Tako

A-Rank Spirit Companion for Zao

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Tako



General Information
Type: Octopus Spirit Companion
Gender: Male
Age: 420
Appearance:
  • Head and Body: The octopus is a rust color over the majority of its body with concentric white rings being spaced across its small body and long arms (tentacles), seeming to be evenly spaced as the rings travel down the limbs. While the underside of the water spirit is a crème color as rows of two suckers can be found starting at the base of the arms where they grow from the body and extending completely down the length of each of the Octopus's arms. The head/body portion of the spirit is around seven meters in length and about four meters thick while from the front portion of the body where two large yellow eyes can be found is where the twenty meter long arms (tentacles) grow from the spirits body.
  • Notable Features:Unique rust color and its concentric white rings.
Personality:
  • General: Inquisitive. This would be the first word to describe the octopus spirit because the spirit companion has spent its entire life sealed within the Juu no Kuni wall as a guardian since it could remember, having developed an innate curiosity about the outside world. Though he lived believing what he'd been told about human, who they were the sole reason he'd been sealed within that place. Yet, even after being defeated and near death it was a human who decided to spare his life and save him in the end. Something that has left him at a place of unsureness about what he'd been told throughout his life. This act has left him completely indebted to the shinobi who then sealed him within a puppet-like body. With his new master and having escaped from the former bonds of imprisonment Tako looks forward to exploring the human world and repaying the human's kindness to him for saving him and taking him out into the real world.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Recovering his original body in the future and repaying Zao for deciding to spare his life. Discovering his home realm and one day returning to that place in search of any family if he has any remaining there.
  • Fears: Dying without being able to return to his home realm.
  • Combat Mentality:The octopus spirit has had to adapt its fighting style a bit after being sealed into the puppet body, focusing on a combination of mid ranged taijutsu and ninjutsu to tie down and overwhelm opponents, using the mechanisms available to the puppet body to gain a surprise upon it's prey.
Battle Information Rank: A Rank
Stats 160/250
  • Ninjutsu: 35
  • Taijutsu: 15
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina: 35
  • Control: 20
  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 19
  • Instinct: 15
Equipment:
Puppet BodyShow
General Info Description: The puppet was based somewhat on the spirit's original octopus appearance except mixed into a humanoid form from Zao. The spirit puppet's upper body appears like a slender suit white and silver armor, the head piece featuring a beastial appearance with a blade like spike protruding upward from the helm's forehead. It has a slender torso with six multi jointed arms that appear human like in nature and from the head to the waist of thr puppet is four feet. From the waist down the puppet body has eight tentacles for legs that are each five meters in total length. The tentacles are around four inches in diameter near the waist of the puppet and taper down to snap long tips. Normal a long hooded robe or coat like article of clothing is worn to conceal the spirit puppet's unique armored body causing it to look hunched over and disproportionate.

Rank: E
Puppet Stats: 4
  • Durability: 1
  • Mobility: 1
  • Strength: 1
  • Deftness: 1
Joruri Stats: 160/250
  • Durability: 10
  • Mobility: 40
  • Strength: 35
  • Deftness: 40
  • Stamina: 35
Total Mechanisms: 3
Mechanisms in Use: [3/3]
Extending Tentacles (1 Mechanism)Show
Description: A mechanism build into the stomach and pelvic region of the octopus puppet that does the additional five meters worth of each tentacle of the puppet allowing for it to extend and retract its legs at a speed equal to the [Deftness] stat of the puppet.
Squid Toothed Suckers (1 Mechanism)Show

Description: A mechanism build into the inner portion of the last three mteres of each tentacle is a series of two to three inch wide toothed suckers (like those found on squid tentacles). These suckers are able to bite into what ever the limb latches onto with a strength equal to the [Strength] stat of the puppet. Allowing for the puppet to tear or rip pieces of flesh from a target's body.
Spirit Core (1 Mechanism)Show
Description: A heart sized core contained the sealed spirit, this is housed within the chest cavity of the puppet and has a durability equal to the [Stamina] stat of the spirit sealed within it. This turns the puppet into a Joruri allowing the spirit to fully control the puppet as though it was its own body.
Fuuin Inscribed on Puppet:
  • [Fuuinjutsu • Strength of Steel] - Located on puppet's upper back.
  • [Tsukimogami: Living Puppet] - On the spirit core located inside the puppet, containing the spirit of the octopus.
  • [Fuuinjutsu: Marked in Space] - Located on the back of the puppet's head
  • [Fuuinjutsu • Life Line] - One the forearm of each arm.
Tsukimogami Sealed into the Puppet Body:
Elemental Affinities: Suiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Coming Soon:
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Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Suiton, Doton, Sticky Ink ]
Taijutsu[Close Quarter Combat, ]
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
InkShow
Sticky Ink Style:
A ninpou style of ink that is created through fusing of the two elements of Doton and Suiton, causing this octopus' ink to have a natural sticky passive.
Passive (Sticky Ink)Show
Tako's ink is a suiton and doton based type of ink, which causes for the ink to passively attempt to envelop and cling on to what ever it come into contact with 1/2 the strength of the technique used.
Ink Style • Spike
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before creating a half meter long, one inch thick spike of ink in front of them. This spike is then fired with a strength of 5 and speed of 5 for up to ten meters away. These spikes, whether they impale or miss, revert back into a tiny puddle of ink after two posts.

