilled and armored warriors. They possessed a natural affinity for the terrain, with some members excelling as hunters while others honed their fighting abilities. The Murasame clan forged strong alliances with the Mako clan, solidifying their bond through intermarriage and the exchange of heirs. Aurayumi, a precious gift, was bestowed upon the Mako clan's chief, destined for a future intertwined with their destiny.

Growing up alongside the young samurai, Aurayumi's path became inseparable from Caliban's. It was Caliban who bestowed upon her the name Aurayumi, finding it befitting of her essence that reminded him of the first snowfall in winter. Although Aurayumi had little say in the matter, deep within her heart, she always yearned to be joined with someone like Caliban. Little did she know, Aurayumi is the reincarnation of a past lover, a connection that echoes across lifetimes.

Occasionally, Aurayumi experiences moments of déjà vu, an unshakable feeling of familiarity when she is in Caliban's presence. Yet, she has struggled to express her true feelings to her master, unsure if her sentiments would be reciprocated. As fate would have it, when Caliban was drafted into the Heart's Special Militia, Aurayumi stood faithfully by his side. She became his unwavering support, watching over him and providing solace in times of injury and hardship.

As Caliban embarks on his journey to become a legendary figure, Aurayumi cannot fathom a single moment passing without her steadfast presence at his side. Her unwavering loyalty and devotion fuel her every step, solidifying her resolve to protect and serve him. Together, they face the trials and tribulations of their shared path, with Aurayumi's silent affection guiding her every action. In the depths of her heart, she hopes that one day, their bond will transcend mere loyalty, blossoming into a love that spans lifetimes.

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Post by Kabu » Sun Apr 02, 2023 8:44 pm

So ignoring the ability and history for a moment because that's an entire can of worms, companion apps need to state what type of companion they are on the app and as well as that, you have far too many stats and you've exceeded your ryo count for equipment and jutsu. Henchmen can only start at a maximum of A rank which is treated like a special jounin, getting 120 stats and 100 ryo to spend on jutsu and equipment. As well, that katana needs an actual description of some kind (notably the length) and where on her person its carried. The medicalso also needs to list exactly what's being carried inside of it and where on her person it's being kept.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Sun Apr 02, 2023 9:08 pm

Kabu:
Sun Apr 02, 2023 8:44 pm
So ignoring the ability and history for a moment because that's an entire can of worms, companion apps need to state what type of companion they are on the app and as well as that, you have far too many stats and you've exceeded your ryo count for equipment and jutsu. Henchmen can only start at a maximum of A rank which is treated like a special jounin, getting 120 stats and 100 ryo to spend on jutsu and equipment. As well, that katana needs an actual description of some kind (notably the length) and where on her person its carried. The medicalso also needs to list exactly what's being carried inside of it and where on her person it's being kept.
Edited. The katana is tinted emerald. I’ll buy whatever sum is left for the jutsu. The areas that they’re located was stated in the clothing and accessories description, even before the edit.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Apr 10, 2023 12:20 pm

I know there was some back-and-forth with Nick on whether or not you were allowed to use this and I think the outcome was yes but going to have Nick post in this confirming he did just so you don't run into that issue again.

As for the clan, the ability is effectively ninjutsu via taijutsu, which is why the clan was made defunct because its not exactly balanced. Normally I would give advice on how to fix it, but if I'm being honest, I don't even know how to fix the Enji ability.
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[Companion] Enji, Aurayumi

Post by Heavenly Fabled » Mon Apr 10, 2023 6:54 pm

Ace Trainer:
Mon Apr 10, 2023 12:20 pm
I know there was some back-and-forth with Nick on whether or not you were allowed to use this and I think the outcome was yes but going to have Nick post in this confirming he did just so you don't run into that issue again.

As for the clan, the ability is effectively ninjutsu via taijutsu, which is why the clan was made defunct because its not exactly balanced. Normally I would give advice on how to fix it, but if I'm being honest, I don't even know how to fix the Enji ability.
Correct, a few months ago Gunshanks gave me the rights to do whatever I wanted with the clans he gave me publicly in the sever. From what I can tell, he’s changed his mind and stated I’ve stolen the clan. If this is so, then I won’t fight or debate it. However I’d be more incline to return everything and disable the activity of my character.

As for the ability in question it reads pretty simple enough and works off of the companion’s endurance & willpower. It’s an ability which exchanges a lot of the ninjutsu aspects and replaces them with singing, dancing and etc to conjure specified effects that can be only described as miracles. If anything I could imply Aurayumi do stances.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Apr 13, 2023 2:12 pm

I understand how the ability works, what I am saying is that 'miracles' is not exactly a measurable thing that we can really balance. There is no way of knowing what miracles can or can't do, what is or isn't allowed, etc. And the effects achieved by miracles are functionally ninjutsu, but operate off of taijutsu which isn't really balanced. The clan is defunct because of this problem, so you'd have to find some way to remedy it before this could be approved.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Wed Apr 19, 2023 1:10 am

Ace Trainer:
Thu Apr 13, 2023 2:12 pm
I understand how the ability works, what I am saying is that 'miracles' is not exactly a measurable thing that we can really balance. There is no way of knowing what miracles can or can't do, what is or isn't allowed, etc. And the effects achieved by miracles are functionally ninjutsu, but operate off of taijutsu which isn't really balanced. The clan is defunct because of this problem, so you'd have to find some way to remedy it before this could be approved.
I’ve fixed the application. Removing the previous ability and exchanging it with the current one. I’ve also edited the historical accounts and taken away the previous jutsus in exchange for medical Jutsu.
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Post by Kabu » Wed Apr 19, 2023 7:08 pm

Ability <- `The User is also able to select others to help defend their body from any harm ("infectious disease that threatens the User's health or designated target") by pouring their chakra into them.` You're going to need to elaborate on what this part means.

