The Mentalist's Apprentice [Lonely Training]

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The Mentalist's Apprentice [Lonely Training]

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Tenshi dragged her feet up the winding mountain path to the Motoi family besso. An uphill battle, scaling the mountain trail up the shoulder of Bald Mountain, the multiplied burden of responsibility. The path was strewn with jagged stones and wilted garden hedges. A few statues remained giving the impression of the grounds once being well-maintained before having fallen to weeds.  

It had been six months since the shinobi of the Cloud discovered her and her found family in the old abandoned mountains. Ever since then their lives had become increasingly entangled. Motoi Naoki was the worst of them. A retired nin with too much time on her hands. She had been more than hospitable; offering the run of her own home. Food, beds, hot water-- they were welcome to it all. “This house is too much space for me anyway.” she half laughed. Her only requirement an insistence upon their education. “Treat it as a condition of staying under my roof.”

For the youngers, that meant schoolwork; writing, reading, math and all that. But for Tenshi it meant training.

Lady Motoi personally offered her services as a tutor but the ways of the shinobi came natural to Tenshi. Even during the Academy she rarely need to study theory. It was enough to know the mechanics, and maybe receive first-hand experience, then intuition would see her through the rest. That was until her affinity for Genjutsu had been discovered. Her zealous instructors worked tirelessly to nurture her gift. Inevitably, it became more than she could manage, but as luck would have it, their ‘benefactor’ turned out to be a specialist. 

Still, she refused to ‘mooch’ and tried every means to resist the woman's invasion into her life. Fearing over reliance would change her from guest to prisoner. She’d been mostly successful; it was her adopted siblings who let themselves be tamed.

All in all, the girl thought, as she caught her breath as she made the ascent. It’s a fair price to pay. The shoulder of Bald Mountain overlooked a range of mountain pasture– a hard to beat view. She savored a lungful of fresh, clean air. It was heaven compared to the cramped cave dwellings, or old tombs and tunnels they were used to. They deserved this. And she wouldn’t be the one to take it from them.

The secluded manor's chalk white walls appeared mirage-like out of a stone facade. The structure was weathered, but the freshly repainted emblem of the Cloud Village’s renowned ‘Red Chrysanthemum’ shined on the front gate. The twice condemned mansion had remained vacant for years. Only recently had Lady Naoki begun restorations, after inheriting it from a dead aunt– or was it a sister? Either way the Motoi family passed it down like a curse.

Tenshi left her shoes outside. The lady of the manor detested messiness. She would feel guilty for disturbing the maids hard work. She never saw them. Only heard the sounds they made as they worked. They were like busy ghosts, closing doors and shuffling as they slipped through the halls. 

“Hello? Here, Motoi-sensei, ” she announced. The house was woodwind hollow and echoed her greeting back at her. She tiptoed, though there was nothing for her to disturb inside but the old dust. No carpets or wall hangings to muffle the lonely sound of her footsteps. Creak! Creak!

At the end of the hall she slid aside a yellowed paper screen. 

Motoi Naoki awaited her within in the small tearoom, sitting on the opposite end of a low table.

The lady of the manor wore a uchikake of scarlet and black. and an opaque, doll-like expression. An aura of frailty clung to her, it was something in the gray cast of her skin and sunken cheeks, hinting at the cause of her retirement. 

“Hey, I said I’m here.”

A beat passed before the woman, still withholding eye contact, cleared her throat. 

“But you can- ugh!”

Grumbling to herself, Tenshi performed her quickest bow, hands snapping to her thighs. It was either that or waste another afternoon in a standoff. Motoi was a traditionalist, the type to stand on ritual and never shift. Her sensei would settle for nothing but a proper entrance.

“Ah, there you are, Tenshi.” she said, blinking as if suddenly recognizing her.

She entered with a groan, every step followed by the soft beat of tatami. Tenshi knelt across from her sensei, amazed that the woman’s teeth weren’t chattering in this frigid room. The besso- was braced from the wind, but the stone held cold, and in the morning there were nothing but smoldering ashes in the firepit. 

She looked over the room. A spider knitted cobwebs in a corner. Some creature had to make it a home. Otherwise it was completely bare.

Tenshi kept her jacket zipped up, and pulled over her nose to block out the damp, mothball smell. She cupped hands laying in her lap and closed her eyes. A signal she was ready for warm ups.

They always began their sessions with a tedious but, ultimately, very serious meditation. Lady Naoki had no patience for teasing comments about how easily she could ‘empty her mind.’"

