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Post by Checkmate » Mon Mar 28, 2016 11:16 am

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Post by Sia » Thu Apr 07, 2016 8:33 am

the rules here: viewtopic.php?&t=?p=1993054&t=5899683


still say you can increase prerequisites for ninjutsu techs to give them more stats
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Post by Zangy » Sun Jun 05, 2016 10:17 pm

viewtopic.php?&t=?p=1980272&t=5899688 <- You don't use points to rank up.
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Post by TyDie » Mon Jun 06, 2016 8:47 am

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"Like boosting, higher debuffs can occur with additional +5 requirements over 30. (i.e: 35 ninjutsu requirement debuffs -15)."

S ranks start at 35, so this sentence seem wrong.
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Post by Takumi » Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:47 am

I really think that a lot of these unwritten rules should be written down. It wouldn't take that much time to write them down, especially if it's just when you run into an issue with a member. They could just be jotted down in the Miscellaneous Rules section, or at the very least, the mods should have a thread, even on their own, where they can compile said rules and then regularly transfer them over. It's very frustrating when told something is a rule, when there is no evidence of the rule unless you scour through other modifications. (Then, when asking about exceptions, being told that unless it's written down, there are no exceptions to this unwritten rule. I'm the only one apparently that thinks this is contradictory.)

Rules that I am aware of that should be written down in the Miscellaneous Rules, but cannot find in any rules (aka unwritten rules):
  • The maximum for a mod for jutsu is 75 points or 25 jutsu, whichever comes first
  • The jutsu for Style Packs for Member Appreciation Events must be claimed at same time as the pack.
I'm sure there are others, but these are the two I've seen this week.

I feel this will obviously help members know the rules better, and will also help mods, who won't have to repeatedly correct members who didn't know the unwritten rules.

Edit: this actually existed in the past, and should again.
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Post by Valkier » Mon Jun 13, 2016 11:47 pm

The following jutsu in the Sankaton archives contain text that imply they should require advanced channelling (and thereby ninjutsu specialisation). I can see no reason that they are not using hand-seals beyond simple flavour, but systematically they should be updated to either use hand-seals OR list the Advanced Chanelling Conc as a pre-requisite on each technique:
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Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a .5x.5x.5m diameter film of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The film can then be moved around and controlled within a 5m area of the user, weakening the strength of anything that passes through it by 5 strength, and causing anything smaller than the film to completely disappear.

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Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a .5x.5x.5m diameter film of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The film can then be moved around and controlled within a 5m area of the user, weakening the strength of anything that passes through it by 5 strength, and causing anything smaller than the film to completely disappear.

*[Annihilation: Climax]
B-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a 2x2x2m diameter ball of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space between their hands. The ball can then be shot off at a speed of 20. Whenever this ball comes in contact with any physical substance, it eats and corrodes the substance, instantly destroying whatever it hits, but only equal to the volume of the ball, where it hit. Otherwise weakening it by 20 strength.

*[Annihilation: Resolution]
A-Ranked Annihilation Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a 3x3x3m diameter ball of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space in front of their hands. The ball can then be shot off at a speed of 25. Whenever this ball comes in contact with any physical substance, it eats and corrodes the substance, instantly destroying whatever it hits, but only equal to the volume of the ball, where it hit, otherwise weakening it's structure by 25 strength.

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S-Ranked Sankaton Ninjutsu
Rather than using hand seals, the ninja is required to put their hands in a specific formation, as if gripping a basketball with each hand. As they do this, a 4x4x4m diameter ball of pure Sankaton chakra is created in the space in front of their hands. The ball can then be shot off at a speed of 35. Whenever this ball comes in contact with any physical substance, it eats and corrodes the substance, instantly destroying whatever it hits, but only equal to the volume of the ball, where it hit, otherwise weakening it's structure by 35 strength.
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Post by zippo » Tue Jun 14, 2016 7:15 pm

Smell Control Genjutsu + Custom Smell technique requiring a smelling trigger = Potential to either be broken or a good strategy.

The brain already thinks it's smelling, say, mint from Smell Control. There would need to be an indepth reason behind this having not a chance being a trigger due to the fact that the person's neurons already detects the 'smelling' of mint, which would further help the succession of a genjutsu requiring a smelling trigger.

There's no rule against it, and isn't seen in the miscellaneous ruling, so it wouldn't be an incorrect experience if someone were to do this right now.