Ink Style • Shield
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before expelling ink from their mouth which forms into a two meter by two meter sized wall shape before them. This wall forms with a speed of 4 and has as strength of 6. Once destroyed or after three posts, the shield reverts back into a puddle of ink.

Ink Style • Tools
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before creating up to ten kunai out of ink, five per hand, which can then be thrown by the user. These ink weapons have no true striking force and return to ink upon impact but cling to whatever they splatter against with a strength of five. The tools will remain in the shape of kunai for three posts.

Ink Style • Small Fountain
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before exhaling a conical spray of ink from their mouth at a speed of nine and strength of one. This spray extends outwards up to ten meters and has a width at the end of four meters. This ink will retain the user’s chakra for up to three posts after use. This technique is mainly used to cover an unsuspecting target or the immediate area in ink for follow on techniques.

Ink Style • Small Bubble
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before exhaling a one foot diameter bubble of ink from their mouth towards a target moving at a speed of five. Upon impact or when willed the ink bubble with explode with the force of a D-rank explosion (5 Strength) covering a one meter area around the explosion in sticky ink. La


Ink Style • Binding Chains
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal creating up to five, ten meter long chains of ink to lash out and bind a target. This may also be used with existing ink puddles on the battlefield within twenty five yards of the user that were created within the last four posts. These chains move at a speed of 8 and bind with a strength of 12. These chains will remain until broken or for six posts, at which point they will return to puddles of ink.

Ink Style • Impaling Spike
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming hand seals, the user channels their chakra into their ink within twenty five meters, causing for the ink to form a powerful spike of ink (size dependent on the amount of ink) which attempts to impale a target with a speed of two and strength of eighteen. This impaling spike will retain its form for three posts if not destroyed before reverting back to normal ink.

Ink Style • Basic Assassin’s Armor
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming hand seals, the user will either use existing ink or create ink that will spiral around and coat their body in a thin layer of ink, creating a shinobi style armor that protects the body while not inhibiting movement or weapons pouches. The layer of ink will form at a speed of five and strength of fifteen, lasting for up to five posts before reverting back into a puddle of normal ink. When the user strikes a target or a target strikes them ink from the armor will transfer to the target which can then be used with other techniques.

Ink Style • Small Wave
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before exhaling a small wave of ink from their mouth five meters in width and five meters in height as it pushes across the ground for up to twenty meters before turning into a large puddle of ink. Able to move with a speed and strength of ten, chakra remains within the ink for up to four posts after its use.

Ink Style • Stick Ink Pool
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seals, the user will cause for a puddle of existing ink (no more than ten meters in size) to gain a sticky property allowing for it to capture anything that touches it. Requiring strength greater than ten in order to be able to break free from the stick ink, lasting for four posts, the user must be in contact with the ink pool/puddle for this technique to work.


Ink Style • Bubbles
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before exhaling five, one meter diameter bubbles of ink from their mouth towards a target moving at a speed of ten traveling for up two twenty five yards from the user. Upon impact or when willed the ink bubbles with explode with the force of a C-rank explosion (10 strength) each covering a two meter area around the bubble in ink.

Ink Style • Seeping Within
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming a series of hand seals, the user causing all their ink on a target's body to attempt to force itself into either open a open wound or wounds on the foes body or through their natural orifices at a speed of 10 and strength of thirty. This allows them to use follow on techniques to attack the opponent internally. This ink retains the user's chakra for five posts.