The first time Motoi-sensei provided thorough instructions on what she called the ‘art of slowing down time.’.

Imagine a line drawing your head to the rafters. Straighten your spine.   

Breathe in. Deep through the nose. Fill the diaphragm. Hold. Exhale through the mouth. Hollow the stomach.

The aim was to find inner peace– a perfect silence of thought –amidst external chaos. It was a foundational exercise in self mastery. Genjutsu required a certain flow state and this would get her there. It would serve as the basis for the lesson to come; settling her river of thoughts, which when left to its own devices often turned into rapids. 

Tenshi did her best to imitate Motoi deep inhales. But each intake of breath stole all the air out of the room, leaving Tenshi to suffocate. And her sighs were a gale, she could only dig in her toes to avoid being blown away. 

She kept her seat. Maintaining the punishing position while ignoring the ache in her knees.

Breathe in. Breathe out.

Distantly, she heard a set of dividers slide open and shut.

She shook off the brief interruption, reset–

Breathe in. Breathe out.  

–and returned to her battle of wills. The distraction proved the necessity of practice. In actual combat, the ability to think clearly amidst chaos was crucial. She had to retain possession of her mind. If she lost composure the enemy would turn it against her. 

She stopped counting her breaths, it had become reflex. 

She statued. The excited energy building inside of her. Tenshi breathed it all in-- the anxious unrest, pent up frustration. She refused to hold on to it. Allowing the feelings to float freely, to bubble up and pop along the surface. She submerged deeper into her mind, like slipping into an ice bath. Distractions cleared. All was void. Empty.



Time passed.

“Make your way back to me." The mentalist’s voice snipped the thread of concentration and her shoulders sagged. 

She blinked against the light, looking upon the world with fresh eyes as if after a heavy rain. The sun had turned; the dust motes swirled in the light. Her vision centered on Lady Naoki.

The pale woman gave her the smallest nod of approval. “Let’s begin.”
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The Mentalist's Apprentice [Lonely Training]

Post by Dual » Sat Nov 30, 2024 10:51 pm

“Show me what you have learned.”
Tenshi appreciated the former nin’s disregard for small talk. Her new sensei had made it clear she expected her to arrive thoroughly prepared. The genin took it as a test to prove to her instructor she wasn’t a waste of time.
Obligingly, She transitioned through the hand seals, holding the last for her inspection.

“Hm… That feels comfortable to you?”

The gray-eyed girl raised a brow.

“I only ask because most practitioners will place the index finger under the second knuckle but to each their own.”

They sat in silence, both harboring expectations. A corner of Tenshi’s mouth twitched. This is where they differed fundamentally. While Tenshi knew there were many routes to the same end, for Motoi, there was only one correct way of doing things.

Only after Tenshi adjusted her placement did they proceed.

Using a delicate page turner, she uncovered a book on the floor between them. She flicked through images and rough depictions of the anatomy of the ear. Her Pointer tapped rhythmically as she pontificated upon the different structures. Tenshi rubbed pins and needles out of her legs. Try as she might, the girl couldn’t stop the information from bouncing off of her ear drum.

“Let’s try something a bit different, since this does not seem to be your preferred method of instruction.”

“It never was.”

Motoi Naoki leaned back, as if coming to a revelation. “Ah, you're an experiential learner, then? Your 'Alluring Voice', for example, how do you did you come across that jutsu?”

“I don't know. It just comes to me. I have the intention, and I push, force it on to whoever is watching. I always know when I've struck the right spot, I get this kind of tingly response.”

“Where?”

Tenshi itched behind her ear.

“Perfect! Here, that’s exactly where your focus should remain,“ she said, tapping emphatically at the diagram.

“The yellow snail?’”

“Cochlea.” Motoi corrected, though the observation yielded a smile, a sight as rare as summer snow. “Allow me to provide a demonstration.”
The change in the woman’s demeanor was nearly imperceptible; the slightest shift of her jaw. She held a hand out before her, turned it over, and pressed finger and thumb together. Her movements Deliberately exaggerated in order to draw Tenshi’s focus.

The girl found herself closing her eyes, bracing for impact. But Even with the foreknowledge she couldn’t suppress a twinge of apprehension that made her heart race.

It started as a breath at the Shell of her ear. Subtle and considerate. Then came the snap. It hit like A kick drum. A phantom touch manipulated her imagination. She glimpsed the point of ignition In her mind's eye and the muffled explosion rumbling from afar. Tenshi could pinpoint it precisely– off to her left, perhaps twenty to twenty-five meters back. Thankfully the mentalist had a heart. She could only imagine what it could Have been, a sound loud enough to steal silence away forever.