Maybe it's a stack strategy yet to be thought of, maybe it's a semantic flaw. Would like to know which is the truth if anyone were to implement it and things like it into roleplay.

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Post by zippo » Sat Jun 18, 2016 1:57 am

"For the purpose of creation, Dynamic NPCs have the following restrictions."

This is used again under Static NPC in the NPC Rule.

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Post by Sanjuro » Tue Jun 21, 2016 3:06 pm

viewtopic.php?&t=5927847/1/#new <- All the base Sensory techs are in Yards and Feet instead of Meters.
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Post by Izanagi » Tue Jun 21, 2016 3:14 pm

For Empathy Sensory there are three nearly identical archives for C rank and B Rank for Doton, Suiton and Fuuton but then at A Rank it only has the Suiton version listed:

*[Sensory Style • Birth of Tsunami]
A-rank Suiton Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, focus a large amount of chakra, and then release it into a body of water. For the next 5 posts the body of chakra left in the water will act as an independent sensor. Releasing waves of chakra out 50 meters, functioning like an empathy jutsu. This will see out 50 meters, and up to 20meters in depth, evoking flashes of images in the users head of the lay out, and things happening in the area.

It feels like there should also be a Doton and Fuuton version of this technique for the sake of consistency and not locking out 2 elements to be only accessible to specialists at that rank.

It would be an easy enough Fix basically just something like:

*[Sensory Style • Birth of an Avalanche]
A-rank Doton Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, focus a large amount of chakra, and then release it into a body of earth. For the next 5 posts the body of chakra left in the earth will act as an independent sensor. Releasing waves of chakra out 50 meters, functioning like an empathy jutsu. This will see out 50 meters, and up to 20meters in depth, evoking flashes of images in the users head of the lay out, and things happening in the area.

*[Sensory Style • Birth of a Hurricane]
A-rank Fuuton Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, focus a large amount of chakra, and then release it into the air. For the next 5 posts the body of chakra left in the air will act as an independent sensor. Releasing waves of chakra out 50 meters, functioning like an empathy jutsu. This will see out 50 meters, and up to 20meters in height, evoking flashes of images in the users head of the lay out, and things happening in the area.

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Post by Jinan B » Tue Jun 21, 2016 10:24 pm

Problem 1: This thread apparently doesn't get checked anymore, lol.

Problem 2: the eye color rule is not actually listed anywhere in the rules.
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Post by Jinan B » Sun Jun 26, 2016 6:44 am

Making a request here for basic armor to be given like a set price at it's most basic level, seeing as I have no access to staff threads and all that. Seems to me like it'd help with all that. (like, having a list with weapon pricing "Armour that protects up to X strength: X points for body part protected" or something like that)
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Post by Aes Sedai » Sun Jun 26, 2016 11:28 am

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Owl country is in there twice, looks like it's supposed to just be #25, but it's on #22 as well.

EDIT: Also Pebbles Country is there twice, 36&37.


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Post by Sanjuro » Sun Jun 26, 2016 12:51 pm

Aes Sedai:
Sun Jun 26, 2016 4:28 pm
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Owl country is in there twice, looks like it's supposed to just be #25, but it's on #22 as well.

EDIT: Also Pebbles Country is there twice, 36&37.
That's because they take up both slots, they're larger countries. Owl definitely, you can see in the description of it's borders that it's meant to have 18 to the south and 26 to the north. Pebble maybe? No borders description but it's meant to serve as the war zone between Wind and Earth, so taking up 36 and 37 makes sense.
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Post by FluffyGinja » Sun Jun 26, 2016 8:09 pm

Okay, so, I checked quite a few of these but the rest that I haven't are out of my hands. What I went through is fixed spelling errors, mistakes, etc. The real quick stuff.

The rest of these, like issues with jutsu that involve not having certain things, like speed or strength or whatever else that isn't a grammatical error but is instead a system error, I will handle with myself and someone else included so I can get some feedback from them.

That being said, those who I have done, I have your post in hand and will do stuff with it tomorrow, when I am not tired.
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Post by Zangy » Fri Jul 01, 2016 4:03 pm

*Space-Time Style • Empathetic Migration Technique
C-Rank Migration Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals and then focusing on a target within 50 feet, visible chakra distortion begins forming around a targeted body part and forces it to separate from reality as long as the user can hold their focus for a short time. The target's body part will phase through solid objects and otherwise be physically intangible but chakra-based techniques or enhanced attacks can still damage it as if it was physical. This migration fades after 2 posts and the target must move at a speed equal to user's Control or the connection breaks and the limb is forced tangible once more with a shock of pain in the area.


