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by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jul 01, 2020 7:07 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Grass 4]From Grass to Dust and Dew
Replies: 1
Views: 20

[Grass 4]From Grass to Dust and Dew

Maru had prepared meticulously for this battle. The villagers had created rudimentary fortifications, spiked logs that would prevent calvary from approaching the rear of the village. As the village had only rudimentary timber walls, having those fortifications to funnel the enemies into their kill-z...
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jul 01, 2020 4:24 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Plotboard Part 3] Of Onsen and Tenderness
Replies: 14
Views: 623

[Plotboard Part 3] Of Onsen and Tenderness

Hiji was a man skilled in his physical dexterity, but he found himself equally short of breath even as their dance of deep kisses extended from seconds to minutes. Even within the steaming water of the spring, Hiji's skin was covered in goosebumps at the sensation of it all, and whatever control he ...
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jul 01, 2020 3:48 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Paying Lac for Photo-Shop Work
Replies: 2
Views: 15

Paying Lac for Photo-Shop Work

Application: Nobu.
Change: Please remove twelve (12) points from Maru and give them to Nobu as payment for photo-shop work from Lac.
Payment: 12 points.
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 30, 2020 9:44 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Plotboard Part 3] Of Onsen and Tenderness
Replies: 14
Views: 623

[Plotboard Part 3] Of Onsen and Tenderness

To Hiji, Suzume's smile was as priceless as any rare treasure. She did not often smile. Both her work in the dojo and in the organization required that she never allow her guard to fall in the company of others, lest they perceive such emotion as a weakness to be exploited. It was only in these quie...
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 30, 2020 7:10 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Uncertain eyes observed the blooming flower that was Reina's shift in expression, Maru unable to simply put aside the numbness that very much dominated his mental space. The shrewd, critical adult in his head vied for his attention, demanding that he abandon such a trivial pursuit. He wasn't going t...
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 28, 2020 11:43 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Maru understood that Reina had a sharp mind. Though she first voiced an objection, she almost immediately continued to turn the idea over in her head more thoroughly, recognizing while Maru would ever suggest trading one yoke for another. That was okay. He knew that all she needed was a bit of time....
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 24, 2020 10:45 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Stat Pack
Replies: 1
Views: 23

Stat Pack

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 24, 2020 10:36 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Yozei Revamp
Replies: 7
Views: 52

Yozei Revamp

The stat itself doesn’t really master (basically, it should still be based on Control). If you originally paid for the weapon to have the weapon durability be based on a specific stat, I don’t really see a need to require a constant chakra drain. With that said, I am a bit confused as to why it woul...
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 23, 2020 7:35 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Stat Pack
Replies: 1
Views: 16

Stat Pack

Application: Maru . Change: Please increase Maru's Endurance by five (5), increase his Control by three (3), and his Willpower by two (2). Payment: June Event . [b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4065141]ShinobiTruth[/url] [b]Points:[/b] 115/...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 20, 2020 10:24 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: [Plotboard 2] Walking The Road To Twilight
Replies: 6
Views: 415

[Plotboard 2] Walking The Road To Twilight

Maru nodded in compliance. He was thankful that Shizuo wasn't trying to pry. Honestly, Maru wasn't really sure how much he could really discuss with Shizuo about everything that had happened recently. How do you explain that you're tracking down someone who tried to kill you and mocked your mother's...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 20, 2020 5:52 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Perceptive eyes scanned Reina’s expression as she gave her reply. It seemed she didn’t much fancy talking about herself or her situation. She had already acknowledged that her father had a very strict training regiment and schedule for his daughter. No doubt, that would make maintaining relationship...
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 17, 2020 10:09 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Niku Mod 15.4
Replies: 2
Views: 35

Niku Mod 15.4

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:58 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Adding Tai & Jutsu
Replies: 19
Views: 136

Adding Tai & Jutsu

1/2
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:53 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Senji Revamp
Replies: 14
Views: 141

Senji Revamp

I've taken that suggestion under advisement in staff. Thank you for your input, and thank you for your patience.

1/2
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:47 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Hana Revamp
Replies: 2
Views: 31

Hana Revamp

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Wed Jun 17, 2020 9:41 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: One Helluva Jutsu Update 2
Replies: 29
Views: 153

One Helluva Jutsu Update 2

1/2
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:21 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Late birthday claim (12th of June)
Replies: 2
Views: 20

Late birthday claim (12th of June)

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:20 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Shinkizou Family Revamp
Replies: 9
Views: 68

Shinkizou Family Revamp

1/2
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:18 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Main Pack
Replies: 2
Views: 29

Main Pack

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:17 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: One Helluva Jutsu Update 2
Replies: 29
Views: 153

One Helluva Jutsu Update 2

[Mugen • Taking a True Naked Sword] <==== Specifically due to the method used to catch these weapons (catching with both hands and stopping vs. deflecting the weapon with one's hands) there's gotta be some reference to Strength here as well. I'd recommend fashioning it after what you did for infinit...
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 8:02 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Adding Tai & Jutsu
Replies: 19
Views: 136

Adding Tai & Jutsu

[Flawless Aim Style • Cyclone Shuriken] <==== Small thing: +15 should read "+15 Strength." Since Strength determines both the Speed and Strength at which projectiles are thrown, it's important to specify the stat. Bigger things: Unless you and Onu worked something out through DMs or something, this ...
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:37 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Shuryo - Revamp
Replies: 5
Views: 54

