[Companion] Tenpu

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[Companion] Tenpu

Post by King of Cats » Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:59 pm


Tenpu


General Information
Type: Spirit - Pet
Gender: Genderless
Age: Newborn
Appearance:
  • Body: As a spirit Tenpu has no natural physical body and is instead an amorphous black sphere of spiritual energy. Since fusing to Aizen's body it has morphed Aizen's blood to it's form and created a black sludge that lives inside of Aizen's blood stream. This sludge is Tenpu's body and appears dark and slimy. It can leak out of Aizen's pours and create a full body black suit for him. If outside of Aizen's body for too long the black sludge will be eaten away by Tenpu's real body and the spirit will die.
  • Notable Features:
    Symbiote SuitShow
    When Tenpu chooses to it can secrete the black sludge it creates from Aizen's blood to use as a physical covering around Aizen's skin. The black sludge will form a thin, almost latex, suit around the ninja. This suit covers his body entirely.

    The head of the suit is a black mask with two large, white eye holes. The Symbiote Suit sticks closely to Aizen's body to detail his muscles. On the chest is the symbol of a white spider with long legs going around Aizen's ribcage. The suit is dark black and blends in well with the night. It is very intimidating and Aizen certainly sticks out in a crowd while wearing it.
Personality:
  • General: Born from nothing Tenpu sees itself as the ruler of it's life. It's always felt free and lived content in the pursuit of thrills as it watched itself slowly kill each of it's hosts. Tenpu loves the thrill of having a strong, able body as it's host. It lives for the primal excitement of working it's hosts body. Despite it's own symbiotic living resulting in the killing of it's host Tenpu has never saw it's way of life as a curse, even when it was pointed out to the spirit by one of it's hosts. It likes to manipulate the host for dangerous scenarios and enjoys the fast pace of life. Having found a suitable host and living for such a long time the symbiote spirit has taken up a passion for human knowledge. It's curiosity is insatiable and Tenpu is a smart spirit with lots of wisdom. It lacks any sort of understanding for living beings however and frequently acts out of societal order. Having lived so long killing humans Tenpu is a violent spirit, though it isn't cruel Tenpu loves the rush of battle. It simply craves violence for the thrill. Tenpu is a violent spirit that desires understanding of the beings whom host his soul on earth.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Having no luck finding suitable hosts in the past Tenpu yearns to learn the secrets of what makes a human a good host for it to life upon.
  • Fears: With it's greatest weakness being sound Tenpu hates loud noises and fears a loud noise will unexpectedly shake it from it's host.
  • Combat Mentality: Tenpu doesn't care for putting strain on it's body, and on it's own does not fight. It helps it's host with what it must and enjoys it, but the actual work of combat is too much for the spirit to put effort into outside of manifesting the Symbiote Suit for it's host.
Battle Information Rank: D-Rank
Stats
  • Endurance: 1
  • Chakra Pool: 1
  • Control: 1
  • Strength: 1
  • Speed: 1
  • Willpower: 1
Equipment: None
Elemental Affinities: None
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Symbiosis:
The spirit has bonded with a human and has physically invaded their body by overpowering them. Through leeching small amounts of iron off the humans blood the spirit has made a body of black sludge that lives inside the human. This inflicts -2 Endurance and -1 Chakra Pool to the human. By bonding to a human the symbiote gives the host the ability to create webbing and simple weapons out of the body of the symbiote, this construction is created through ninjutsu. The body of the symbiote can also be excreted through the pores of the human with ninjutsu to create a black, rubber suit that conceals their identity, including their voice. The symbiote can be removed with sounds loud enough to temporarily deafen a human. If the sounds persist for more than 5 posts the spirit will be detached from the human and cause severe pain to the host. If the spirit remains detached for 10 posts or the thread ends it will die.
Concentrations
NinjutsuNone
TaijutsuNone
GenjutsuNone

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
None
TaijutsuShow
None
GenjutsuShow
None

History Long before humans were smart enough to know what it meant to pass on their blood Tenpu has always watched humanity from the shadows. It is a Grand Spirit that has lived for a very long time hopping from body to body. For the first years of it's life Tenpu clung to small mammals as a way to persist but eventually it grew to find humans more useful. As the years went on it learned about life through the eyes of humans and Tenpu enjoyed itself.

Over the years Tenpu found many hosts that lasted longer than average and the spirit was always happy when such a miracle occurred. The spirit has taken the time to study humans and it has learned much about humanity. All it would take is one good host to show it the true thrills of modern day life for Tenpu to appreciate the way humans live.

 
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Last edited by King of Cats on Sun Nov 26, 2023 2:24 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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[Companion] Tenpu

Post by Texas » Tue Nov 21, 2023 1:18 pm

Is this a spirit that is summoned. Or based on the stats, I am guessing it resides in our normal saigen world?
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[Companion] Tenpu

Post by King of Cats » Tue Nov 21, 2023 1:40 pm

its a spirit that functions as a pet. Upon entering his body it forms a bond with the blood of Aizen and exists in his blood similar to how a virus would attach to cells. It's a spirit that has made a body out of the iron in Aizen's blood. It doesn't need to be summoned, instead the spirit possesses the iron in his blood.
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Akari, KohakuGeninIwagakure no Sato
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[Companion] Tenpu

Post by Kabu » Fri Nov 24, 2023 11:12 pm

Your coding at the bottom of the app is messed up, everything else seems fine though
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Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
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[Companion] Tenpu

Post by King of Cats » Sat Nov 25, 2023 7:47 am

Fixed up
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Nara, ShiroyashaGeninKonohagakure no Sato
Kaguya, RenjiChuuninKirigakure no Sato
Shuryo, RokuHarubushiHeart Empire
Akari, KohakuGeninIwagakure no Sato
Kisama, AichiHarubushiHeart Empire
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Post by Niro » Sun Nov 26, 2023 1:08 pm

Spirits need some sort of chakra to exist/maintain their presence, I'd suggest changing the debuff to -3 CP or splitting it to -1 CP/-2 End.

Grand Spirits tend not to reincarnate, that's unique to the Genma. They can be immortal, however, so I'd just have him reside in and body hop when hosts die.

How does the suit form? How strong is the suit? ...Can the suit shoot webs? Make weapons?
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Post by King of Cats » Sun Nov 26, 2023 2:27 pm

Edited.

Fixed the debuff, adjusted the workings of the spirits life and death, slotted the symbiote suit and powers to be ninjutsu (will give Aizen a conc for it as well), also fixed a couple typos i saw
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Nara, ShiroyashaGeninKonohagakure no Sato
Kaguya, RenjiChuuninKirigakure no Sato
Shuryo, RokuHarubushiHeart Empire
Akari, KohakuGeninIwagakure no Sato
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Post by Niro » Sun Nov 26, 2023 5:25 pm

1/2
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Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaChuuninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaChuunin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
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Post by Kabu » Sun Nov 26, 2023 6:03 pm

Accepted
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Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
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