Mate's First Space Time

[Waterz]

Application: Fushinkou Mate
Change: Preapproval for jutsus
Open Space: Bedroom Key
C-Rank Jikukan Fuuinjutsu
Mate’s Personal Realm is quite a Spartan affair liking it to an extremely long hallway. But with this excess of wall space, she has plenty of space to allow others in. This kunai sized seal can be attached to any object of size or larger that a willing individual is holding. This becomes a “key” into her realm. The first time the “keyholder” activates this seal and thrust it into space, such as an surface, or even air, it will create a doorway into the Long Hallway. The location where the seal was first used becomes the keyholder’s personal door into the realm. They incur a Chakra Pool Cost for each post they are in this realm based on their control as they are willingly baring the cost to stay there.

Stamina Drain
Keyholder’s Control	Stamina Cost
41-50	1
31-40	2
21-30	3
11-20	4
1-10	5

Erase Space: Katon Paw
C-Rank Jikukan Nintaijutsu
Requires: Kūgāpou • Hunter's Prediction
Owing to the Defensive nature of Kūgāpou, Mate create this technique to battle against Katon Ninjutsu. Mate can perform a serious of hand seals and coat her hands in a purplish aura. For the next post, she may deflect elemental attacks as if they were physical weapons. This also erases Katon Elemental power of it by [Control]. For example, with the minimal control for Jikukan, she can reduce a 40 Strength Fireball by 25, leaving a 15 Strength blast to hit her. If her control is higher, it will look like she slapped it out of existence. This only affects the Katon Elemental Chakra.

Close Time: Blade of Isolation
C-Rank Jikukan Nintaijutsu
Requires: Iaido • Ancestral Focus
After performing the needed handseals, Mate will assume a posture while holding the sheathed katana in both hands. This causes a purplish aura to activate around the blade itself. When the blade is drawn and used to slash an object free from a living being, like a kunai in the air, the lock of a door, or an explosive seal Trap, the aura will close time for the object, rendering it immovable and unusable for three post.

Payment: Pre-approval before training

[Waterz]

editted

[Ace Trainer]

Stamina cost should be Chakra Pool cost.

Erase Space: Elemental Paw
C-Rank Jikukan Nintaijutsu
Requires: Kūgāpou • Hunter's Prediction
Owing to the Defensive nature of Kūgāpou, Mate create this technique to battle against Elemental Ninjutsu. Mate can perform a serious of hand seals and coat her hands in a purplish aura. For the next three post, she may deflect elemental attacks as if they were physical weapons. This also erases the elemental power of it by [Control]. For example, with the minimal control for Jikukan, she can reduce a 40 Strength Fireball by 25, leaving a 15 Strength blast to hit her. If her control is higher, it will look like she slapped it out of existence.

This is probably higher ranked, like, A-rank. And is gonna be considerably draining. Since this isn't really how Erase Space was intended to be used.

Close Time: Blade of Isolation
C-Rank Jikukan Nintaijutsu
Requires: Iaido • Ancestral Focus
After performing the needed handseals, Mate will assume a posture while holding the sheathed katana in both hands. This causes a purplish aura to activate around the blade itself. When the blade is drawn and used to slash an object free from a living being, like a kunai in the air, the lock of a door, or an explosive seal Trap, the aura will close time for the object, rendering it immovable and unusable.

Needs to say how long it will remain closed.

Tighten Space: Special Delivery
C-Rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of Hand seals and at the end place an object between their palms while performing the Monkey Seal while locking their eyes at a position within 30m. The item will instantly vanish and appear at that position with zero speed or strength. This can be used to silently plant an explosive tag, deliver paperwork to a closed office, or deliver a kunai in secret. The object has to be held by the user and must be reasonably flat to fit between the Monkey Hand Seal.

This isn't really how tighten space works. The space between object and location would be condensed, and would become visibly condensed.

Recycle Time: Door Veiwing
C-Rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Sensory Style • Beyond Senses, Personal Realm
This Sensory jutsu allows the user to place their hand on the door and feel chakra sources from the Material World within 25 meters of the associated opening. This only gives the Shinobi an idea of how many entities with chakra are present in that general area.

I don't see how this is Recycle Time, it seems like its just Sensory.

[Waterz]

Ok edited, I'm trying to keep her Paw C-Ranked so she can build her own S/T style

[Kabu]

Recycle Time: Door Viewing <- Nothing's being recycled here. It's just plain ol sensory.

[Waterz]

edited

[TheLacarix]

Open Space: Bedroom Key – The concept for this works fine, though this isn’t written correctly, you need to talk about inscribing the seal onto an object and then turning it into a key, personal realms need to be written within a spoiler of the concentration, not within a specific technique. So you can remove that bit.

Erase Space: Katon Paw < I’m confused why exactly it’s written this way, you can just erase space that any attack in of an equal rank, doesn’t have to be specifically elemental nin.

Close Time: Blade of Isolation < How long does this last?

[Niro]

3 days

[Niro]

1 day

[Kao]

Time