Shuryo - Revamp

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 7:28 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Satori - Revamp
Replies: 7
Views: 88

Satori - Revamp

[ACCEPTED]
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 4:39 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

As Maru expected, for a few solitary minutes, the two of them struggled to regather their poise to no avail. Thus, when Reina introduced the marvel concept of taking their leave from the restaurant, Maru was only too happy to oblige. Walking out of the quiet teahouse into the louder markets outside,...
by ShinobiTruth
Tue Jun 16, 2020 3:52 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Maru himself noticed much about Reina as well, being so close. One thing his sharp nose picked up immediately was the scent of lilac in her hair, which immediately reminded him of his mother. And lavender, too, lightly lifting up from her skin, no doubt from the soap she used to wash this morning. H...
by ShinobiTruth
Mon Jun 15, 2020 11:52 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Well. This was what it was like to have a human necklace. All things considered... This was nice. Which was good. Mind you, Maru didn't know how to react, but still, it was nice. After taking some time to figure out exactly what to do, Maru gently placed his hands on her back, returning the hug if n...
by ShinobiTruth
Mon Jun 15, 2020 10:46 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Such confidence. Such optimism. But a few months ago, he had those things. Bitterness conflicted with reason. It was easy to speak of joy and recovery from the outside looking in. Still, it was that outside perspective that allowed Reina to see what Maru was blind to. Though struggling with powerful...
by ShinobiTruth
Mon Jun 15, 2020 8:47 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

The recollection of what had transpired nearly caused a full retreat back into his shell. Maru's eyes were boring into the tea in his cup, and it was taking a considerable amount of willpower not to crush the cup in his hand. It was completely illogical to be so angry at some poor fellow spending hi...
by ShinobiTruth
Mon Jun 15, 2020 3:24 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Reina’s appreciation for his presence caught him off guard. It was one thing to receive such adulation from work peers, but to hear it from Reina somehow was different. Maybe it was because only a few minutes before that he saw her as a civilian. Maru was usually the one who was expressing appreciat...
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 14, 2020 11:21 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Kinoko Revamp
Replies: 6
Views: 59

Kinoko Revamp

This clan is *asking* for a touch/taste gen specialist. Looks great, by what I can tell.

1/2
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 14, 2020 11:00 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Senji Revamp
Replies: 14
Views: 141

Senji Revamp

Okay, so sorta a small thing that's present in a lot of the jutsu, but when you're doing post durations based on a stat value, you need to make sure that it specified that any non-even numbers (like 27.5) are rounded down. This is because stat debuffs you might suffer will impact the duration of tho...
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 14, 2020 10:40 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Shinkizou Family Revamp
Replies: 9
Views: 68

Shinkizou Family Revamp

Bulwark <==== Very small thing: there appears to be a line break here you probably didn't intend to put there.
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 14, 2020 10:32 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Shuryo - Revamp
Replies: 5
Views: 54

Shuryo - Revamp

Not removing 1/2, just asking that you please nocode the jutsu names as shown below. All of the clans/jutsu archives have it displayed as such so that members can simply copy/paste from the archive and have it display correctly on their character applications. Appearance: [b][color=#08bda2]~Chiageya...
by ShinobiTruth
Sun Jun 14, 2020 12:01 am
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Maru wanted to comment on her father's meddling in her mission assignments since those are handed directly down from the village, but he held his tongue. If he had been given the chance to choose whether his father was too involved in his life or not enough, he might have honestly chosen the former....
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 11:11 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Reina had no way of knowing that Maru was uniquely equipped to sense the absence of Reina's mother in her life and less-than-perfect relationship with her father. His eyes seemed to focus a bit more intently as Reina spoke of her parents. There was a certain understanding visible in Maru's gaze, tho...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 10:23 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Maru nodded. "Please, call me Maru," he offered in return. "...My friends call me Maru." Nodding in thanks, he took the cup and took a sip of his tea, his head tilting slightly at the flavor. Maru had made the order out of spontaneity, but it seemed that he'd found a tea combination that suited him ...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 9:29 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Maru's perceptive eyes peered into Reina's own, much more open than his own. The emotions she was feeling at the moment were fairly evident. He was seeing the uncertainty already starting to creep into her visage, yet despite those things, she didn't seem to be accusatory like many others had been. ...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 8:47 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Even just starting off, it only now occurred to Maru how little truly social interaction he'd had with others outside of work. He certainly was more adept at conversations than he let on, but his wounded emotions had consolidated those pleasantries, which required some level of happiness, to the bac...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 8:03 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

The village's youngest jounin was being involuntarily detained for what he could only describe as an impromptu date. Was this real life? Was this just a fantasy? All he had to do was open his mouth and say something, and it would all be over. Well? "..." Sigh. Curse you and your inexperience with th...
by ShinobiTruth
Sat Jun 13, 2020 7:03 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: Open Up Your Eyes
Replies: 34
Views: 188

Open Up Your Eyes

Sharp eyes and acute hearing repeatedly swept over the areas Maru's newfound compatriot could not cover on her own. He realized only after the fact that he'd given her orders as he would a soldier, not bothering to question whether she was actually a shinobi or merely a member of the clan. It was no...

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