Ink Style • Death From Within
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 24 Ninjutsu
After managing to get some of their ink within the body of the user will form an additional hand seal causing for that ink to expand into a series of spikes that constantly expand and retract from within the target's body over the next three posts causing potentially major internal or fatal injuries. These spikes expand and retract at a speed of eight and a strength of forty.

Ink Style • Rising Ink Pool
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before sending chakra into the ground causing for a pool of ink to seep up through the ground in a twenty meter radius of the user at a speed of twenty, having a sticky property that is able to hold anyone, including the user if they touch the pool, in place requiring the target have greater than twenty strength to pull free. The sticky aspect of the ink pool last for five posts before the pool reverts into normal ink.

Ink Style • Death Prison
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 24 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user is able to focus on an area of existing ink within thirty meters of themselves that has been created within the last six posts, normally under a target or in their path, causing an area of four meters to become a trap. When activated by the user or touching the trapn the ink will burst upwards attempting to envelop a target at a speed of twenty and a strength of twenty eight. Should this strike the target, they will become engulfed within the ink. The target can resist being enveloped and escape the ink’s grasp if they have a strength higher than twenty eight. The trapped targets will become trapped in the ink which forms into a sphere last up to five posts. Targets trapped within the ink with less than twenty stamina will suffocate and die if unable to escape within the four posts.


Ink Style • Binding Hands of Death
A-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
If the user gets some of their ink on the opponent, they can do a series of hand seals to cause the ink to surge up to the opponent's body wrapping around them to restrain the upon as they attempt to grasp their neck, forming a choker around them. The ink moves at a speed of twenty and squeezes their body and neck with thirty strength. The technique lasts for 5 posts unless destroyed, if the victim is caught and has a stamina stat less than thirty they will fall unconscious after five posts of being choked, those with less than fifteen strength will be choked unconscious in three posts.

Ink Style • True Assassin’s Armor
A-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 30 Ninjutsu
Forming hand seals, the user will either use existing ink or create ink that will spiral around and coat their body in a three inch layer of ink, creating a shinobi style armor that protects the body while not inhibiting movement or access to weapons pouches. The layer of ink will form at a speed of ten and strength of fifty, separated from the user's actual body by layer of chakra to keep the user from succumbing to their own technique. This technique lasts for up to nine posts before reverting back into a puddle of normal ink and loosing its armor form. When the user strikes a target or a target strikes them ink from the armor will transfer to the target which retains a sticky strength of fifty for two posts after and can be used with other ink techniques.


Ink Style • Reaper
S-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming a set of hand seals, the user will cause ink to form and rise off their hands which quickly forms into a two meter tall ghost like creature with a cloaked appearance leaving only two ghoulish looking inky black hands exposed and only an a wispy lower half that can coil around things, if need. The ghost can hover to a maximum two meters above the ground. The Reaper is capable of performing any of their creator's S-Rank or lower jutsu.
Taijutsu: 10
Stamina: 45
Speed: 20
Strength: 10
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History Tako was born in an ocean filled spirit realm with very little actually land above the surface of the water, it was here that the seemingly ordinary spirit would begin to slowly grow in strength as spirits tended to progress slower than their human counter parts but they also have much, much longer life spans. It was around the age of twenty that the little spirit was abducted from its home world by a small group of mysterious humans who brought him back into the human realm. There he was subjugated and imprisoned within the interior maze located within a gigantic defensive wall built around the country of Juu no Kuni. It was here that the creature would spend the next three centuries slowly increasing its power with the thought of one day escaping the confines of this prison that he was suppose to help guard.

That one day came one day with a pair of young men managed to infiltrate the defensive maze and even made it onto the fifth level, the floor himself and another spirit were instructed to guard. At first this was simply a way to express all the pent up rage and anger of being imprisoned against his will in this place such a long period of time. He even managed to severely injury one of the men, tearing off his limbs, but never would he have expected that the other figure possessed such a level of power that he was easily defeated. Himself injured to the point that he believed that only death awaited but in the end the man saved him by sealing him away. Later the man he came to know only as 'Zao' would use rather strange methods that he'd only seen before with the mysterious Juu countrymen to bind him to a spirit core of a puppet.