Tenshi shook off the feeling. Now, it was her turn.

She stole a short breath, visualizing her target, Naoki, in her mind. With an exhale, Tenshi synchronized her chakra flow with her body's natural rhythm. Raising her hand, she balanced the weight of potential at her finger tip with the release of energy timed perfectly for the moment it slipped.

The snap! echoed outward projecting like ripples in a pond. Initially, Tenshi thought it would be hard to target such a tiny and specific point, but she was practically drawn there, surfing the sound waves, crawling through her victim’s ear canal and straight to the vulnerable organ.

Silence.

“Like music,” Motoi said at last with another small congratulatory nod. Though Tenshi hadn't heard a thing. “Of course, perfection will come with practice.”

The genin rolled her eyes.

“Shall we break for tea?”
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*[Genjutsu • Boom!]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.[/quote]
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Post by Dual » Wed Jan 08, 2025 10:04 pm

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Continued from the previous post. Tenshi resumes her private lessons with Motoi Naoki, a retired Genjutsu specialist.
A tray of tea had appeared in the doorway. Tenshi rose to retrieve it. Checking down the hall twice to catch sight of the unseen servant but she’d already vanished somewhere deep in the ghost-quiet house. She placed the tray between them gently. Though she wasn’t a fan, Tenshi Indulged her, and sipped her leaf juice. Tenshi had never been one to turn her nose up at ‘free’, and despite the bitter taste, the warm feeling it gave her was satisfying.

“You seem underwhelmed. With the lesson, not the tea.”

The genin lifted her head. Had her face been revealing too much or was she simply that perceptive? “I guess I’m not seeing the point? If I wanted to blow something up I could just do it, instead of making it sound like I did.”

“Apart from avoiding damage to surroundings, bystanders and yourself, the technique has the advantage of subtlety. Some situations require a degree of finesse.”

“Sounds scary.”

“It should be.” she said as she settled her cup. “The ‘point’ of deception is to confuse your enemy, destroy their trust in their own senses.”

Tenshi nodded along, and though she did her best not to stare, her attention strayed as the former Jounin reached up to tie her hair. The woman’s sleeve slipped back, revealing patches of pale, flaking skin like peeling paint.

“In this way, you burden them with too much to think about… As I see you are.“

Now that Motoi-sensei had been lulled into an agreeable state they entered into the question stage. While the lady of the manor maintained an unguarded persona, no one would ever call her ‘open’. She shared little and what she did was always obscured. This was a rare chance to squeeze some truth out of her.
“You know, you talk about it with a lot of passion for someone who gave it all up.” Her career as a Jounin had not only come with notoriety as the mythic Red Chrysanthemum, but power as well. Tenshi couldn’t imagine letting all of that slip.

“I lost the touch,” the woman shrugged. “What is left for those of us who can no longer ‘do’ but to teach?”

“The touch?”

She nodded. “Of all the ninja arts Genjutsu is the most human. To use it effectively we must not only know, but understand our enemy’s fears, hopes, joys, desires. We must treat our enemies as intimates in order to create the illusion of reality.” She brought her fingers together. “The ‘touch’ is a connection to these intangibles. An empathy. I believe, comes from an innate sensitivity to the spirits of others.”

Tenshi had come to realize that everyone had a unique way of looking at the ninja ‘arts’. For her, it was like dancing to the rhythm of a song-- things just flowed, one note after another.

Her attention split; a kettle whistled off in the distance. More tea?

“--Which originally led into our next lesson. Though, you have completely surpassed my expectations. I wanted to wait, but you took to the previous jutsu so well. Yes, something a bit more challenging for this afternoon…”

Tenshi faltered at the faint praise. She wouldn’t let it go to her head; she’d refused to let this student-teacher relationship be anything but transactional. Is she trying to get me excited? Maybe hoping that the mystery would be enough to draw her in.

“A B-Rank jutsu, one I believe would suit you quite nicely, I think…” Motoi smiled and took a sip. Twice in one day. Tenshi didn’t know if that was a miracle or an omen.

Her joints creaked as she rose, her frailty evident in each slow shuffle across the room. Whatever illness she suffered was eating away at her youth. The old lady clothes she insisted on didn’t help either.

But even after expending all the effort to get there she hesitated at taking a scroll down from the shelf.