^ Auto-hit.
And apparently space/time hasn't been fixed to the new system, so it
probably shouldn't be in the archives.


*Space-Time Style • Euclidean Migration Technique
B-Rank Migration Ninjutsu
The user floods their body with chakra and then forms several hand seals, then displaces themselves from dimensional space and time. They become capable of moving their body at a speed equal to their control but lose physical form, unable to interact with or be interacted with physically. Elemental techniques that affect chakra can damage them but cannot break them out of migration unless the user wills it, 3 posts pass or if the user attempts to completely intersect themselves with another. This will cause them to be thrown from the attempt and broken from migration, stunned for 1 post.

^ Doesn't have a cap = to speed.
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The payment rule needs to be added into the elemental body rules, as of now it doesn't mention how you pay for it at all. As far as I'm aware it takes 2,000 words.


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Post by Tsedas » Sun Jul 03, 2016 11:34 am

Was browsing Puppet Style Archives and saw some problems
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Prerequisite: *[Puppetry Style • Intermediate Puppetry Technique]
Master Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move a max of X times 5 meters away, where X is equal to the puppeteer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to humans or animals arms and legs at a speed of 5, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and at least 20 strength to resist the strings. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any natural way.

*[Puppetry Style • Perfection of Puppetry Technique]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[Puppetry Style • Master Puppetry Technique]
Perfection of Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move a max of X times 12 meters away, where X is equal to the puppeteer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to humans or animals arms and legs at a speed of 10, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and have at least 25 strength to resist the puppeteer’s control. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any way.
This either needs to be renamed Master Puppetry or the prereq for the A rank puppetry tech needs to have it's prereq updated. Also there is no intermediate puppetry tech, just the the Initiate one. So the prereq for ADvanced/Master puppetry needs to be updated as well.

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Quote:
You are limited to a total of 2 Anti-Sense jutsu. Anti-Sense jutsu are those that make you undetectable by sight, smell, sound, taste, touch or chakra sensory.
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*Perfect Hidden Mist Technique
S-rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *Obscuring Mist Technique
After forming the required hand seals, the ninja creates a blanket of mist which covers the area around them. The mist covers 100x100x100m area. The mist limits the visibility of those inside to 1/2 meter in any direction, and completely dampens scents, making it impossible to smell anything without advanced smelling techniques, and limiting advance smelling, and scent control techniques to 2m. Additionally, sound is dampened to the point where nothing can be heard without advanced hearing techniques. Those using advanced hearing techniques won't be able to hear anything that's not within 4meters of them. Additionally, the mist is saturated in chakra, which makes it impossible for sensors outside the mist to sense who is within it, and those within it it to sense outside of it. This technique lasts a number of posts equal to the user's 1/2 stamina.
That's antisight (mist in the way), anti-scent and anti-hearing. Also, it should specify the speed of manifestation.

EDIT: Anti-sensor too.
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Post by Zangy » Fri Jul 22, 2016 9:49 pm

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If an ability allows for jutsu, you do not need an additional concentration that utilizes these jutsu, as they fall under the abilities skill. <-- Should specify ninjutsu and genjutsu only.
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Post by Zangy » Fri Jul 22, 2016 10:52 pm

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In the description of the concentration, it has 'bth' instead of both.

Also, it should have where you can view what the color code is for the extension.

Also, there are two mist jutsu
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Post by Zangy » Sat Jul 23, 2016 2:20 pm

There really should be a specialization area on the character sheet.
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Post by Valkier » Sat Jul 23, 2016 2:52 pm

Zangy:
Sat Jul 23, 2016 7:20 pm
There really should be a specialization area on the character sheet.
This is intentionally left off of the template because specialisation is not required, and is a little more advanced than a new user might wish to get into - they can always add it if they understand it. The concern is that new users might feel like they need to take one, if it has a dedicated section on the sheet.
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Post by Niro » Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:39 pm

*Raiton • Earth-Shattering Roar from the Highest Heavens
S-ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prerequisite: 45 Ninjutsu, Raiton • Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunderous Bombardment
Considered the ultimate expression of prowess with the lightning element, this technique creates a bolt of lightning of unmatched power. After using the correct hand seals, the user concentrates lightning between their hands before firing it in a single bolt of lightning which travels for a maximum of 150m. Once it connects with a solid or at the user's will, it will explode with the force of 25 exploding tags, while expanding the raiton shocking quality for an extra 40 meters outside of the explosion radius. This technique causes the user's arms to become paralysed for 2 posts after use.