This happened because his true body was injured to such a state that not even the powerful figure could heal him, the only path to continue living was to have himself become a Joruri, under the service of the man, it was like freedom when compared to where Tako had come from being imprisoned within the labyrinth. He would soon find out that their were several strong spirits under the man's service...he looked forward to learning more about his mysterious master of his and the places that he'd end up travel to while following him. Just what was this so called human world really like? He was rather curious for this answer...
Last edited by Zao on Fri Jun 28, 2019 6:07 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Post by Zao » Thu May 30, 2019 8:19 pm

Used the spirit's equipment points to buy the puppet and two additional mechanisms, this spirit has already been earned just been a bit lazy getting around to writing him up.
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Post by Varian » Sat Jun 01, 2019 2:10 pm

Ink Style • Stick Ink Pool -> Requires a size cap for rank.

Ink Style • Bubbles -> change force of C-Rank explosion to the actual numerical value of strength of the explosion
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Post by Zao » Sat Jun 01, 2019 10:28 pm

Fixed
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Post by Varian » Wed Jun 05, 2019 10:44 am

Ink Style • Spike -> All units of measurement for ninjutsu must be in meters or in this case Centermeters just use online conversion.

Ink Style • Small Bubble -> Same as the other explosive technique need the numerical strength
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Post by Zao » Wed Jun 05, 2019 3:51 pm

Edited
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Post by Rain21199 » Wed Jun 05, 2019 5:13 pm

You can't have their name be Taco and their age 420. Pick one or the other.
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Ink Style • Binding Chains
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal creating up to five, ten meter long chains of ink to lash out and bind a target. This may also be used with existing ink puddles on the battlefield within twenty five yards of the user. These chains move at a speed of 8 and bind with a strength of 12. These chains will remain until broken or for six posts, at which point they will return to puddles of ink.
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Ink Style • Death Prison
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 24 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user is able to focus on an area of existing ink within thirty meters of themselves, normally under a target or in their path causing an area of four meters to become a trap. When activated by the user or stepped upon the ink will burst upwards attempting to envelop a target at a speed of twenty and a strength of twenty eight. Should this strike the target, they will become engulfed within the ink. The target can resist being enveloped and escape the ink’s grasp if they have a strength higher than twenty eight. The trapped targets will become trapped in the ink which forms into a sphere last up to four posts. Targets trapped within the ink with less than twenty stamina will suffocate and die if unable to escape within the four posts.
For both of these, they have in common the fact that you are doing things with existing ink pools. Now it would make sense to do it remotely if your chakra was still infused in the puddle. If you plan on making more jutsu of this type, it might be more beneficial to state somewhere how long your chakra stays in the puddles after the techniques are over. Preferably with the passive or just have the techniques themselves state something along the lines of "...only usable with puddles created within x posts"
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Ink Style • Stick Ink Pool
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seals, the user will cause for a puddle of existing ink (no more than ten meters in size) to gain a sticky property allowing for it to capture anything that touches it. Requiring strength greater than ten in order to be able to break free from the stick ink, lasting for four posts.
Add that the user has to physically touch the puddle
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Ink Style • Seeping Within
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming a series of hand seals, the user causing all their ink on a target's body to attempt to force itself into either open a open wound or wounds on the foes body or through their natural orifices at a speed of 10 and strength of thirty. This allows them to use follow on techniques to attack the opponent internally.
Add a duration
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Ink Style • Rising Ink Pool
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before sending chakra into the ground causing for a pool of ink to seep up through the ground in a twenty meter radius of the user at a speed of twenty, having a sticky property that is able to hold anyone except for the user in place requiring the target have greater than twenty strength to pull free. The sticky aspect of the ink pool last for five posts before the pool reverts into normal ink.
It has to affect the user as well. You can't just have it not work on you.
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Ink Style • Binding Hands of Death
A-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
If the user gets some of their ink on the opponent, they can do a series of hand seals to cause the ink to surge up to the opponent's body wrapping around them to restrain the upon as they attempt to grasp their neck, forming a choker around them. The ink moves at a speed of twenty and squeezes their body and neck with thirty strength. The technique lasts for 5 posts unless destroyed, if the user has a stamina stat less than thirty they will fall unconscious after three posts being choked, those with less than thirty strength will be choked to death in three posts.
The stat check on this is a little rough in my opinion. I'd prefer you to switch it to less than 30 stamina gets knocked unconscious in three posts and suffocates in 5 and less than 15 stamina suffocates in 3. Something like that.
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Ink Style • True Assassin’s Armor
A-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 30 Ninjutsu
Forming hand seals, the user will either use existing ink or create ink that will spiral around and coat their body in a three inch layer of ink, creating a shinobi style armor that protects the body while not inhibiting movement or access to weapons pouches. The layer of ink will form at a speed of ten and strength of fifty, lasting for up to eight posts before reverting back into a puddle of normal ink. When the user strikes a target or a target strikes them ink from the armor will transfer to the target which can then be used with other techniques. Additionally, the user can will spikes, two feet in length, to shoot out from any point on the armor with ten speed at any time they please, striking with fifty strength before receding back into the armor.
The random spikes on this is a major no go from me. You can make it a separate jutsu however.
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Post by Zao » Thu Jun 06, 2019 6:46 pm

Lol. ;)

For the first two, I was thinking that they'd be used on pools of ink like suiton is on puddles of existing water by channeling additional chakra into them.