“If I’m going to need it sooner or later, I’d rather have it sooner than later.”

A little attitude provided the push she needed.

“Let’s begin,” It was time for another lecture, but Tenshi leaned in for this one. “You have likely heard that when one sense is blocked, the others will compensate, but what if all were not suppressed and, instead, amplified. That is the thesis behind a technique called ‘Sensitivity’.”
It made sense. Genjutsu specialists were notorious control freaks. Sometimes she searched for that trait in herself. Asking anyone else was a waste of time, they always gave a resounding ‘yes’.

Motoi-sensei cracked the scroll open and cleared her throat for an oration.

“Can’t we just do it like before?” Tenshi said, the words spilling out sharper than she meant. “Maybe I can get the hang of it faster that way.”

“Are you sure?”

Tenshi sucked her teeth. She hated repeating herself. “If anyone asks I’ll say you warned me.”
“As you wish. A demonstration then.”

Tenshi prepared herself mentally, focusing on sight reading the hand seals as Motoi performed them only lifting her head after being prompted.
“Look into my eyes.” she said.

A chill washed over as her defenses dropped. The effects were subtle and immediate. the walls began to breathe, glimmers of sunlight became sharp flares in the air. Her mouth dropped. Shock then turned to awe as her senses expanded further outward. She could pick up the scent of the concentrate lying at the bottom of the cup.

Tenshi explored further; a slight smile tugged at the corner of her lips. Beneath the silence the sound of the house settling was a roar. She heard mice under the floorboard, Motoi's steady breathing, heartbeats, and... She could hear a wind rising outside, its whistle had an urgency to it.

“What is-agh!” she winced and covered her ears as the whistle jumped decibels. It was like the sound of a blade being sharpened with her ear as the whetstone.

“Tenshi…”

The loud, muffled whisper made her flinch. Though she heard the concern in her voice, it was Motoi Naoki’s disturbed expression; red cracks appeared in the bulging whites of her eyes, so vivid she swore she saw them squirm. The intensity of her stare told her the woman had yet to release the Genjutsu.
Tenshi tried to get up, to get away but she stumbled; her legs numb from sitting so long. But she fared no better standing. Her legs threatening collapse with the impact of each step vibrating through her bones, all the while plagued with the incessant ringing.

She stumbled backward, reaching out to brace herself but her hand punched through the paper walls and grabbed hold of air.

The Illusion shattered and reality was restored just as she landed on the floor. As she recovered, slowly, she could still hear the approach of a rumbling earthquake but at least the ringing had stopped.

“Are you alright?” The girl heard from within the room.

“Yeah, fine,” she said sharply. She was beginning to rise when a hand reached out to her first. “Thank-agh!”

Those booming footsteps belonged to a giant whose broad slump-shouldered frame now filled the hall. It stretched out a hand– a claw, crooked and gray. But it hardly compared to the horror of her face. Her, because although the flesh was splotchy and sagged as if it were melting off her bone, it was still grotesquely feminine. Tenshi flinched back, not sure if she was looking at a monster or the lingering effects of the jutsu.

The girl shot to her feet, scraping up what remained of her dignity. It wouldn’t have been so dramatic if her house wasn’t made of sticks and paper. She thought to herself in an attempt to save face.

By then Motoi had rushed her way over. She communicated something with a few hand gestures that made the giant bow her head. All of her movements were sharp and precise, as if she were scolding a naughty child. The maid retreated without a word spoken.

“Tenshi,” the woman said, turning to her student. “We’ll end our session here for today.”
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Post by Dual » Wed Jan 08, 2025 10:07 pm

She stayed away for a week.

Motoi’s dismissal had burned more than she thought it would. What was in it for her anyway? She couldn’t see a reason, unless there was some sort of return. Maybe claw back a feeling of superiority from tormenting her? Whatever it was Tenshi was determined to figure it out on her own– like she always had. That would show her.

The genin paid a reluctant visit to the Academy, willing to beg, borrow and steal to get-. She was relieved to discover she only needed to borrow. She left the building with a copied scroll and accompanying literature under her arms.

See? I never needed you in the first place.

Unfortunately, book work proved to be the worst way to learn. Even with Motoi’s lesson as a launching point she made no headway deciphering the complex jargon. She couldn’t just stare at scribbles; she needed to do.

But that was a dead end as well. Practicing the ‘most human of the ninja arts’ required a partner and finding willing victims was near impossible.
Demoralized and out of options, Tenshi finally admitted to herself that she couldn’t run from it, she had to relive it.