More importantly though you cannot get those kinds of boosts this way. Firstly you would need to use an nth stat to get boosts out of it rather than basing it off control and secondly the boost is far too large. According to this page you can boost by +25 at a specialist stat of 50 but prior to that the boost is limited to a maximum of 1/3 of the stat. As well according to the same page, you are allowed to have it so your specialist stat is capped before 50, but it must be in increments of 10 (meaning it can only be 10, 20, 30, 40 or 50)
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Wed Apr 19, 2023 7:33 pm

Kabu:
Wed Apr 19, 2023 7:08 pm
Ability <- `The User is also able to select others to help defend their body from any harm ("infectious disease that threatens the User's health or designated target") by pouring their chakra into them.` You're going to need to elaborate on what this part means.

More importantly though you cannot get those kinds of boosts this way. Firstly you would need to use an nth stat to get boosts out of it rather than basing it off control and secondly the boost is far too large. According to this page you can boost by +25 at a specialist stat of 50 but prior to that the boost is limited to a maximum of 1/3 of the stat. As well according to the same page, you are allowed to have it so your specialist stat is capped before 50, but it must be in increments of 10 (meaning it can only be 10, 20, 30, 40 or 50)
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Post by Kabu » Tue Apr 25, 2023 3:02 pm

The boosts still aren't following proper rules. At 50 mastery you get a +32 and the most it can do is a total of +25, all your other boosts are too much as well. As stated by the rules 'you can boost by +25 at a specialist stat of 50 but prior to that the boost is limited to a maximum of 1/3 of the stat.` Also you cannot have a section for 0 as all stats must start at 1 and at 1 you wouldn't even get a boost.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Tue Apr 25, 2023 4:29 pm

Kabu:
Tue Apr 25, 2023 3:02 pm
The boosts still aren't following proper rules. At 50 mastery you get a +32 and the most it can do is a total of +25, all your other boosts are too much as well. As stated by the rules 'you can boost by +25 at a specialist stat of 50 but prior to that the boost is limited to a maximum of 1/3 of the stat.` Also you cannot have a section for 0 as all stats must start at 1 and at 1 you wouldn't even get a boost.
I believe it reads right now?

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Post by Kabu » Tue Apr 25, 2023 6:16 pm

Somewhere on the app rather than reading NPC Type: Companion it should instead read Companion Type: Henchman

As well, Caliban lacks the Evolve perk which is needed for companions to have any stat higher than 45, mastery stats included.

Aside from those two minor things I don't really see any other issues.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Tue Apr 25, 2023 6:47 pm

Kabu:
Tue Apr 25, 2023 6:16 pm
Somewhere on the app rather than reading NPC Type: Companion it should instead read Companion Type: Henchman

As well, Caliban lacks the Evolve perk which is needed for companions to have any stat higher than 45, mastery stats included.

Aside from those two minor things I don't really see any other issues.
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Post by Niro » Sun May 07, 2023 10:49 am

Nth stats cannot be conferred to others besides the user, besides that looks good to go.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Sun May 07, 2023 1:28 pm

Niro:
Sun May 07, 2023 10:49 am
Nth stats cannot be conferred to others besides the user, besides that looks good to go.
Does advanced channeling solve this issue?

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Post by Niro » Sun May 07, 2023 3:03 pm

No, no matter the conditions you cannot confer nth stats to others besides the user.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Sun May 07, 2023 9:04 pm

Niro:
Sun May 07, 2023 3:03 pm
No, no matter the conditions you cannot confer nth stats to others besides the user.
Fixed. Should that solve the problem now? Nth stat buff isn’t bestowed to targeted allies and instead simply grants access to the bio armored suit and weaponry?
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Post by Kabu » Wed May 10, 2023 9:55 pm

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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat May 13, 2023 7:25 pm

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No, no matter the conditions you cannot confer nth stats to others besides the user.
This remains true even if it goes into the suit and the suit is worn by someone else. Only the user can receive the Nth stat boosts.
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Post by Heavenly Fabled » Sun May 14, 2023 11:03 pm

We’re good to go now.

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Post by Niro » Sun May 21, 2023 5:43 pm

The User is also able to bestow the same bio suit onto others by channeling their chakra into them. They're granted enhanced physical attributes along with assorted colors for their bio suits. <-Ability STILL says this which is conferring an Nth stat boost.
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Post by Kanade » Thu Jun 01, 2023 11:22 am

Cell Factor: How many posts does the Cocoon phase of this ability take? - Also it doesn't say that it can be worn by others as it currently reads, just that it doesn't confer the Nth stat boosts.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Jun 13, 2023 7:43 pm

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Post by Kabu » Wed Jun 14, 2023 4:22 pm

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