Edited the others like you asked. Thanks for checking over this.
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Post by Rain21199 » Fri Jun 07, 2019 10:19 am

How dare you question my corrections!

Just kidding. I don't see any suiton techniques in the archives that work off of existing water. In order to mold something like ink, your Chakra has to be inside of it. Naturally when you create an element it has your Chakra but that doesn't last forever.

If you have any examples of suiton jutsu that actually utilize puddles of water please show me. Otherwise I'd prefer if you went along with the edit I suggested
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Post by Zao » Fri Jun 07, 2019 11:27 pm

Edited
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Post by Rain21199 » Tue Jun 11, 2019 5:20 pm

This looks good. 1/2
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Post by Zao » Thu Jun 13, 2019 4:55 pm

Thanks for the look
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Post by Varian » Fri Jun 28, 2019 7:24 am

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Ink Style • Reaper
S-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Forming a set of hand seals, the user will cause ink to form and rise off their hands which quickly forms into a two meter tall ghost like creature with a cloaked appearance leaving only two ghoulish looking inky black hands exposed and only an a wispy lower half that can coil around things, if need. The ghost can hover to a maximum two meters above the ground. The Reaper is capable of performing any of their creator's S-Rank or lower jutsu.
Taijutsu: 10
Stamina: 45
Speed: 20
Strength: 10
How do we mean ghost like? Are we saying these creatures are entirely corporeal or is this just a cosmetic thing? because these should be able to be damaged like any other ink construct is why I ask.

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Ink Style • True Assassin’s Armor
A-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 30 Ninjutsu
Forming hand seals, the user will either use existing ink or create ink that will spiral around and coat their body in a three inch layer of ink, creating a shinobi style armor that protects the body while not inhibiting movement or access to weapons pouches. The layer of ink will form at a speed of ten and strength of fifty, lasting for up to nine posts before reverting back into a puddle of normal ink. When the user strikes a target or a target strikes them ink from the armor will transfer to the target which retains a sticky strength of fifty for two posts after and can be used with other ink techniques.
Sticky passive is written as 1/2 strength of technique used which is right but in this jutsu you have given it full sticky strength
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Ink Style • Death Prison
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Requirement: 24 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user is able to focus on an area of existing ink within thirty meters of themselves that has been created within the last six posts, normally under a target or in their path, causing an area of four meters to become a trap. When activated by the user or touching the trapn the ink will burst upwards attempting to envelop a target at a speed of twenty and a strength of twenty eight. Should this strike the target, they will become engulfed within the ink. The target can resist being enveloped and escape the ink’s grasp if they have a strength higher than twenty eight. The trapped targets will become trapped in the ink which forms into a sphere last up to five posts. Targets trapped within the ink with less than twenty stamina will suffocate and die if unable to escape within the four posts.

Ink Style • Rising Ink Pool
B-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
The user formers hand seal before sending chakra into the ground causing for a pool of ink to seep up through the ground in a twenty meter radius of the user at a speed of twenty, having a sticky property that is able to hold anyone, including the user if they touch the pool, in place requiring the target have greater than twenty strength to pull free. The sticky aspect of the ink pool last for five posts before the pool reverts into normal ink.
Does these technique include the passive, in that case how does the interaction with that passive work?

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Also your armour techniques need to form a few inches away from the skin because we do not allow immunity to your own passives anymore.
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Post by Zao » Fri Jun 28, 2019 6:05 pm

Reaper - It is indeed just a cosmetic thing. They function just like any other clone just able to hover a bit off the ground for the ghost-like effect.

Armor - The ink would only have the fully strength for the duration of the jutsu then the ink would revert back to the normal passive. I'll edit in the spacing needed between the skin and the ink.


Rising and Prison - I was thinking the same thing for these two like the Armor, for the post count the ink's stickiness is increased but then falls back to 1/2 the techniques strength at the end of the technique's post count.
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