Tenshi made her return trek on the gray eve of the first snowfall. Just like winter she’d been putting things off until the last moment. She kept an eye out for movement as she approached the still and shuttered house. There was no sign of life, no sign of the maid. She cursed herself for feeling relieved.

Tenshi stopped on the porch to knock the slush off her shoes, and was removing them when a cracked screen opened and Motoi Naoki poked her head out of a window.

“I was worried you had forgotten the way.”

“About the last time, uh, sorry I wrecked your house.” Tenshi began, dodging eye contact. So why did she feel like she was making a confession? “I wasn't scared. You just took me by surprise.”

The lady absorbed her words in silence. Yeah, I don’t believe me either.

“Fear isn’t a weakness. It is a natural response, if nothing else you show good instincts.”

Tenshi snorted.

“I told you Genjutsu is the most human of the ninja arts and humans are emotional creatures. The fear, confusion, and panic you felt… Use that as inspiration. Genjutsu forces our will, our experiences onto others. For Status Genjutsu, the more visceral experience the more vivid the recreation.”

It was like the soul of a singer’s voice, it came from the heart. Finally, she understood. Why hadn’t she said that in the first place? “I want to try again…”

“I’ll fix your wall, too.” The girl added as Motoi-sensei ushered her in.

“Already replaced.”

They returned to their set positions, skipping the lecture as there was no sense rehearsing. Tenshi performed the hand signs before her sensei’s scrutinizing eye. Just as she remembered them. Then closed her eyes to concentrate.

It took a moment to build up the needed chakra building, attempts during practice were just as slow, labored even. All the same it was much different from before. Having a partner made it more real, like performing in front of a crowd.

“Trust me?” The apprentice raised a daring eyebrow.

“By all means, take your revenge.” Naoki said, her voice coated in almost pleasure. It was likely the closest thing to combat for her. Despite their shared eagerness, Tenshi met a firm resistance, like slamming into a brick wall. Her flow of chakra flared, fearing she lacked the strength to break through her mental guard but the lady didn’t give an inch. She recalled her lesson about ‘finesse’-- some situations needed a lockpick not a sledge hammer. With great effort, she filed her chakra into a point sharp enough to puncture through the wall of cognition.

A sudden whine and pop in her ear made the genin grit her teeth while Naoki remained unmoved.

“Ah,” Naoki said over her thoughts. “I suspected this would be a trouble spot for you. You over-emphasize hearing. It makes sense. That is how you navigate the world best. With this particular technique, you must be the musician and the gourmet.”

Tenshi huffed and eased her control. She was used to working with the subtleties of sound, by contrast this technique was more obvious, heavy-handed even, it went against her instincts. She gave it another try. This time determined to demonstrate mastery over the senses. It was hard enough stretching her influence across one sense, let alone five. Sight. Taste. Smell. Touch. Can’t forget touch. Tenshi thought as she served her sensei with a ‘vivid recreation’ of the pain in her own stiff knees.

The lady stifled a chuckle. “I can see that vein bulging on your forehead. The one you always get when you concentrate.”

“Knock it off!” Their brief connection snapped. Tenshi’s shoulders dropped. She’d been tensing without noticing. The girl realized, rubbing at her neck.

“Don't be embarrassed, it's the mark of a dedicated pupil.”

The girl rolled her eyes. She never thought she would be the one telling someone else to mature.

She began to form the seals to try again but Motoi-sensei stopped her.

“That will be enough for now. I advise you to exercise caution, at your current level, you will exhaust your chakra reserve long before you could make effective use of this technique.”

The illusionist's apprentice sucked her teeth. Why did all the fun things come with a catch?

When it was time to go, Motoi walked her out to the porch. “I’m impressed. You have shown vast improvement. I imagined you would need at least another week of sulking.”

“Funny, I was thinking the same about you,” She said, smiling as she pulled on her shoes. “Oh, I meant to ask… About the maid’s face? That wasn’t the jutsu it…” The rest of the question floated off into the air. “I should say ‘sorry’ or something, right-?”

“We can discuss that later. Much later.”

She waved goodbye and they parted ways but on the walk down the mountain, she tried to shake memories of the mute. Her and Motoi too. Why had Motoi been so cagey? It left room for paranoia to settle in. ‘Trust me?’ she heard her own words thrown back at her, as wariness of the mentalist’s intention grew. Did she try to overwhelm me on purpose? Maybe in the hopes of leaving a deeper impression upon her psyche?

The one thing she knew she would be back again soon.
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