Doesn't have a speed

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Post by Zangy » Tue Jul 26, 2016 12:08 pm

There is literally no reason to start lower ranked. You get punished stat-wise, point-wise, and effort-wise.
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Post by FluffyGinja » Tue Jul 26, 2016 12:44 pm

Alright. First thing is first. If you have a problem on a part of the forum and you don't link it, I'm not looking for it. This goes for anyone. If your problem is a general thing, it should be obvious you don't need to link anything.

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Post by Zangy » Tue Jul 26, 2016 4:34 pm

EDIT NVM DERPED
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Post by Niro » Wed Jul 27, 2016 2:11 pm

~Yugeton • Steam Whale
S-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will hold the last one then form a massive killer whale, around 20 meters long and 10 meters wide at it's thickest point. As long as they hold the seal, for up to 4 posts, the user can move the whale around at a speed of 35. The whale's tale can (it's back end) can't be more than 10 meters from the user. This massive creature will impact with 35 strength and cause third degree burns on contact with flesh.

Should be

~Yugeton • Steam Whale
S-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will hold the last one then form a massive killer whale, around 20 meters long and 10 meters wide at it's thickest point. As long as they hold the seal, for up to 4 posts, the user can move the whale around at a speed of 35. The whale's tail can't be more than 10 meters from the user. This massive creature will impact with 35 strength and cause third degree burns on contact with flesh.

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Post by Zangy » Wed Jul 27, 2016 9:41 pm

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Should probably have the required concentrations in the nocode, like other styles do.
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Post by FluffyGinja » Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:59 pm

Fixed those two, still waiting on opinions for the others. I will get to them as soon as I can and if I don't get anymore opinions, I'll simple make a call.
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Post by Zangy » Thu Jul 28, 2016 12:06 am

viewtopic.php?&t=5927814/1/#new
Doesn't really say how puppets can gain more stat points outside of ranking up.

viewtopic.php?&t=5927814/1/#new < should include a puppet template
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Post by Zangy » Thu Jul 28, 2016 2:00 am

viewtopic.php?&t=5922332/1/ The concentration has a typo in the very last sentence.
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Post by Director » Thu Jul 28, 2016 1:34 pm

Everything except Zangy's last two posts have been discussed, changed, and fixed. If your question was not answered please feel free to PM me or another Mod for confirmation on what was agree'd on, or for an answer.
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Post by Zangy » Thu Jul 28, 2016 5:18 pm

viewtopic.php?&t=?p=2066199&t=5927814

All jutsu performed via a human puppet takes stamina from the puppeteer, as he puppet no longer has any stamina stat.


Human Puppetry
Having educated themselves in the human body, the user has learned how to control the human body through Kugutsu. Additionally, they have learn how to transform a dead body into a puppet, retaining it’s unique concentrations from when they were still alive.

^should also say abilities.
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Post by Niro » Thu Jul 28, 2016 8:26 pm

*Katon • Torch
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will exhale a small jet of flame directly in front of them. The ball lights up the surrounding area in a 5 meter radius and has a durability of 5. Unless destroyed, it will stay locked in it's location for 5 posts before fading.

da fuq? is it a jet? or a ball?

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Post by Zangy » Fri Jul 29, 2016 9:29 pm

Dunno if it is just hidden or not, but I didn't seem to find any rules for twins.
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Post by Jinan B » Fri Jul 29, 2016 9:33 pm

You can no longer have twins @ Zangy
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Post by Zangy » Fri Jul 29, 2016 9:35 pm

Seems odd.
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Post by Sanjuro » Sat Jul 30, 2016 4:33 pm

viewtopic.php?&t=5937079/1/#new
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~Body Shock
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, and sends forth a pulse of denjiton chakra from their hands that travels at 10 speed. Anyone caught in the denjiton pulse will have sudden full body muscle fatigue and a feeling of nausea and discomfort that lasts for 4 posts.
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Post by Zangy » Sun Jul 31, 2016 4:59 pm

viewtopic.php?&t=?p=1990903&t=5921285

You get an equivalent of +3 boost for a companion losing 2. That isn't really a fair trade, there.
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